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Icy Fortress (quest)

Discussion in 'General Suggestions' started by MinerDwarf222, Jul 15, 2016.

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What would you rate the quest?

  1. 5/5 (Why so great?)

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  2. 4/5 (Why good?)

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  3. 3/5 (Why?)

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  5. 1/5 (Why so bad?)

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  1. MinerDwarf222

    MinerDwarf222 I AM A DWARF. HERO

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    I was bored and I want to make a quest over this location that I found. Also yes
    I know that they will most likely have a quest already made and this has 1X10-42 chance to be added.

    Quest Name: The Icy Fortress
    Quest: Medium
    Lv req: 97

    Location(s);
    Starting location: Possibly here.
    Quest Locations: Here, Here, and Here.
    End location: Possibly Here.

    Summary of quest:
    You talk to Preces at his house. He is worried about the icy fortress and asks you to talk to the Watchman. Who tells you that a "Ice Queen" is trying and succeeding to gain power from the ice
    crystal. You go up to the Icy Fortress and have a cut scene with the Ice Queen. You then chase her into a arena and after lowering her health you get frozen and sent to a cave. You have to fight Ice Golems and do parkour through the cave until you reach a camp of heroes. The heroes tell you they are going to fight the Ice Queen and you join them. When you attack the Ice queen again she is much stronger, but 4 heroes help you. Then you take her head to the Watchman.

    Stage 1:
    (Quest book says " Talk to Perces (cords).")

    Talk to Preces at his house.

    If below level;
    [1/1] Perces: While I am very worried. I don't think you can help me.

    If level 97 or higher;
    [1/6] Perces: Hello! Can you help me?
    [2/6] Perces: I am losing sleep from worrying.
    [3/6] Perces: Last week ago flashing lights started to appear over the icy fortress, but only during the night.
    [4/6] Perces: Just 2 days ago the lights started appearing in the middle of the day.
    [5/6] Perces: I think that what ever is happening is reaching a climax!
    [6/6] Perces: Can you please talk to the Watchman in the watch tower nearby to see what is happening.

    If you talk to them again;
    [1/1] Perces: What has the Watchman said?!

    Stage 2:
    (Book will say "Talk to the Watchman to figure out what is happening.")

    Talk to the Watchman at the watch tower.

    Before talking to Perces;
    [1/1] Watchman: What do you want?

    After talking to Perces;
    [1/9] Watchman: What do you want?
    [2/9] Watchman: Oh, Perces sent you here.
    [3/9] Watchman: The man is always worrying over nothing and bugging me.
    [4/9] Watchman: What is he worried about now?
    [5/9] Watchman: He's worried about the icy fortress? Oh, well he actually has a reason to be worried this time.
    [6/9] Watchman: Some self-proclaimed "Ice Queen" has started to try and harness the power of the ice

    crystal.

    [7/9] Watchman: I contacted some heroes in Ahmsord for help like I'm told to, but I doubt they will.
    [8/9] Watchman: Hey kid, you look strong. Why don't you try and stop this "Ice Queen".
    [9/9] Watchman: If you do I'll need you to bring back some proof for my superiors.

    If you talk to him again;
    [1/1] Watchman: So kid? You going to go kill this "Ice Queen"?

    Stage 3:
    (The quest book will say "Go kill the Ice Queen.").

    Head up to the Icy fortress and kill the "Ice Queen".
    Stats for the mobs around the Icy Fortress.

    Angel of Ice
    Lv: 97
    Hp: 21500
    Regen: 3000
    Attack: Melee
    Dmg: 1650
    Xp: 760
    Head: Iced Angel Head.
    Chest + Legs + Boots: Light blue.
    Other: Wings
    Elemental Damage: Water ❉ and Air ❋
    Elemental Defense: Water ❉ and Air ❋Air
    Elemental Weakness: Fire ✹


    Icy Golem
    Lv: 97
    Hp: 22000
    Regen: 3000
    Attack: Melee
    Dmg: 1700
    Xp: 780
    Head: Packed Ice Block
    Chest + Legs + Boots: Dark tinged with light blue.
    Elemental Damage: Water ❉
    Elemental Defense: Water ❉
    Elemental Weakness: Fire ✹


    Angel of Ice mobs will be surrounding the Icy fortress. While the Icy Golems will be inside the Icy fortress.

