Build (new!) Epic Kangaoo Organc L Ensane Minecraft Build

Hey guys! I am back again with another build, this build was inspired by Pearlescent moon and her awesome organics. So I decided to have a go at one myself :3 . Today I'll be showing off an organic that I completed a few days ago, this is my kangaroo organic and it took around 7 tries to perfect the coloring and 2 times to complete the body shape. I learned alot through this build, but this is acturlly my very first time building an organic! I am super open to advice and criticism because as I have said, this is my first organic and I still have a lot to learn.
See yall in the comments ;D

Based off the Eastern gray kangaroo (*whispers* cus orange was too hard to do T_T)
See picture... V RIGHT DOWN HERE V


If you guys want to see this build in first person, you know the drill, It's on Builders Refuge. PM me on the discord or fourms. my username is Qulaey on the discord server and yeah. Have a nice day :D

BTW soz for click b8 XD

 

https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/how-to-apply-for-the-official-wynncraft-content-team.89144/ -> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PDRye79AM3DFZ6y00pW2g1ZBmlkbJ_8v_dCJM9LkeTM

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Ok but for real, that looks real hot! Good job on that :D

 

Okay so I brought up a real life image of the same type of kangaroo up and here's what I can say:

One place you could improve on is the joints of the animal. Circled in red, the thigh part of the kangaroo could use some work. There's a bone that sticks out in the real photo but in the build, there's no indication of one. This makes the leg look more like a stick rather than a leg. You could add slight bends in the leg to make it look like it actually has some joints.

I also noticed that the foot looks kind of weird in your build. There's a strange part of the foot that sticks out on the back, but in the picture there is no such thing.

Circled in blue is the arms, this is a very minor mistake and could be ignored, but on the upper part of the upper part of the arm it gets more thicker as there is more meat surrounding it. In your build there isn't much meat around it. Again, it makes it look more like a stick rather than arms.

Overall, this is a pretty good build, but there are some minor mistakes that weight it down.

 

thanks bro! small details like these really count so thanks!

 

ill keep you posted on any new changes that I do to the build.

 

XD I was being flamed on the BR server by other gods of organics.

 

Euxis pretty much mentioned everything I'd say, so I won't say too much about it there. :P The neck to me does also feel a little skinny, but otherwise
Happy to inspire as well, glad you're giving organics a go!

 

Yeah, pearl your right! The neck does look bit too skinny. I'll work on making a bit more T H I C C er. It's always good to have a second pair of eyes when building. :D Glad you like everything else.

 

dude thats a giraffe

 

Believe it or not ur not the first one to say that XD. People on the BR server also thought it was a reign deer, a mouse, a rabbit, a mutated elf and a snake with a goat's head. that swallowed 2 rocks and some branches. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

update :3

 

I like the texture <3

 

learned from the best (っ˘ڡ˘ς)

 

the texturing in the second photo needs work. especially on the legs and in the upper body