New Quest

SO this quest is called "finding you"
Lv:10
Character name:Jack
Difficulty:easy
Dialogue
1Jack:Hello I need help !
2:I'am growing really old 101 as a matter of fact!
3:I heard in Nivila forest in a cave There is a
fountain
4:It is called the fountain of youth
5:get a magical bucket from my friend Sasos.
6: He lives south east in Nivila forest.
7:And get that bucket and go to the fountain in a cave and bring me back that water please ! I will pay well.
1Sasos:Hey you want a magic bucket get me a bucket and some milk!
2Sasos: you got it great here is your bucket
3Sasos:Tell this to Jack:I do not agree with this he should not live forever because if he drank that water he would feel immortal and would not appreciate people and life but if this is what he wants then okay.
1Jack:Thank you
2Jack:Ohh.. I guess he is right...We where created to live a good positive life not one of power and immorality... we die for a reason.
3Jack: I do not want this water.Thank you for exposing me to reality and logic My time will come but it happens to all of us at some point.Thank you! reward:24 emeralds 2,400exp

 

too much of a fetch quest

 

This is a boring fetch quest that lacks detail, proper grammar, non-monotone dialogue, and any interesting gameplay or story whatsoever.

 

first, jesus that formatting

second, this really reminds me of grand youth, in that:
- there's some sort of ailment you have to cure
- you go to a magical fountain to cure that ailment

except this is about immortality or something

also, fetch quest
low-levels don't have much mobility, so fetch quests are especially bad around that time

 

Mostly what others said, but I like the concept/moral/lesson that the quest would teach

 

Every line I read I feel more and more despair. And why is this quest called "finding you" I never really understood that. alsoallofthedialaugeisgarbageeeeeeee

 

yes. 100% yes. full support.

 

this needs to be added in approximately 356 days

 

There is already a fountain of youth in wynn.

 

This is a joke right?

 

Fetch quests are never a good idea in Wynn.
All this quest is is literally a fetch quest.
You get an item for a guy and give it to him.

 

Where

 

In Dernel jugnle, it's involved in grand youth.

 

Holy crap we all thought you died.

 

Nice grammar.
Snarky comments aside, this is an archetypical fetch quest with a lack of a proper idea behind it. The only positive notion is a decent moral, but a moral is completely irrelevant to the quality of a quest/movie/game/episode/book. Re-write the quest with more than just a moral in mind. Lvl. 10s don't need another annoying fetch quest.

 

Really oh I totally forgot
Thx for reminding me