Do-gunning For Trouble Quest Suggestion! 81 Supporters!

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Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Not Started


Talk to Tersyak in Rodoroc at [1048, 25, -5224]

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|- Under Level Dialogue -|

[1/2] Tersyak: I may have a job for you, but you don't quite fit the bill. Come back when you're level 92.


[2/2] Tersyak: Until then you didn't see anything...

|- Under Level Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Start: Stage 1

|- Information -|

Spoiler: Information

An armor stand wearing "Fancy" clothing should be lying on the ground, or up against the wall, it should also be an NPC named: Ambassador Jerald.


I'm not sure how Doguns are supposed to talk so I'm going to go with whatever.


Names are changeable, I know you guys like to use staff, but I don't know many so I'll just use an anagram of my own.

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|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/11] Tersyak: Oh, a human, that makes this so much easier.


[2/11] Tersyak: Now, I know what this looks like, but he’s not dead, just unconscious.


[3/11] Tersyak: He’s the Human Ambassador to the Dwarves.


[4/11] Tersyak: Wait! Before you report me to the guards, at least hear me out.


[5/11] Tersyak: I did this to help all of our kinds.


[6/11] Tersyak: The Doguns want peace!


[The ambassador groans from the corner]


[7/11] Tersyak: This is a bad example…


[8/11] Tersyak: Listen, I can make it worth your while, but it’ll get dangerous if you’re caught.


[9/11] Tersyak: All you have to do is impersonate the ambassador and give this speech.


[Tersyak hands you a few crumpled sheets of paper]


[10/11] Tersyak: You’ll need the ambassador’s seal to certify the speech, and his outfit as a

disguise.


[11/11] Tersyak: Check him while he’s still unconscious.


[New Quest Started: Do-Gunning for Trouble]

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|- New Item -|

Spoiler: New Item

Tersyak’s Speech

A moving speech about making peace.

Quest Item

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Search Ambassador Jerald and take his [Robes] and his [Seal]

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Spoiler: Continue: Stage 2

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[You search the ambassador and take his clothes]


[You continue searching the ambassador, but can’t find the seal]


[You should tell Tersyak]


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- New Item -|

Spoiler: New Item

Ambassador’s Robe


Health: 2000

Fire Defense: +150

Water Defense: -100


Lv. Min: 92


Normal Item

Quest Item

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Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Tell Tersyak you can’t find the seal.

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Spoiler: Continue: Stage 3

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/7] Tersyak: What do you mean he didn’t have the seal.


[2/7] Tersyak: …


[3/7] Tersvak: He was supposed to have the seal.


[4/7] Tersvak: You can’t certify the speech without the seal.


[5/7] Tersyak: I bet he left it in his office when he went out drinking.


[6/7] Tersyak: The ceremony will be starting soon, you may not have time, but you have to try.


[7/7] Tersyak: To get into the palace you need to go to (uhh?). Go down the hall and to the left to reach the office.

[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Enter the palace at (uhh?) and get the seal from the ambassador’s office.

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|- Information -|

Spoiler: Information

I couldn’t find anywhere in Rodoroc to put the palace entrance.

So I’ll just describe an entrance idea to you.

A small circular entrance defended by two guards.

If you try to enter without the robes they’ll tell you. “This area is off limits to civilians.”

Once you enter with the robes it will teleport you to a hallway in the ‘palace’.

You’ll cross a tripwire that initiates a single dialogue with the guards.

At the end of the hallway you can turn left to goto the office, or right to goto the auditorium.

|- Information -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 4

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

(When you activate the tripwire past the guards).

[1/1] Eradian Guard: Oh ambassador! It’s starting, you should go down the hall and to the right, immediately!

[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Turn left and get the seal, or turn right and go straight to the ceremony.

|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 5

Spoiler: Left Turn

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 5, Left Turn

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

(When you enter the office you get frozen, and two armor stand Eradian Guards and an Ambassador Jerald walk in)


[1/3] Ambassador Jerald: They’re the one who robbed me! They’re even wearing my robes!


[2/3] Eradian Guard: What would you like us to charge them with, sir?


[3/3] Ambassador Jerald: They’re obviously just a petty thief. Charge them with assault of a diplomat and larceny!


[The guards lead you away]


[Quest Book Updated]


(At which point you’ll be teleported into a cell in a copy of the Rodoroc dungeons)

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Talk to Tersyak.

|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 6, Left Turn

|- Information -|

Spoiler: Information

The bars and a back wall should be an NPC.


When you right click the wall it will say, “This wall has a loose brick”.