    Once you reach the top a cut scene will happen and the "Icy Queen" will say

    [1/4] Icy Queen: WHOS THERE?!
    (turns around^)
    [2/4] Icy Queen: Oh, just another puny hero. Too bad I am already almost done.
    [3/4] Icy Queen: SOON NO ONE WILL BE ABLE TO STOP ME!
    (As she is saying this thrown snow ball particles will appear around her).
    [4/4] Icy Queen: SO TRY AND STOP ME! IF YOU DARE!

    (Also the icy queen during this cutseen is a armor stand with a light blue chestplate and
    leggings and dark blue boots with the head of like this skin.
    (note I did not make this skin).
    The cut scene ends and the player is teleported back to standing in front of the ice crystal.
    To proceed the player must jump into the coal blocks under the ice crystal taking the player to a icy arena with the "Ice Queen" in the middle as a mob. Here is what the arena could look like Here.

    Ice Queen
    Lv: 98
    Hp: 145000
    Regen: 9500
    Attack: Shoots Hardened Ice blocks at the player.
    Dmg: 2000 - 2100
    Spell: Ice Dagger
    Shoots out hardened ice like the Ice snake, but not nearly as far.
    Sdmg: 2600-2700
    Head: Same head as cut seen.
    Chest+Legs: Light blue.
    Boots: Dark blue.
    Elemental Damage: Water ❉
    Elemental Defense: Water ❉
    Elemental Weakness: Fire ✹

    (Sorry if these stats are off. I can only really compare them to regular 98 mobs.)

    The Ice Queen and the player fight until either the player dies, or the Ice Queen (if possible) reaches 11000-10000hp. Then the Ice Queen becomes invulnerable and the player is frozen in light blue stained glass.

    [1/3] Ice Queen: ENOUGH OF THIS FOOLISHNESS.
    [2/3] Ice Queen: I WILL NOT LET A PUNY HERO BEAT ME.
    [3/3] Ice Queen: BEGONE FROM HERE!

    The player is then teleported away to...

    Stage 4:
    (the book will now say "Find a way back to defeat the Ice Queen.")

    A Icy Cavern with Ice Golems (Stats above).
    The player must make their way through the Ice Golems and past some ice parkour.
    Once past the ice parkour the player is going through another huge ice cavern/huge hallway with ice spikes and a entrance to the Icy fortress ahead (coal blocks).
    Parked outside the entrance is a small camp of heros. The player must talk to the hero npc to continue. If they try to go on to fight they will be pushed back and told
    "Maybe I should talk to the hero first".

    [1/6] Hero: I see you also failed to slay the Ice Queen?
    [2/6] Hero: We too have failed...
    [3/6] Hero: But we are planning to do a full assault against the Ice Queen.
    [4/6] Hero: Hopefully with all of our strength combined we can over come her power.
    [5/6] Hero: Will you join us?
    [6/6] Hero: Good! For emeral- I mean honor we go!

    After this dialogue:
    [1/1] Hero: Are you ready for emeral- I mean Honor?

    Stage 5:
    (Thee book will say "Now defeat the Ice Queen with help from the heros.")

    (You go through the coal blocks and spawn into a new ice arena with the Ice Queen in the middle under the ice crystal)

    [1/3] Ice Queen: HOW DARE YOU PUNY HEROS COME BACK.
    [2/3] Ice Queen: I'M STRONGER NOW THAN ALL OF YOU.
    [3/3] Ice Queen: I WILL KILL YOU ALL.

    Ice Crystal Queen
    Lv: 100

    Hp: 189000
    Regen: 11000
    Xp: 950
    Attack: Shoots Hardened Ice blocks at the player.
    Dmg: 2200 - 2300
    Spell: Ice Dagger
    Shoots out hardened ice like the Ice snake, but not nearly as far.
    Sdmg: 2700-2800
    Spell: Summons
    Summons 2 Ice golems.
    Head: Same head but Iced?.
    Chest+Legs: Dark blue.
    Boots: Dark blue.
    Elemental Damage: Water ❉
    Elemental Defense: Water ❉
    Elemental Weakness: Fire ✹

    Once the battle starts 4 Heros will spawn in to help you fight the Ice Queen and her golems.

