World [ Quest ] Lost Spirit - Level 79 Example Builds Included! ( Not Finished, Looking For Criticism )

Hey! How's everyone doing (◕‿◕✿), So I was just bored yesterday and wanted to suggest a quest.

I've been kinda thinking about it for a week now on and off so I finally decided to get to work, sadly I've had work Friday and Saturday, and also will today :(

So I probably won't get this done by until like... Next Wednesday?

Maybe even later I don't know. I'm just looking for constructive criticism on what I have so far.

Disclaimer -
I am NOT trying to push this into Wynncraft, it was fun just for fun


Help Wanted!
If anyone could get the average stats of a mob around level 70-80 it'd be greatly appreciated! ( Credits will be given )

Also, once it gets to the point I am not great at balancing rewards out so I will definitely be welcoming any type of constructive criticism on them!


Quest Book
Level Min. - 79
Difficulty - Hard ( based on Stages )

"You've heard from locals in Cinfras that a man by the name of Ruha who currently resides in Gelibord is looking for adventurers, said he was paying a good sum."

Ruha's lair is located directly beneath the house across the bank there will be a staircase leading down into a wine brewery

Spoiler: How to access Ruha's Lair

Bring 7 Werewolf Fangs and drop it on top of the black carpet Example Build

Ruha's Lair

Spoiler: If Spoken To Before Level 79

[1/4] Ruha : Who are you?

[2/4] Ruha : Can't you see I'm busy right now! I'm reading important documents...

[3/4] Ruha : But I do need a brave adventurer like you,

[4/4] Ruha : Come back once you're level 79!

Spoiler: Stage 1

[1/12] Ruha : You wouldn't happen to be the one everyone has been talking about would you?

[2/12] Ruha : You know the one from Fruma? Ahh, so it is you!

[3/12] Ruha : You see... I'm a demon hunter.

[4/12] Ruha : My team and I have been receiving reports of this mysterious howl coming through the tunnel.

[5/12] Ruha : What tunnel? The one that leads from the Dark Forest to the Isles of Despair of course!

[6/12] Ruha : Right you aren't a native here... You've never heard about that place...

[7/12] Ruha : Well long story short they used to be a powerful nation towering above the rest of Wynn and Gavel.

[8/12] Ruha : But one day their Queen suddenly disappeared, ever since then their kingdom started falling
apart.

[9/12] Ruha : Quite literally as well! Holes of endless void started ripping through the lands.

[10/12] Ruha : All there is now are scattered islands floating above the void.

[11/12] Ruha : Take this key, this will open the gate, you'll be greeted by our base camp on the opposite side.

[12/12] Ruha : Tell the guy in command I sent you, and he'll fill you in on the details.

Once you reach the base camp

Spoiler: Stage 2

[1/7] Commander Hazc : Who are you?! How did you get through?

[2/7] Commander Hazc : So Ruha sent you... We don't need human's help!

[3/7] Commander Hazc : Us demon hunters are more than capable of doing this job...

[4/7] Commander Hazc : But if you really want to help you can go help us find a pair of goggles, we need it to see through these thick fogs.

[5/7] Commander Hazc : The guy who had the supplies accidentally took the bag of goggles instead of food when he went scouting.

[6/7] Commander Hazc : It's almost been a month since we last heard of him.

[7/7] Command Hazc : Maybe look in some caves nearby, might lead to something who knows?

( Will build an example of the cave and finish up the base camp once I get home from work )

I know my builds aren't that great but it's just an example, hopefully you guys get the idea from them. That's all I have time for as of right now, but definitely gonna put in at least 4-6 more stages by Monday morning ( Probably gonna stay up late )

To Do List
- Demon Hunter's Camp
- Cave
- Finish Terrain ( 150x150 ) - Little Sneak Peak of Terrain ( Boxed Area will be removed )

Please vote and leave some criticism (~˘▾˘)~

 

Bumperrroni

 

could you put the imgur pics to gyazo, puush or prntscr? (images not working on imgur on mobile)

 

Try getting the app

 

Ceiling should be less flat in the build.

 

Example build, also was rushed. Planning on completely redoing once i get the fundamentals of this quest down, but yes i completely agree

 

both dont work

 

Are you using public wifi? I know my school wifi has Imgur blocked.

 

home wifi and my computer can open it

 

I think this is a lovely quest, I'd be happy to help writing if you want (I'll need a plot and like the story points so I know what to write)

 

Hmm thats weird cause i can open it on ny open. But have you seen it on your computer? :P i can take a couple of screenshots and Pm it to you if you still want to see it

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Hmmm that would help greatly lets start a Pm and discuss

 

So this is a level 75 ish quest taking place at sky islands? The sky islands are a level 90 place. But good idea for lore quest about the islands

 

Whtface... Sky island is next to dark forest? Same...

 

Last i checked it moved to above Corkus

 

Its called sarcasm

 

I'm pretty sure saying "You're the one from Fruma" isn't really logical since alot of recruits came from it.

 

Hey! Overall I like the premise of the quest, and the dialogue is nice, but I think it'd be a bit more lively with a few changes.

[1/7] Commander Hazc : Who are you?! How did you get through?

[2/7] Commander Hazc : So Ruha sent you... We don't need a human's help!

[3/7] Commander Hazc : Us demon hunters are more than capable of doing this job...

[4/7] Commander Hazc : But if you really want to help you can go help us find a pair of goggles, we need it to see through these thick fogs. (Sort of random, maybe better to have a bit more context/)

e.g. Commander Haze: Tell you what, human, while you're here, why don't you make yourself useful? Earn a couple of emeralds.
Commander Haze: We have a recruit. Real airhead, if you ask me. He was supposed to be out scouting, but ended up bringing our bag of goggles instead of food!

We need those goggles to see through the fogs, and ever since he's disappeared with them, we haven't been able to make progress.
Tried looking already, but fog's too thick to see through, so we haven't had a lot of luck.

[6/7] Commander Hazc : It's almost been a month since we last heard of him.

[7/7] Command Hazc : If you follow this path, it'll lead you to where he should have been going. Try poking around there, will ya?