The Swordsman/samurai Class

Alright here is my Class idea. Please view it and I wont mind help. It probably wont be accepted but hey, its an idea. Also, I am not the greatest with numbers, so everything might either seem OP or sucks, so if needed, please help me out and we can agree with what is needed to be nerfed or buffed. It would be even better if we made weapons!

Oh yeah the reason why there are two posts of this is so that one stays in Your Work so it reminds people that it is my work and progress. I didn't think of everyone when I made this, I just made this because it was fun and enjoyable. Even though sometimes it is a bit tough, you have to ride it out. Anyway if this is a problem that the same thing is in two different threads, I can remove this one. Thank you for your time.

Oh yeah and people told me to put this in Suggestions, so here it is I guess.

Here it is!
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Swordsman (Samurai)
A patient mind and body can see the way to victory. The swordsman uses their polished techniques to gain the advantage over their opponents. From their techniques they can do things that even confuses the most keen of eyes. Although not the best, they shouldn't be underestimated.

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Stats:

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Throwing the player's sword damaging those in a straight line as it returns.
Sword Toss/Ghost Sword
Grade: I (Lv. 1)
[Right-Left-Right]
-Hunger: 6
-Damage: 160%
❋ 30%

Sword Toss/Ghost Sword
Grade: II (Lv. 16)
[Right-Left-Right]
-Hunger: 6
-Damage: 160%, 25% when it comes back.
-+Hits again when sword comes back.
❋ ❉ 30%

Sword Toss/Ghost Sword
Grade: III (Lv. 36)
[Right-Left-Right]
-Hunger: 6
-Damage: 160%, 30% through each enemy, 25% when it comes back.
-+Sword hits multiple enemies when thrown, only hits one when coming back.
❋ ❉ 30%

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Makes the player leap in one direction.
Slashing Leap/Bladed Jump
Grade: I (Lv. 11)
[Right-Right-Right]
-Hunger: 4

Slashing Leap/Bladed Jump
Grade: II (Lv. 26)
[Right-Right-Right]
-Hunger: 4
-Damage: 120%
-+Cut, stuns enemies dealing 80% damage.
✦ 30%

Slashing Leap/Bladed Jump
Grade: III (Lv. 46)
[Right-Right-Right]
-Hunger: 3
-Damage: 135%
-+Aerobatics slashes at the end as well causing another stun.
✦✹ 35%

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The player strikes the ground causing it to be destroyed attacking those around them.
Power Slash/Sword Strike
Grade: I (Lv. 21)
[Right-Left-Left]
-Hunger: 7
-Damage: 270%
✤✦ 15%

Power Slash/Sword Strike
Grade: II (Lv. 36)
[Right-Left-Left]
-Hunger: 7
-Damage: 270%, 5% ever half second.
-+Ground Crumble, slows enemies by 10%
✤ 20%✦ 15%

Power Slash/Sword Strike
Grade: III (Lv. 56)
[Right-Left-Left]
-Hunger: 7
-Damage: 270%, 10% every half second.
-+Ground Breakage, slows enemies by 15%
✤ 25%✦ 20%

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Clearing the player's mind and body to make the player stronger.
Sharpened Sword/Striking Sword
Grade: I (Lv. 31)
[Right-Right-Left]
-Hunger: 7
-+5% to Critical strike chance, 1 minute.

Sharpened Sword/Striking Sword
Grade: II (Lv. 46)
[Right-Right-Left]
-Hunger: 7
-+10% to Critical Strike chance, 1 minute.

Sharpened Sword/Striking Sword
Grade: III (Lv. 66)
[Right-Right-Left]
-Hunger: 6
-+15% Critical Strike chance, 2 minutes
-+10% chance to blindness, 1 minute.
-+Blindness stays for 3 seconds.

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SPECIAL THANKS TO
PyrusXross
FafnirKnightNoah
Pepo the Popo
Flare2B
[Insert more people's names here.]
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Updates:
9/27/17: Thread created.
9/28/17: Getting Team together to help out.
10/2/17: Changed Mind Clear to Sharpened Sword. Stats have been changed too.
10/4/17: Updated Sharpened Sword. Now it has minutes.
10/5/17: Making more detailed list and thread, may take a few days.
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new classes wont be added

 

I am aware. Please read the first paragraph.

 

If you had read, then you would have seen that I said it basically won't be accepted.