    Hero
    Lv: 99
    Hp: 75000
    Attack: Swords
    Regen: 3200
    Dmg: 1300 - 1400
    Hand: Iron Sword.
    Head + Chest + Legs + Boots: All the same as the heros in Ahmsord.
    Elemental Damage: None
    Elemental Defense: None
    Elemental Weakness: None


    Once you beat the Ice Queen she drops her head.
    Then you leave through the coal blocks on the far side of the arena. (if you try to leave before hand it says "You should focus on fighting").

    Stage 6:
    (Quest books states: "Bring back the Ice Queen's head to the Watchman").

    So you bring the Ice Queen's head to the Watchman.
    [1/4] Watchman: Wow kid, I'm surprised you managed to beat the Ice Queen by yourself.
    [2/4] Watchman: Oh, you had help from some heroes?
    [3/4] Watchman: I may have to rethink my opinion of them.
    [4/4] Watchman: Anyway here is your reward for killing the Ice Queen.

    After finishing the quest:
    [1/1] Watchman: Thanks for the help kid.

    Quest completed:
    Rewards:
    900,000 Experience
    20,480 Emeralds


    Pretty sure the dialogue, and mob stats (and maybe rewards) need to be fixed. Also yes... I did leave the first quest npc with no answer...
    Also this is over 1362 words...

    [Update] Fixed dialogue colors and added regen + Elements to mobs.
    [Update2] Fixed Ice Queen's hp.
     
    Last edited: Jul 24, 2016
  2. MinerDwarf222

    MinerDwarf222 I AM A DWARF. HERO

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    Bump cause only 12 views.
     
  3. kioph

    kioph ahh yes heavy melee hmm yes

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    Gm tag 4 u!
     
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    MinerDwarf222 I AM A DWARF. HERO

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  5. kioph

    kioph ahh yes heavy melee hmm yes

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    I didn't read it, maybe later.
    It looked decently long, and with some fine tuning, could be a very good quest
     
  6. MinerDwarf222

    MinerDwarf222 I AM A DWARF. HERO

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    Feel like bumping it again.
     
  7. DirtyDoge

    DirtyDoge Master Procastinator HERO

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    I like the concept where helpful mobs drop in to help you, sorta like Relend, but in a boss fight.
    Overall, great quest, I just feel like it could use more backstory, or maybe you could've made the ice castle a dungeon and planned out how you'd travel through it.
     
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  8. MinerDwarf222

    MinerDwarf222 I AM A DWARF. HERO

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    Bump and I could try to add more backstory... but I'd have to think how to fit with the dialogue. Also for the dungeon part. That gives me a idea.
    (Btw I wont be able to respond that often).
     
  9. Chocolaty_Bear

    Chocolaty_Bear Well-Known Adventurer

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    Maybe add more regen and health to the ice queen? Good quest tho +1
     
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    Eric Yang RIP Mincreafterkid12|THE LEGEND NEVER DIES

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    I like how it actually has npcs activeley helping you. +1
     
  11. MinerDwarf222

    MinerDwarf222 I AM A DWARF. HERO

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    Thxs for reminding me of elements and regen.
    And thxs too.

    Update: Added Elemental damage, weakness, and defense. Plus regen. Added more hp to Ice Queen.
     
  12. Endertricity

    Endertricity Assorted Mini Quiche VIP

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    I think you made a typo with the Ice Queen's health (first fight, before freezing)
    1045000 is quite a bit. Did you mean 145000? If you did, I would also suggest changing the final boss's health to around 190K instead of 178K. More HP, for a difficult fight.
     
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    (Meric) No longer edgy

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    MinerDwarf222 I AM A DWARF. HERO

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    Thank you for catching that, cause Qira's is only 350k... Also I bumped up the Second Ice Queen's hp.
    Thank you.
     
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    Allen_R111 Quality Shitposter

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  16. Icicly

    Icicly bred

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    Great Quest! +1
    +BUMMMMMPPPPITY BUMPPP
     
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    wat .-.
     
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