New Province - Rizua ( Redone )

**I know that this will be rejected, I wrote it for the fun of it.

So yeah. I made a thread earlier that was way to undetailed but people seemed to like it so im going with v2. A more detailed version.
Also, this is balanced around lv 90-120 (If levels are ever increased)

Spoiler: Disclaimer not many people understand

I ALREADY FCKIN KNOW THIS WILL BE REJECTED U WROTW IT FOR THE FUN OF IT

Spoiler: Lore

Spoiler: Past

[After a human colony discovered Jofash Docks, a fraction of them have found a cave leading into a mountain. Upon entering, its tracks seemed endless, as there was no light and it was a days journy to cross. But not till they were about to turn back, they saw a light from a land not on the maps, a land they called Rizua.
After they have completely mapped out the land, they had set up a stable government, and a stable economy. The land was fertile, and the mountains were rich in minerals.
The humans mined and mined, farmed and farmed, as they were very productive. But one day they mined to far as they reached Molten Heights. Here, they were prohibited. They were no allowed in that land. Then, the dwarves, being law abiding people, have forced the people out. Soon they found an opportunity as their hearts darkened.
The dwarves entered the land of Rizua and established a city in the northern part, divided by 2 cliffs from the south. They enslaved the humans of the north and took over the kingdom. Over time, hope faded for the humans. About 20 years ago, there wasnt any at all. The forests began to cry, and the land became barren. Fruitful fields became barren. The north was now just a dusty plain.
As for the south, not enslaved by selfish dwarves, fought its own depression. A crater, once filled with 4 peaceful castles, became a warzone over disagreements on what to do with the north. The castles began to fight, until the land cried from the blood of the soldiers, and gave up. The land produced no life, and soon the citizens of the 4 castles died of hunger, one by one.
The middle remained fertile, and prosperous, as the humans dressed the forests. There is no need for law, as everyone there is kind to one another.

Spoiler: Present

The forgotten cave has been rediscovered, and fruman soldiers are being sent to help the fellow humans in need! The dwarves remain slave owners, and are ignorant to our laws, as they claim "We were here first". They are enemies o the humans, and will not be tolerated. There is much to rebuild, and soon the land is renewed, it will be the beautiful place it used to be.

Spoiler: Areas

Spoiler: Morinir Crater

This crater is a desolate land, with the youngest trees being 300 years old, rotting from the blood of its old inhabitants. No one knows who used to inhabit the land, except the clue of 4 castles that contains clues of what happened. The libraries are empty, so learning the history will be a tough challenge.

** The castles are designed to be a mystery players will spend alot of time on.

Spoiler: Lake Hizani

This lake is inhabited by chrystal fish and glistens with pure water. It is by far the most beautiful place, and many dream to see it with their own eyes, but doubt it. There isnt much but water and very expensive hotels.

Spoiler: Royal and Resting Forest

The royal forest is a forest with living trees who move and talk. It is named the royal forest, as only royalty may enter it (Until the fruman soldiers arrived of course). It has odd rock formations, and looks pretty cool. The trees sometimes move, but not often, as they only move when there is an enemy that wakes them up.

The resting forest is the same. but it hasnt moved for 550 years since the mourning forest died. The resting forest only spends its time crying for its lost sister (the mourning forest).

Spoiler: The Mourning Forest

Also known as the Resting Forests Sister, this forest is where the humans placed the dead. Over time, the forest seemed to decay (As in loose leaves, not dark decay) and soon stopped reproducing trees. Now they believe the forest will disappear, and with the wood rotting, have no sign of its existence.

Spoiler: Variloc Crack

this is a crack in the ground that doesnt lead to the void, but has a fall so steep that no one has ever survived it (Find a way to make transport spells not immune)

Spoiler: Plains

This is just a grassland, kinda like the emerald trail.

Spoiler: Dead Plains

These plains are just grass, and are kinda like that one mountain region Gondor is in (from LotR)

Spoiler: Mountains

So a rocky mountain chain circles the province. In my mind, it wouldnt have as much snow and would be more steep.

Spoiler: Dead Fields

This is where the slavery was. It should look like it used to be farmland, but then turned to dust, with blood all over it.

Spoiler: Cliffs

These are plain cliffs that divide the north and south. Not much to say. THey should look like those cliffs from that one hogrider commercial (for CoC)

A very detailed map of Rizua: http://imgur.com/a/aBeBt (Much detail)

Spoiler: Cities and Villages

Will be done soon tm

Gorinoc - Kinda like gondor but broken down due to the slavery that took place.
Karzic - A small village that supplies food for almost everyone in the live part.
Rozinton - The capital built in the Royal Forest
Kilorine - a city with a small population, used to be over populated.
Jogik - A village of people who challenged to live in the Morinir Crater
Tarinoc - The dwarven city
Krilge - Where the dwarves ept the slaves
Igasi: And underground community
Gokingor - A village on hill with a palace in the middle.

If I get 20 supporters Ill add mobs.

I am open to suggestions, my idea is for this to be a base that is built off of by the communities ideas to improve the thread

 

Contact me, I want to build it.

 

Theres no problem with that, but it should not be in this section if it is not a legit suggestion. I would have put this in Nemract's bar or Your Work instead.

Also, as you noted but I feel inclined to repeat, the adding of any new province would horribly screw up the existing lore and can't happen

 

With your grammar I really rather not have this be a thing, not only will it look unprofessional, it can also lead to negative connotations for Wynn as a whole, with that being said, It does have potential.

 

How about we start fruma, dern, and corkus first

 

It can happen, you just have to find away around. Thats like saying dern or fruma will end wynncraft because thats 2 new provinces

 

Shouldn't you add the mobs before then in order to get more supporters?

 

ya great idea

________________________________

Im just not determined enough atm

 

Except Dern and Fruma are already incorporated into the lore.

 

but they were after gaveel, they still find ways to add provinces

 

Hey I never said no. I completely support this, so just add details.

 

Wynncraft's lore has been entirely based around the four provinces. They are mentioned in many sources throughout Wynn and Gavel. Rizua isn't.

 

But my point is they werent originally

 

So you're suggesting they somehow insert a new province into the existing lore? Fruma and Dern were created to fill the gaps in Wynn lore. The cup's full now, no need to make it overflow.

 

I know that it doesnt have good grammer, but its not like grian is gonna copynpaste this into the game

________________________________

Thats why we are adding a new cup.

 

By that logic you want to make a new Wynncraft.

 

True, but when a suggestion is higher detailed it has a greater chance to be read through.

 

No, jus a new expansion. Hers the thing. My lore doesnt blow holes into the current lore, so its all fine if we add it

 

Wtf you just copy and pasted what I said to ur thread and added "it does have potential" ???? You have no fucking right to critize someone else's grammar

________________________________

Whats funny is she copy and pasted that paragraph I wrote for her post

________________________________

________________________________

So you want to write a book about this server, and one of the first things you do after the announcement is to plagiarize my words??

 

PurifyX, you don't have to be an ass over a joke. I was going to use the whole thing, but considering I liked his idea, I changed it so I wouldn't be an ass to a random person.

________________________________

Oh speaking of grammar, that whole "paragraph" is a huge run on sentence.

________________________________

Wait, what does that post have to do with anything?