 

This has promise, but it is far from complete

+Add melee attack style and range
+Add particle effects to attacks
+Add sounds
+Add custom weapons
+Make some on the spells more clear on how they work(Ahem Slashing Leap)

Just to name a few. Good start though

 

This really seems like warrior IMO.
First spell feels like uppercut without sending the mobs flying in the air.
Second spell is basically charge.
Third spell is the bash.
Fourth spell is basically a war cry but for crit chance...

 

That is one of the problems I have been encountering. Swordsman is supposed to be independent class just like Warrior but not really following the same aspect. This is very hard to do and hard to achieve due do many classes already claiming so much.

The First Spell I would say is a combo of Bomb Arrow and Uppercut.
The Second Spell does seem like it but I meant as more of an Escape and Charge coming together.
The Third Spell is a mixture of both Meteor's Flames and Warrior's Bash but doesn't get the second bash, only the terrain.
The Fourth Spell in my opinion seems a lot more like Assassin and Warrior together.

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Yeah, this is the preview of it when you go into the Home Page and go to Help and Classes, that is what I was more aiming for. A more completed thing will be dealt with a seperate thread. A more detailed oriented. I am still expecting some help but not that much due to me not being the most communicative.

 

Assassins already use sword-like weapons (air, fire, and rainbow dagger skins).

 

Honestly they really shouldn't due to their specialty being Daggers. Not swords. But every class has a weapon that looks like another weapon from another class.

 

gove me a bow, wand, or spear that looks like they belong to another class

 

I used to have an assassin item that had a weapon that looks as if it belongs to a warrior

 

You need to add the "Spells" rating to the stats section (all points should add to 13)

The mana consumption decrease for spells 2 and 4 seems weird, 4-4-3 and
7-7-6? The best way to do is either 3-2-1, 1-2-3 or 2-2-2 (note 1,2 and 3 are example numbers).

What exactly does the stun do in spell 2? Does it freeze them? Do they take poison damage? Under every spell, I know there already is a description for ingame, but have a more indepth one here that tells us what it does.

 

The explanations are the same as the ones you go into Help Class.
A more detailed one will be done soon.
I tried making the spells total as much as the other classes. I only really looked at one but this is a WIP.

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I thank you all for your feedback! It is very lovely and I appreciate it fully!

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I do have other people working with me but it is at my fault that I do not talk to them which I need to improve on. At the moment what you see is MOSTLY based on what I have thought of. Details were helped out by others.

 

Assassin's specialty are short melee weapons (swords, daggers, claws, etc.), not just daggers.

 

True, but I thought of this kinda fits the weapon pentagon in my head. Plus if you have an idea, I say just put it out there. I kept thinking of Swordsman class and I decided to put it out.

 

archangel looks like a warrior weapon such as scythe
stabsand looks like a warrior weapon such as mountain spirit
the skin tearer could be mistooken for a wand maybe
the small wands that look like question marks like the brain smasher could be mistooken as a spear.
the smallest version of fatal could ressemble a dagger or a spear.'
The list goes on and so forth
Bows are obviously easier to distinguish

 

Most of them are hard to believe but possible, there is no way someone has am iq low enough to mistake this one

 

Throatcut is an assassin item that looks like a warrior weapon.

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[Update]
The detailed list of this class will be done by the 13th. This is due to me having to manage my time from school and work.

 

First time back in a while. Time to look at some class ideas.

First, I see a lot of variation and not a lot of innovation. The only somewhat new skill is the sword toss, but it needs more detail. Is it like a boomerang that spins forward then comes back in a line or a curve? If so, whats the range? How fast is it thrown?

You say a leap, so what is the vertical and horizontal displacement? How fast do you expect to move? Teleport speed or escape kind of speed?

The third skill doesn't have much change in the Tier 2 and Tier 3 upgrades. Perhaps change it to something different besides negligible speed difference.

The fourth skill is basically a passive, so it doesn't really matter about the mana cost.
Speaking of mana costs, in general it is not consistent (should be linear).

How does a "stun" affect mobs and how does it affect players, and can it be abused with specific builds?
Can multiple people of this permanently stun-lock mobs and potentially bosses?


Despite these criticisms, I like the neat format and the coloring. You put decent amount of time into this. Just needs some more thinking and polishing and obviously tweaking the numbers (which I didn't comment about). Nice job though

*also your fourth skill doesn't add anything gameplay/skillwise besides boosting stats. So in reality this is a three skill class

 

Please wait until the more detailed list. Remembering this is meant to show as if you went to help class section. But thank you.