When you right click the bars it will say, “Some sturdy iron bars”.

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|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/6] Tersyak: So you got caught too huh?


[2/6] Tersyak: The ambassador got the jump on me, knocked me out from behind.


[3/6] Tersyak: But it’s okay, I know a way out.


[4/6] Tersyak: My people dug a tunnel to these cells, but the latch is on your side.


[5/6] Tersyak: It’s on a loose brick on that wall, I can’t reach it.


[6/6] Tersyak: Now is our chance, the warden is asleep!


[If you were to escape now, you’d be labeled for life. But if you turn him in, maybe you’ll get points with the guards…]


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Either open the latch and escape with Tersyak, or knock on the bars and wake the warden.

|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 7, Left Turn

Spoiler: Bars

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 7, Left Turn, Iron Bars

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[You knock loudly on the bars]


[1/10] Tersyak: What are you doing?! You’ll wake the warden up!


[2/10] Warden: I’VE GOT A ROYAL FLUSH- Wait, what?


(At this point make some groggy motions with the armor stand, have him stand and walk to your cell)


[3/10] Warden: What is it you thieving scum?


[4/10] Warden: What do you mean a tunnel behind your cell?


[5/10] Tersak: YOU FILTHY TRAI-!


[6/10] Warden: QUIET!


(The warden should enter your cell, and knock on the wall npc area)


[7/10] Warden: You’re right! This area is hollow!


[The warden pulls the latch and the tunnel opens]


(The warden should turn to Tersyak)


[8/10] Warden: I suppose you knew about this. Were probably planning to escape with it too.


[9/10] Warden: You’re going away for a very long time.


[10/10] Warden: Alright, both of you, out of your cells.


(When you walk out of the cell you should be teleported to the real prison, where there’s an NPC version of Tersyak in another cell, and a warden outside your cell)


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Talk to the warden.

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Spoiler: End: Stage 8, Left Turn, Iron Bars

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/4] Warden: Assault of a diplomat and larceny huh?


[2/4] Warden: I get about 3 of those a month.


[3/4] Warden: Normally I don’t do this, but since your charges are minor, and you did the right thing, I’ll let you go.


[4/4] Warden: Here, take the Dogun’s belongings too, he won’t be needing them.


[Quest Completed: Do-Gunning for Trouble]

+2,500,000 Experience

+10,240 Emeralds

+Dogun’s Disappointment

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Wall

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 7, Left Turn, Wall

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[You pull the latch and while opening, the wall makes a grinding noise]


(Real dialogue should start after you enter the black coal block teleporter)


[1/1] Warden: I’VE GOT A ROYAL FLUSH- Wait- HEY! No one escapes my prison!


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Defeat the warden and escape.

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|- Warden Mob -|

Spoiler: Warden Mob

A level 95 “Warden” with a “baton” wand.


85,000 health

Resistance to fire, damage of earth, weakness to water.


Spells: That one move that pulls you to him, and multihit.

|- Warden Mob -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 8, Left Turn, Wall

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

(Beat the warden and exit the tunnel first)


[Quest Book Updated]


(When you exit the tunnel it should take you above the room where the quest started)

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Talk to Tersyak.

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Spoiler: End: Stage 9, Left Turn, Wall

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/4] Tersyak: That was a close one!


[2/4] Tersyak: At least we can use the tunnel again, since the only witness is dead.


[3/4] Tersyak: I know you didn’t complete the job, but I feel like I owe you for all that trouble.


[4/4] Tersyak: It is my fault you got caught, so here.


[Quest Completed: Do-Gunning for Trouble]

+2,500,000 Experience

+10,240 Emeralds

+Label

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Right Turn

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 5, Right Turn

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

(The auditorium should contain a table with two NPCs titled “Dogun’s Speech” and “Dwarf’s Speech”)


[You enter behind the auditorium and a steward beckons you over]


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|


|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Talk to the steward.

|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 6, Right Turn

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/6] Steward: You’re here, just in time.


[2/6] Steward: Oh, you didn’t bring your seal? I’ll send a page to fetch it for you.


[3/6] Steward: Then you can certify our speech!


[4/6] Steward: Oh, you brought your own speech…?


[5/6] Steward: Why don’t you read both speeches while the page gets the seal.


[6/6] Steward: Then you can certify whatever speech you like. But if your speech is bad, you wont get paid.


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Read both of the speeches.

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Spoiler: Continue: Stage 7, Right Turn

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

Spoiler: Dialogue, Dwarf's Speech

(Dwarf’s Speech)


Hello! Hello! Thank you for having me, you’re all great!


