World The Great Whale

Tato · Sep 25, 2016

Doby Mick: I heard you are looking for money, but this job is to hard for you. Come back later when you are stronger.
-But this job is too hard for you

Dohdo · Sep 25, 2016

Its good so I voted 4/5 but its not perfect. I just dont know what to change though...

kojirobin · Sep 25, 2016

InfinityBowman-1 said: ↑

I think the Zombie boss should drop like a quest item or something to hand into the captain.
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Original_Potato said: ↑

Doby Mick: I heard you are looking for money, but this job is to hard for you. Come back later when you are stronger.
-But this job is too hard for you
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MLG Sagiitarius said: ↑

Its good so I voted 4/5 but its not perfect. I just dont know what to change though...
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le necro

Jbip · Sep 25, 2016

The great necro

SenorConejo · Sep 25, 2016

The idea of bringing Doby Mick 32 Rotten flesh and 10 Bonemeal to prove yourself is horrible, like ''Bring me items from entities Lvl 1-15 and let's kill a monster Lvl 50!'' that don't make sense, I think that you should have another idea t0 prove yourself a hero.

PerfectlyColored · Sep 25, 2016

MinerDwarf222 said: ↑

This is my first Quest. Tell me if any of the features wont work or cant be done in 1.7.10.
Also the stats for the mobs and rewards are most likely bad.

Couldn't think of a good name. But @htmlman1 thought of a name at least for the NPC.

Quest Name: The Great Whale
Quest: Easy/Medium (I don't know which)
Location(s);
Starting location: Nemract boat dock.
Quest Locations: Doby Mick's Ship, Inside the great whale.
End location: Nemract Boat dock on one of the ships.
Lvl: 39 or 40.
Summary of quest:
You talk to Doby Mick and he tells you about a great Whale that was corrupted and is causing problems for other ships. (May or may not change) You are sent to prove your strength for him. When you prove your strength he takes you onto his ship where you then confront the Great Whale and are eaten by it after shooting it with a cannon. You wake up in the inside of the whale and see some strange lights coming from further down and you go to see it. When you go and look its a corrupted patch with a creature corrupting it. You kill the creature and escape the beast... You escape the whale and come out off the coast of the savannah area. When you get back to Nemract, the captain has made it back safely and gives you your reward.

Stage 1:
Talk to Doby Mick on a boat in Nemract.
If Below 39(or 40);
Doby Mick: I heard you are looking for money, but this job is to hard for you. Come back later when you are stronger.

At 39(40) or above:
Doby Mick: So, you are looking to make some extra money I've heard.
Doby Mick: I may have just the job for you and it pays well.
Doby Mick: There is this Great Whale that roams the sea. The Whale never caused any issues or hurt anyone. But, a few months earlier something changed about the Whale and it is now attacking any ship that it sees.
Doby Mick: I need your help. I had a crew for my ship, but a bit of them ran off because they were too afraid of the whale.
Doby Mick: But, I cant just let anyone get on my ship. You need to prove yourself in some way.
Doby Mick: Hmmm... How about proving yourself by bring back [32 Rotten flesh] and [10 Bonemeal].

Stage 2:
Bring Doby Mick [32 Rotten Flesh] and [10 Bonemeal].

Doby Mick: Now that you proved yourself get ready to set sail.
Doby Mick: When you are ready talk with me again.

Stage 3:
When you are ready talk to Doby Mick

Doby Mick: Are you sure you are ready boy?
Doby Mick: This is your last chance before we set sail.
Right click on Doby Mick again.
Doby Mick: Alright then. Just wait by the cannons and don't fall off, but be ready to shoot when the whale shows its self.

Stage 4:
The boat is now in the middle of water with sailors on board and Doby Mick at the wheel.
Sailor [Lv. 40].

Then the scene changes and the whale is suddenly behind you about to eat the ship.
The whale's mouth is open and its mouth is easily the size of the boat + more. The actual mouth is mostly just red wool and a dark center where the throat is. The whale it's self looks like a normal whale because the corruption has yet to affect its outside appearance.

You then wake up in the whales stomach with the ruins of the ship around you.
The inside of the whale is all red (Different blocks if possible). The stomach area is littered with the wreck of this ship and many others. Surrounding the wrecks is lava. To get across the place you have to parkour across the different wrecked ships till you reach a large raised platform where the corruption is.

If you try to go back to the mouth of the whale this pops up [You should explore the rest of the area]

[You see a strange light coming from further down the whale]
Along the way there are slimeballs that is called [Stomach Acid] they mostly occupy the different ship wrecks. (Stats at bottom).

Stage 5:
You go further down the whale to see a corrupted looking area with a corrupted creature there.
The corrupted patch is purplish greenish clay sprawling on the raised platform. At the center is the "Boss" and around the edges are corrupted leaches.
Around the corrupted patch are [Corrupted leach]s.
In the middle is the "boss".
The fight is like saylor's brother where its just a bit stronger mob attacking you.
(Mob stats at the end)

Stage 6:
You can now go back to the whales mouth area. There you will see the uvula.
At this point you just attack the uvula which is pretty weak, after hurting/killing the uvula you wake up off the shore of the savannha area.
Go back to Nemract where you will find Baha there.
[Before stage 6]
Baha: I can't believe Cpt. Doby is going to try and go after the whale!
Baha: I would help him.... but I am too scared of the whale.

[After stage 5]
Baha: What happened to Doby?!
you tell Baha about the journey and the disappearance of Doby Mick.
Baha: I wish I had gone with Doby on his last voyage... But I was to much of a coward because of the whale.
Baha: At least you survived and helped the whale.
Baha: If you ever need a boat, I can let you get on me. Its the least I can do for helping the whale.
Baha: Oh yeah, here is your reward that Doby would of given you.
After You complete the quest:
Baha: Don't forget, if you ever need a boat, I can let you get on mine.

[Talking to Doby after stage 5]
Doby: When will you be ready?
Right click him and you can go back through the whale.
Rewards;
19900 Experience points.
640 Emeralds

Mob Stats;
[Stomach Acid]
Level: 37
Mob/Item: Slimeball
Health: 200
Damage: 40-45
Location: The whale's stomach
Drop: Nothing

[Corrupted Leech]
Level: 38
Mob/Item: Silverfish
Health: 170
Damage: 35-40
Location: Around the corrupted patch.
Drop: Nothing

[Whale Eater]
Level: 40
Mob/Item: Zombie
Armor: Chain mail helmet and light blue leather chest, legs, and boots.
Health: 4800
Damage: 100-215
Location: In the middle of the corrupted area.
Drop: Nothing

Spell:
Damage: 170-230
What does it do:
A spiral of white surrounds "Whale Eater" and then a dark, corrupted looking, spear like projectile is shot at you.

[Uvula]
Level: 1
Block: Red wool (What ever the whale inside is made of)
Health: 1000
Damage: 0
Location: The whale mouth area.
Drop: Nothing

Tell me if I am missing any details or just things.
Also, this is subject to change if I think of better details.
Later, I may go through and add bad build examples.

[Edit] Changed the end.
[Edit] Changed the reward a little bit.
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Great quest and creative ideas, but I find it kind of strange to have a level 40 quest in nemract (a low level city) but I don't really think it means anything that much. Good job :)

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Dohdo I'm back. Cancer in it's purest form.

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Jbip yea QA GM CHAMPION

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