New Quest

what the fuck is this thread

 

Have you read the asterix comic books?

 

Those are the only good things ;-; (only the old ones till like uh i think 20th comic?) The films that i saw are so bad in comparison D:

 

Yea, and I read them in French so things don't get lost in translation!

 

I cant speak french so that isnt possible for me ;-; howeverrrrr the german translations are genius and abaolutely hilarious. Donald duck pokemon lucky luke and asterix... that was my childhood (and some comic thats called clever&smart in german)
Edit: also on topic if there is any need with translating any detail (if we get some) from german to english i can do that if i have time :p

 

nice a german one here

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thank you maybe I could Need help with my quest

 

I bet these post have more detail than this suggestion

 

look at my new first Suggestion I write the quest in private

 

Alright, you're doing good for a first quest suggestion. You just need to remember something:
Every good quest has a puzzle of some sort, or atleast something interactive.
You should add parkour somewhere, but not any parkour, but unique parkour, something that hasnt happened before. Take Aldoreis Secret II or Ice Barrows Dungeon for example.
You need battle, not too crazy, but not easy. Maybe a bit intense.

 

He added more detail following our posts, before it was just two lines of text.

 

Please proof-read your suggestions. These are a handful of the spelling errors, I haven't even touched on grammar.

Overall, it's better than a lot of quest suggestions I've seen. I would, however, refrain from adding large locations and such to the map. This 'Island of Peace' would take a lot of work to create, and doesn't really add anything unique to the game or lore. I would instead try to set the quest in pre-existing locations, and try to develop and explore existing areas and lore, rather than starting with something entirely new.

Oh, and the Iron Golem NPC makes no sense if you consider the Heart of Iron questline. I would also ask that you change the level to 59, as there are no quests at that level and this would be more useful.

 

I saw that they are no quest for lvl. 56 and sorry for the spelling Errors but the new Island is because there are so many quests on so little space.

 

This sounds like a generic go-get-an-item-for-me quest, with no real story to it. If you were to add a more developed storyline, then it would be OK.

 

Firstly, if you're replying to someone's message, please quote it (click 'reply' on the bottom right-hand corner of the message). This way whoever it is will be notified and we can easily find your reply.

Firstly, consider that Zight Island and Wynnexavation Site C are fairly substantial quests, meaning that you the extent of the level 55 quests means we don't need one at 56. The Passage at 57 is small, and Iron Heart II at 58 (please look at this, it gives the lore of iron golems, which contradicts your Gunny character) isn't enough to sustain you until level 60 when you get Beneath the Depths. The Jungle, Swamp and parts of the ocean cover the mid-50s very well. However in the late 50s quests are stretched a lot more, so 59 would be a better level.

Also, you could really do with going into more detail about this Island of Peace. Where is it on the map? How big is it? What's the terrain like? What buildings are on it? At the moment it seems to me to be very like Alive Island from Haven Antiquity, Zight Island (which has a 'fetch our supplies' sort of quest just one level before this), Rooster Island and the Durum Isles. It won't add anything new to the game, which is sort of essential for any new area. And also - in my opinion, fairly closely concentrated quests are often good, because it means the space is being well used.

Also, please add what happens when you give Winny the apple. What does he say? What is the reward? What do the NPCs say if you talk to them before their main dialogue/after it/after the quest?Bring back the detail on how to get it (copy and paste from someones quote of it). This quest could be great (although please be aware that a quest suggestion has zero chance of actually being added), but it's still far from complete.

 

Fetch quests are completely horrible.

If you compare to some of the other new quests at around that level, than this quest would have hit rock bottom when compared to things like Masterpiece and especially Taproot.

 

did you...

just assume...

my class??!?!?!?!?!

 

No.. When I say warrior I mean adventurer/player.