I’d like to talk about a problem you guys are having.


The Doguns are a real liability, they could cause a lot of trouble.


Which is why I propose a movement plan!


The Sky Islands are perfect for them, make them a place to stay…


Then cut all their bridges! It’s that simple!


Thank you all for listening! I hope you accept my plan!

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Spoiler: Dialogue, Dogun's Speech

(Dogun’s Speech)


Hello. I’m here to talk about an issue I have. The Doguns.


Now I can’t say a thing about your problems, but I can say this.


What you’re doing is wrong. You have them locked up like animals.


When at war, we tend to forget, they have children too.


If you can’t think of the kids, think of yourself. Let’s talk trade.


What could you gain by helping, instead of hurting.


Thank you for listening. I hope my speech found your heart.

[You should see if the steward has the seal]


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Talk to the steward.

|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 8, Right Turn

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/1] Steward: Here’s your seal. Just certify whichever speech you’re giving.


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- New Item -|

Spoiler: New Item

Ambassador's Seal

The seal of Wynn, makes anything it marks official.

Quest Item

|- New Item -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Certify one of the speeches.

|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 9, Right Turn

Spoiler: Dwarf's Speech

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 9, Right Turn, Dwarf's Speech

|- Information -|

Spoiler: Information

You should be teleported to the main auditorium a few moments after you choose this speech.


You will then automatically “give” the speech.

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|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[You certify the Dwarf’s speech and take it to the auditorium]


[1/7] Ambassador: Hello! Hello! Thank you for having me, you’re all great!


[2/7] Ambassador: I’d like to talk about a problem you guys are having.


[3/7] Ambassador: The Doguns are a real liability, they could cause a lot of trouble.


[4/7] Ambassador: Which is why I propose a movement plan!


[5/7] Ambassador: The Sky Islands are perfect for them, make them a place to stay…


[6/7] Ambassador: Then cut all their bridges! It’s that simple!


[7/7] Ambassador: Thank you all for listening! I hope you accept my plan!


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Information -|

Spoiler: Information

You should walk out of the auditorium through a teleporter to the side.


It should bring you back to the steward.

|- Information -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Talk to the Steward.

|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: End: Stage 10, Right Turn, Dwarf's Speech

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/2] Steward: I’m glad you chose our speech, the crowd obviously loved it.


[2/2] Steward: Anyways, here’s your reward.


[Quest Completed: Do-Gunning for Trouble]

+2,500,000 Experience

+10,240 Emeralds

+Profiteer's Bahnd

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dogun's Speech

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 9, Right Turn, Dogun's Speech

|- Information -|

Spoiler: Information

You should be teleported above where you would “enter” the auditorium and watch an armor stand “cutscene” where “you” crash into two other people, a page, and the steward, both currently carrying other speeches.

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|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/3] Page: I’m sorry sir! I’ll clean this up!


[2/3] Announcer: I’d like to welcome the ambassador from the humans, Jerald!


[3/3] Steward: There’s no time! Just take all the speeches and sort it out from there!


[It looks like the page got them all in order, but they’re still mixed together]


[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Information -|

Spoiler: Information

You should be teleported to the auditorium, where you get a series of options from all of the speeches, like in the level 97 Kandon-Beda quest. You can use “speech” NPCs but signs are faster and easier. Yes all the speeches fit on signs I made them on signs.


Also, because I’m evil, and to prevent people from using the Wiki, make it timed

.

|- Information -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Give the correct speech.

|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Continue: Stage 10, Right Turn, Dogun's Speech

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

(I’m going to give the three speeches as is, and label them 1, 2, or 3 based on placement)

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Spoiler: Dialogue, Speech 1

2
[1/7] Ambassador: Hello. I’m here to talk about an issue I have. The Doguns.


3
[2/7] Ambassador: Now I can’t say a thing about your problems, but I can say this.


1
[3/7] Ambassador: What you’re doing is wrong. You have them locked up like animals.


1
[4/7] Ambassador: When at war, we tend to forget, they have children too.


3
[5/7] Ambassador: If you can’t think of the kids, think of yourself. Let’s talk trade.


2
[6/7] Ambassador: What could you gain by helping, instead of hurting.


3
[7/7] Ambassador: Thank you for listening. I hope my speech found your heart.

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Spoiler: Dialogue, Speech 2

3
[1/7] Ambassador: Hello! Hello! Thank you for having me, you’re all great!


1
[2/7] Ambassador: I’d like to talk about a problem you guys are having.


