The Dark Times Part 1

The dark times is a level 50 quest about Wynn's past.

Before quest:
Awzak : Hello friend. Nice day.
Awzak : and come back at level 50 if you don't mind.
Stage 1

Talk to awzak the wizard on mage island

Awzak: hello friend. What brings you to this great island.
Awzak : an adventurer? Good just who I needed...
Awzak : well we are going to ancient nemract I hope you know were that is.
Awzak: but the question is when? He he he...
Awzak casts a spell and you teleport to old nemract.
Stage 2
Awzak : good we're here.
Awzak : the best bread in the world is made here now.
Awzak : go get me some.
Stage 3
Go buy Awzak 10 bread

Spoiler

buy the bread on the west side of town. It is 1 emerald for 10

Stage 4
Awzak : yum great bread.
Awzak : now we ca-
Nemract guard: run were under attack!
Awzak : well I think it's time to go.
Awzak : no! You will mess with time don't!
Awzak : just jump in this portal.
Nemract citizen: help us!
Jump into the portal or talk to the citizen
Stage 5 choice A
Awzak : good. Now take this.
You receive rewards
Stage 5 choice B
Nemract guard : they have breached the south wall.
Nemract guard : you there! Lead us to battle!

Stage 6
The south area is full of corrupt miners and zombie invaders. You and five nemract guards must kill them. See bottom for mobs.
Stage 7
20 more guards spawn. Corrupt skeletons and dark souls begin to spawn.
Stage 8
Armored citizens begin to spawn. Corrupt warriors, assassins, mages, and archers begin to spawn. Buildings are exploding.
Stage 9
Awzak spawns. Weaker enemies stop spawning.
Stage 10
The dark master spawns. If Awzak is alive the dark master's health is 50% less.
Stage 11
You die if awzak died.
Awzak : we have to go! come on!
You and awzak teleport fowards a year.
Stage 12
Awzak : here plant this sapling.
Awzak : it will help
Stage 13
plant the sapling
Stage 14
Teleport to mage island
Awzak: you did well.
Awzak : take this.
Claim second rewards.

Rewards:
If you left: 60000 xp
If you stayed: 160000 xp 600 emeralds Awzak's robes

Awzak's robe is a legendary level 55 chestplate. It is a quest reward for the dark times part 1

Intelligence +3-8
Spell damage +10%-30%
Mana regen +2/4sec
Soul point regen -12-17%
Strength -4-9

This robe is a great relic of old. It is said to give the wearer control over time.
Untradeable, quest item
Note if you choose to go this will make part 2 much harder


Name: undead miner
Type: zombie
Health: 1170
Damage: 20-200 earth
7-70 neutral
Hostile

Zombie invader
Type: zombie
Health: 2000
Damage: 45-100 neutral
Hostile
Bash spell tier 1

Nemract guard
Health: 500
Damage: 200 neutral
Defense
Charge tier 2 uppercut tier 1


Corrupt Skelton
Health 1000
Damage: 10-70 fire (ranged)
Hostile


Dark soul
Health 10000
Damage: 100-700
Neutral
Heal 3 teleport 3

Armoured citizen
Health 1000
Damage: 7-100 neutral
Defense

Awzak
Health 50000
Damage:100-1000 (mage)
Defense
Heal 3 teleport 3 meatior 3 ice snake 3


The dark master
Health 50000
Dagame: 500-1000 (all)
Hostile
All spell tier 3

I hope you enjoyed my quest I had a good time making it. It is the first in a series. Remember to leave suggestions and constructive criticism

(10 char limit)

 

add more color i cant read this

 

What will the npcs say if you are not high enough level?

 

Fixed that

 

Added poll

 

This is an amazing idea but you need to polish it a bit, I like the idea of going back to ancient nemract to show some lore and story to the player but I feel they seem like robots, Also you need a you need to edit a bit of around 12-14 because it seems unnatural he would plant a sapling for no reason, he says it helps but never tells you why. Next Polishing 6-11 would help, explain where your fighting, how they look, what they do.

I believe with enough fixing up it will be an amazing idea!

