Quest Out Of My Mind

So while on the Discord server someone brought up that the kids talk too mature. They are just kids and not adults. So I propose their text is changed from this:

• Prentiss: Did ye two hear about some guy wandering around town? I've heard strange rumours about him...
• Todd: Of course I have, he's the talk of the town! I heard he only brushes his teeth once a day and that he enjoys books about gardening!
• Viola: I don't know, you guys, all these rumors seem a little far-fetched. What next? Will he suddenly turn out to be a mad scientist?
• Prentiss: Oh shush you, we're not living inside some storybook! Besides, if he *was* a mad scientist, wouldn't he be trying to take over the city like all mad scientists in stories do?
• Todd: To me that doesn't sound all that strange compared to these other things I've been hearing, anyway... Something about labs and a "hermit".
• Prentiss: I think that's a type of crab or something. Adults are right old weirdos sometimes.
• Viola: Hey, a stranger! How long have you been listening to us? Didn't your mom teach you any manners?
• Prentiss: Wait Viola, this is our chance! This stranger sure seems like they could tackle anything, even evil hermit crabs! We could just ask them to see if these rumours are true!
• Todd: Ignore my friends over there, they're always like that, but what Prentiss said was true. This might be our only chance to really know who this mystery man really is!
• Todd: It might be a good idea to look at that weird house next to those spooky ruins just south-east of the city. We found this key you could try out, but if you lose it there are some spares in our base.

To this:

• Prentiss: Did you two hear about that old man wandering around town? I've heard strange things about him...
  
• Todd: Of course I have, everyone is talking about him! I heard he only brushes his teeth once a day and that he enjoys books about gardening!
• Viola: I don't know you guys, all these rumors seem a little too weird. What's next? Will he suddenly turn out to be a mad scientist?
• Prentiss: Oh quiet you, we're not living inside some fairy tale! Besides, if he *was* a mad scientist, wouldn't he be trying to take over the city like all mad scientists in fairy tales do?
• Todd: To me that doesn't sound all that strange compared to these other things I've been hearing anyway... Something about labs and a crab.
• Prentiss: Adults are old weirdos sometimes so they could be telling lies.
  
• Viola: Hey, a stranger! How long have you been listening to us? Didn't your mom teach you any manners?
• Prentiss: Wait Viola, this is our chance! This stranger sure seems like they could take on anything, even evil mad scientists! We could just ask them to see if these rumors are true!
• Todd: Ignore my friends over there, they're always like that, but what Prentiss said was true. This might be our only chance to really know who this 'mystery person' really is!
• Todd: It might be a good idea to look at that weird house next to those spooky ruins just south-east of the city. We found this key you could try out, but if you lose it there are some spares in our base.

As you can see I'm bad at figuring out how kids talk now a days so this obviously could be changed as how the GM's seem fit.

EDIT: The kids have a bit of text so I'm not going to go and change all of it.
EDIT 2: Changed the color of the changed text. @CookedPelvis

 

Maybe you could change the color of the modified dialogue so we could see what you changed better. Great idea!

 

I'll see what I can do

 

@Pretzule I did what you wanted and did some edits to Out of my Mind

 

I saw it, we're definitely going to make changes to the dialogue but it might not be the changes that you made.

 

Well yeah, it was just to suggest the idea. And now that I know it's being considered, can you lock this?

 

We haven't changed anything yet. After we're done changing it I'll lock it.

 

Alrighty

 

I'd say keep the thing about hermit crabs. It fits in well with them being little kids, they don't understand what a hermit is.

 

Closed on OPs request.