3
[3/7] Ambassador: The Doguns are a real liability, they could cause a lot of trouble.


2
[4/7] Ambassador: Which is why I propose a movement plan!


2
[5/7] Ambassador: The Sky Islands are perfect for them, make them a place to stay…


1
[6/7] Ambassador: Then cut all their bridges! It’s that simple!


1
[7/7] Ambassador: Thank you all for listening! I hope you accept my plan!

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Spoiler: Dialogue, Speech 3

1
[1/7] Ambassador: Hello! I’m here to talk about a new fire scarab care item!


2
[2/7] Ambassador: We all know how you have to heat a rock so your friend can molt.


2
[3/7] Ambassador: This often makes a big mess of rock dust, which must be cleaned!


3
[4/7] Ambassador: This is why we created the Chomp Rocks!


1
[5/7] Ambassador: They stay warm, and they’re food! Your fiery friend will clean it up!


3
[6/7] Ambassador: It also promotes healthier shell growth, making them hotter!


2
[7/7] Ambassador: If ya know what I mean. Thanks for considering Chomp Rocks!

[Quest Book Updated]

|- Dialogue -|

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|- Quest Book -|

Spoiler: Quest Book

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Started


Talk to the steward.

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|- Information -|

Spoiler: Information

You should walk out of the auditorium through a teleporter to the side.


It should bring you back to the steward.

|- Information -|

Spoiler: End: Stage 11, Right Turn, Dogun's Speech, Failure

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/4] Steward: I can’t believe you did that!


[2/4] Steward: You should know your own speech!


[3/4] Steward: You’re getting half pay, but only because it was partially my fault!


[4/4] Steward: Next time you’re giving my speech!


[Quest Completed: Do-Gunning for Trouble]

+2,500,000 Experience

+4096 Emeralds

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: End: Stage 11, Right Turn, Dogun's Speech, Completed

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Dialogue

[1/5] Steward: Wow, that was really deep.


[2/5] Steward: You gave us all a lot to think about.


[3/5] Steward: The king wanted me to give you this amulet. It’s a symbol of peace among our people.


[4/5] Steward: Legend says it was worn by one of our greatest peace makers, long ago.


[5/5] Steward: It used to have a bell engraving, but that’s worn off since then.


[Quest Completed: Do-Gunning for Trouble]

+2,500,000 Experience

+10,240 Emeralds

+Peaceful Amulet

|- Dialogue -|

Spoiler: Item Rewards

Dogun's Disappointment - Bracelet

Spoiler: Dogun's Disappointment

Health: -500
Fire Defense: -30
Water Defense: -30
Lv. Min: 92

+400/3 Poison
+15% Thunder Damage
+15% Air Damage

Legendary Item
The damaged bracelet of a peace loving dogun, the gemstone contains his hope, but that's damaged too.

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Label - Ring

Spoiler: Label

Health: +15
Earth Defense: +15
Thunder Defense: +15
Water Defense: +15
Fire Defense: +15
Air Defense: +15
Lv. Min: 92

+3/4 Mana Steal
+300/4 Life Steal

Legendary Item
A single word is etched onto this ring. "Thief".

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Profiteer's Bahnd - Ring

Spoiler: Profiteer's Bahnd

Health: +100
Lv. Min: 92

-2/4 Mana Regen
-100 Health Regen
+20% Loot Bonus
+10% Xp Bonus

Legendary Item
You probably started a war but at least you made some money, right?

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Peaceful Amulet - Necklace

Spoiler: Peaceful Amulet

Health: +300
Lv. Min: 92

+2/4 Mana Regen
+100 Health Regen

Legendary Item
This old amulet you recieved as a peace prize used to have a bell. Now It has no bell.

|- Quest Book -|

Do-Gunning for Trouble


Lv. Min: 92

Difficulty: Medium

Status: Finished

|- Quest Book -|

Currently Looking for - Item Balancing

Side note - you can add this to the Molten Heights quest chain, or keep it separate.
Also can we call the Molten Heights quest chain the Molten HYPE?