 

One thank you
Two the sapling is the tree above the underworld crypt
Thank you again for not hating I will fix this sone

 

you may want to tell them that its the tree above underworld crypt

 

I will be bumping this now

 

Because your poll is biased I'll write it here,

your quest sucks. I mean the idea is nice but the dialogue is bad and the mobs are unbalanced.

Aaaand your spelling.

 

Some issues:

-Having different XP rewards for each ending is problematic. All quests with alternate endings currently in the game are of comparable difficulty, and give the same XP reward. This is made worse by the fact that you have to ignore sensible advice to get the better reward - it would be easy to think that leaving would be the better option.
-Having a defending mob that must stay alive also causes problems if used in a combat segment or something, especially as it has the same health as the boss itself. Damaging Awzak with AOE spells such as Bash, Meteor or Bomb Arrow could be an issue. It's also equally possible that Awzak's spells could kill the player.
-You can't set ID ranges for items. You set a base value, and a random number generator gives it a value from 30% to 130% of this.
-You haven't said what happens if you die in the past. Do you just go back to Mage Island? How do you get back? How much do you need to redo?
-Wynncraft's time travel system, shown in Craftmas Chaos, is a fixed timeline system (think of the third Harry Potter). This quest shows a dynamic timeline, in that you can actually change the outcome of the past. This contradicts existing lore.

 

it dosent fell like a wynncraft quest
there isnt a 'no' option on the poll again

 

i would like to vote but the poll is biased

 

This could be good... But I'm seeing problems first why would Awsac stay if he told you to leave and the amount of my bs spawning might get hectic or kill people with poatatos (computer wise) anyways could be kewl but needs work

 

I agree with these.
All in all, not good.
Don't make a part 2.

 

Cough cough

Nemract is not known for there bread

They are known for their BOOZE BOOZE BOOZE

Part 2. An option to just quit the quest is a fetch quest
I.E. get 10 bread, recieve 60,000! XP!?!?!?!

Awzak cannot have all the spells,

dafaq did the sapling do
Nemrekt has no trees






also add a pool option for:

nu i no liek

 

he is talking about ancient nemract's bigass tree
and actually, there are trees around nemract

 

Make a negative option on the poll, not just "I love it", "I love it and want to see more", "I think it is good", "I think it is sorta good", and "I honestly don't care if this gets added in or not".

Because this quest is pretty bad.
The spelling,
The fact if you travel forward in time, it is a fetch quest,
The dialogue,
And also Azwak himself.

 

I mean super trees
[magic ones]
so the MAGICAL TREE THAT DESTROYED THE CORRUPTION IN NEMREKT

is ontop of the most zombified region in 1000000 blocks

seems legit

 

THE VOTING SYSTEM IS BIASED (CAPS LOCK WAS NOT A MISTAKE)

^^^^ Credit to Hodsonius^^^^
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I can see where you are going with this quest, and it is okay and all, but considering how everything in Wynncraft is set, it would be hard to create a quest like this.

Problems:
1. Wouldn't this change the way Nemcrat is in the future? If so, that would change all the lore, future quests that talk about this, and maybe even how different players see the map.
2. 60K??!?!? 60K FOR JUST FETCHING SOME BREAD????AND THAT, ALL JUST FOR THE PRICE OF 1 EMERALD??? (basically, 60k xp for the loss of 1 emerald) the 160k part seems a bit reasonable though.
3. You are missing some information on how this quest works. For example, how would this change the future (and if it does, don't you think that would be a lot of work for the GM's?). Also, there are a bunch of quests that are based off Nemcrat's lore (maybe not a bunch), so, what would that do.
4. The problem I was mainly trying to get off my chest, that was badly worded in the previous problems: Since there you can just leave, wont that change how it works? For example, if you stay and save Ancient Nemcrat, the whole place would be different (and maybe no current Nemcrat), whereas, if you leave, everything would just be the same.

Sorry if it was hard to understand, I kind of struggle to get my point across so people understand. Anyway...

My suggestion:
As Hodsonius said, make this a fixed timeline quest, and also, don't have two different ways to finish the quest, since the 60k option is waaaaay better.

Thank you, and I hope you use this to fix your "quest".
And also, if you are interested in making quests, go to: https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/how-to-apply-for-the-official-wynncraft-content-team.89144/ , and try to become a part of the GM team!