Quest Storyline: The Rival (5-quest Series) {valir Has 178 Friends!}

Maybe, who knows.

 

Nasea = Sanae so

 

Get hyped, cause I'm working on additions! (P & P)

 

You need to add the level requirements on the start npc dialogues.

 

Edited!
-Added some pics
-Added 2 puzzles \^3^/
-Fixed some typos

 

Diversity? What's that?
Either way, I actually built this in my own world. I'm sorry if it looks like someone else's, but I didn't know.

 

Okay so I found it, it is called Mizzle 2 https://gyazo.com/b5bef4952b0b42cda5b086ba0390e2fc As you can see its the same type of puzzle to blow open a way out at the end, you changed yours slightly but yeah its the same mechanics. But I have to admit and hand it to you, the quest dialog and the twist at the end is pretty damn amazing and original

 

10/10 ign wow

 

3/4 mana steal on a pendant doesnt seem very fair

 

I regret to inform you that the new quest "Canary Calls" has a minecart puzzle verrrry similar to the one used in your fourth quest.

 

O jeez how'd I do that???
I guess I'll make a different puzzle...
(Im on mobile rn so it'll be a bit)

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R E V I V A L

 

And serist is an anagram of sister. Clever.

 

The best part is that they still sound like good names ^3^

 

You need to add more to the 4th and 5th quest in my opinion, for that high a level, they're quite bare and lacking :/ But the ideas themselves are fantastic :D +1

 

Bump \^3^/

 

Also, I will try to work on an update soon! (Expansion in the quests, making more of an adventure)

 

Very good job! Only (well more like 2 :D) thing you should change: The dialogue doesn't sound very "story-like"(or more the NPC names) (ex. Village Elder, Make it more creative!). The ??? person should say something more interesting then: Thanks.

Well in all I LOVE THIS WYNNCRAFT MUST ADD IT!!!!!!!