- Milestones -

Spoiler: Reached

Excessive use of puns
Slap 5 different quest mechanics over a different story and have it seem original
BS your way into a new forums trophy off of a single thread
Spend 10+ hours in a row on something to avoid what I was really supposed to do
Get no GM comments on a good suggestion
1 Supporter
5 Supporters
10 Supporters
25 Supporters
50 Supporters
69 Supporters
Mod Supporter

Spoiler: Yet to reach

100 Supporters
250 Supporters
420 Supporters
500 Supporters

Spoiler: I wish

1000+ Supporters
GM Supporter
Admin Supporter
Owner Supporter

 

Spoiler: Illuminati

The Emerald.
Emeralds come from the Nether.
'Nether' has 6 letters.
'Emerald' has 7 letters.
6 + 7 = 13
Illuminati has 13 bloodlines.
Emeralds also come in blocks and liquids,
'Liquid' has 6 letters.
'Block' has 5 letters.
6 - 5 = 1
13 - 1 = 12
1 + 2 = 3
A triangle has 3 sides.
Emeralds are Illuminati.
Confirmed.
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Salted, Grian, and Jumla.
'Salted' has 6 letters.
'Grian' and 'Jumla' both have 5 letters each
6 + 5 + 5 = 16
There are 3 of them.
16 - 3 = 13
There are 13 bloodlines in Illuminati.
They made Wynn.
'Wynn' has 4 letters.
16 + 4 = 20
In a right triangle if one angle is 20, the other must be 70.
90 - 70 = 20
20 - 20 = 0
'0' and '1' are used in binary.
0 is shaped like a hole.
Eyes look through holes.
Holes must also be dug.
'Eye' and 'Dig' have 3 letters each
3 + 3 = 6
'Hole' has four letters.
6 - 4 = 2
'0' and '1' are used in binary.
2 + 0 + 1 = 3
It also has 3 numbers.
The owners are Illuminati, confirmed.

BUMP!​

 

Ah I see (must've been while I was reading the quest [if that's the correct term]).

 

This is really really great! So many options!
However, I disagree with the last part. If you fail the speech, you should start over, not end the quest and give half the emeralds. Too much of a punishment.

 

Exactly half done at 9:41 11/11/16

 

Nice work! It's really well thought out, and really complements the quests already in place in terms of lore, color scheming and general game design.

 

But I like punishment.

Thanks!

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I spent 10 hours straight on this, two of which were color coding.
I did this in a day.
Please give feedback.

 

I'm not really a GM, but I think it's pretty well written, and I like the amount of choice.

 

Ik but you three are the only staff type people I could think of that wouldn't probably banana me for tagging them.

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Vote? :D

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This might be the BEST quest suggestion I have ever seen...

Doguns disappointment lore idea:
The worn bracelet of a peace loving Dogun. When you gaze at the genstone fixed in the center, it fills you with all kinds of emotion.

 

Peaceful amuulet is WAY too op. It can't have both xp bonus, hp bonus, AND mana regen. That would shift the balance of end game necklaces from will power to this.

 

Wait what I didn't give it xp bonus?

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Wait nvm it seems I did it was supposed to go on profiteer's bracelet but to be honest it was almost midnight and i had just spent 8 hours working on a boss af quest and 2 hours color coding it.
I had trouble seeing.

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The damaged bracelet of a peaceful dogun, the gemstone contains his hope, but that's damaged too.

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Bump because Bump.

 

pretty good i guess

 

Hey, quite a nice suggestion! It's certainly part of the better ones, and I'd love to provide some feedback.

While the story was well thought out and had an interesting start it got a bit too confusing later on.
Providing the player with a lot of choices is fine, but it's also possible to exaggerate; the player not knowing what to do or feeling like he missed out on something being some of the core problems.
Not all quests have to be of such great extent, but your attempt wasn't bad at all. As previously mentioned, I really like your concept & unique ideas, but especially the dialouges could use some work.
Try to add more atmosphere through dialouges, and create unique personalities for your characters using them. Maybe add a gimmick to certain ones, such as e.g. stuttering.

 

Really nice quest! Though it is death by spoilers :_:

 

Trust me it's harder to look at without the spoilers
(Or maybe that's just me)
(I spent forever working on it so everything is a little blurry)

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From what i wrote, the dogun had the slightly humorous con man attitude, but not a con man, and with a good heart.
The warden was the "I've seen it all" whatever guy.
And the steward was a pompous noble.
Though it may seem different to others as I wrote it with these ideas in my head.
But the interpretation is all the fun of a new story.

 

I can see what you were aiming for, but in my opinion there's still potential for the dialouges to represent those characteristics even more.

 

I enjoyed the spoilers, but I really didnt think you need a spoiler for every 5 lines :_:

 

It's clear you put a lot of work into this. I don't know if its possible to have 4 different endings though...

Also, you forgot the under-level dialogue.

Other than that, really good!

(there was one more thing I was gonna say but I forget it, lol)

 

Done.

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The level 96 chef quest had 3 different endings.

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And also this one has 5 endings.