 

yeah ik i was joking

 

no offense but tbh the quest is pretty bad, also you have a lot of grammar problems and misspells
it doesn't really make sense, as you said the island only has peaceful mobs, and then you said a day later he died. He couldn't have died of starvation as if he was able to make it he would've probably had food, and since it's an island theres water
Also you litteratly JUST changed the name of an entire character, as the golem said his name was frank and you have to go to frank's house, but then you talk to Winny instead...
also if its a lvl 55 island without hostile mobs theres no point of saying it's level 55 because there's no hostile mobs to make it dangerous
and the quest has no challenge to it as it's literately just asking you to go and grab an apple
not to mention since it's the world's biggest apple, it shouldn't be hard to find
since it's an island, there shouldn't be that much to look around, as it's just a small island (if your saying its bigger than corkus than it should have more quests, hostile mobs, and a bigger challenge.(higher level))
the only 2 islands in the entire ocean with forests, which is corkus island and dead island, but they are both high level
A hero wouldn't go out and do someones errands that take 5 seconds to complete
infact only around 5 quest's acctually call the player a hero for there deeds, and let me tell you they are hard quests.
what do u mean by party
you need to have some sort of challenge, rather than some quest that is extremely easy due to a lack of mobs
Here, i will make a quest using your story but changing things up.

Don't you dare change yours to my version
You can change your quest to be similar to mine, but dont just full on copy it, and besides if u do just copy mine i have proof you did it
k here we go
Takes place on Corkus Island
Name: A Troubled Engineer (lvl 92)

Cork [a corkus mech] Hello young adventurer, what brings you to Corkus?
Cork: Hmm... i see, looking for a challenge...
Cork: Recently, a nearby engineer was researching a item of great power.
Cork: However, he has been having trouble
Cork: Go talk to him for details. Don't Worry, he's very nice.

Step 2, go to the engineer

Engineer: no No NO! Ugh, I can't seem to obtain the ultium core
Engineer: Oh, hello, how long have you been here?
Engineer: Cork sent you? Ah, he is a very helpful mech.
Engineer: Either way, i'm trying to obtain a powerful power source
Engineer: The Ultium Core
Engineer: I can't seem to figure out where it is...
Engineer: I heard people in Relos has found it's location
Engineer: Go talk to them, and once you find it, please bring it to me.
Engineer: I have a bit of money i can give you... Oh and this cog too, i heard a friend of mine in Corkus City is looking for those, and he can give you a powerful weapon.
Engineer: Good luck.

Step 3: find someone who knows where the power source is

Billy: Hello... Oh, yes, great way to start a conversation
Billy: Yes i know where it is, however, i can't get past the mech that protects the core
Billy: I would love to have the core, so if you can, please bring it to me
Billy: I can pay you a large sum of emeralds
Billy: Say, about [8192 Emeralds]... Maybe [12288 Emeralds]
Billy: Oh, you wanted to give it to an engineer?...
Billy: Either way, we can go.
Billy: Follow me and ill take you there.

Step 4: Follow Billy

Billy: And were here, i can't go any further... Good Luck
Billy: Also please remember who brought you here when your giving it away.

Step 5: Go deeper in the cavern

Mech-14: TURNING ON
Mech-14: FINDING TARGET...
Mech-14: TARGET LOCATED: SET TO DESTROY
*you here gears turning in the distance*

Step 6: Destroy Mech-14 and obtain the core, than give it to either Billy or the engineer

*if given to Engineer*
Engineer: Oh! Thank you! I can make many more machines now!
Engineer: As promised, take these.
Reward: 4096 emeralds and 1 magical cog, which can be extanged for a powerful weapon

*if given to Billy*
Billy: Even after being sent by the engineer, you still gave it to me?
Billy: Thank you very much! Here take this.
Reward: 12288 emeralds

the quest is similar to yours, but with the aspect of a challenge
now dont copy mine or else

i can actually see how your quest could be like this one
k dont copy just change yours to be similar to mine if u want
just dont copy

either way a fetch quest isnt for higher leveled players
k

 

I know I have to add much Detail that are only the Things I've already wrote and I post it to get an answer about it's a good beginning if I wrote the quest completely I'll add MUCH more Detail and it will have a boss fight and much more. What I post are only the first 2 minutes from something like 30-45 or more and It's ok If you say it's better to do it on lvl. 59 that's why i post it for Feedback like this but the first message had not enough Detail for me to understand.

[I Need the Island of peace because there is no normal forest for something like lvl. 50-60 just nivla Woods]

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That's only the beggining

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Look I wrote it's JUST THE BEGINNING I'll write boos fight's jumpNRuns and much other Things I JUST NEED FEEDBACK but I thank you for your Ideas but I don't think it's a quest good at Corkus Island lvl. 85 so sorry but no I'll write my own quest like I already wrote it and you'll see it will be nice

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please trust me

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pls Just Feedback what I have to Change not something like Write a completly new quest I'm not perfect sorry

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Sorry I was angry I think you didn't meaned so