[quest] True Alice

So I have been grinding a bit lately, so I had some thinking time! I came up with this quest, it might not be completely balanced... but still, I worked "hard" (totaly didn't just crap this out in half a hour) on this and deleted it twice by accident so please don't be to harsh! This takes place in a very long wide area carved into the wall of the world. The sky is blocked out by trees and there's thick plants on each side of the path. BUT SRSLY I MADE THIS IN 20 MIN xD IT SUCKS
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If you talk to Rndwoe before you are level 59
[Rndwoe] Hey, you!
[Rndwoe] Are you looking for...
[Rndwoe] oh, your too weak,
[Rndwoe] Come back at level 59

If you try to enter the passage before you start the quest
[Rndwoe] HEY! Get out of there!

When you talk to Rndwoe for the first time
[Rndwoe] Hey, you!
[Rndwoe] Are you looking for loot or a challenge?
[Rndwoe] You are?
[Rndwoe] Good! I've got a friend who lives in these woods...
[Rndwoe] I think she's called Alice!
[Rndwoe] She has lots of spare stuff, just ask her!
[Rndwoe] Good luck!

When you follow the path about 100 blocks.

There's a split in the path, the main road leads onwards into the forest, but there's a smaller path!
The small path has a sign next to it saying "Short Cut" and one line down it says "DANGER" Blocking the small path there's a Iron golem named "ShortCut guard" it has 10000 health and its hostile, but its really slow...

If you kill the guard and enter the cave at the end of the shortcut path
[The First Alice] So you took the shortcut?
[The First Alice] And you killed the golem?
[The First Alice] You poor naive fool...
[The First Alice] You took the path of the red rose...
[The First Alice] Well goodbye...

Quest ending one: 40000XP | the red rose ring: Lifesteal [15/4 | 55/4] Mele Damage [+5% | +15%]
16 EB

If you follow the regular path

There's a giant clearing, a large pond is in the middle. In the pond there's soul points at the base, and sweet fairys flying everywhere around it. there's a human standing next to it. There's lilly pads in the pond and a large rock in the very center of the pond.

[Siel] Careful
[Siel] This pond is really rare!
[Siel] Its pure mana...
[Siel] The purest mana in the whole province!
[Siel] Its worth a bit, buuuut...
[Siel] The mana in this pool feels so good to the skin...]
[Siel] I could let you take a dip but...
[Siel] that would kind of corrupt the pure part!
[Siel] So don't go in!

If you go in the pond

When you touch the pond you freeze and sink to the base... and tp to a underground crystal cave! When your down there there's no exit!
[Siel] Well, you fell for it!
[Siel] Did you really think that this was pure mana?
[Siel] Or did you just "fall in by accident"
[Siel] Don't make me laugh! Im the second Alice...
[Siel] Look at my name for a second...
[Siel] Its a scrambled version of...
[Lies] Ha! well even though you fell for it...
[Lies] you still deserve a reward for getting this far...

Quest ending two: 41000XP | The Blue bracelet: Mana Steal [1/4 | 2/4] Xp bonus [2% | 25%] Spell damage [5% | 15%] 32 eb

When you continue

In the forest you come across a HUGE rock blocking the path, stone, cobblestone and gold ore!
Theres a crack in it leading to a loot chest just out of reach, inside the rock theres blood on the floor and some skulls. theres also a path around the rock. there's a loot chest in the rock,

If you go into the rock, you freeze

[Alice the third] So your greedy?
[Alice the third] Well, so is everyone who comes here...
[Alice the third] Anyway you came for money didn't you?
[Alice the third] well, I guess I have some spare change...
[Alice the third] Remember, don't be greedy!
[Alice the third] and you had so much done!
[Alice the third] You were so close!!!
[Alice the third] Well, I guess your not the true alice...

Quest ending three: 43000XP | the green gauntlet: Loot bonus [5% | 15%] Walkspeed [4% | 10%]
1 LE

If you walk around the rock

You follow the path to a large pit, its full of lava! you can't go around it, there's a few pillars crossing the hole about 4 blocks wide and 4 blocks apart! there's also a single block thick long log crossing the hole!
The Log looks safer than the parkour but its ominously strait forward!

If you chose the log, or fall off the parkour: you get launched off it into the lava below, but you tp in the last second to a small room.

[The Fourth Alice] Ha!
[The Fourth Alice] You were scared of that parkour! weren't you!
[The Fourth Alice] Well thats ok!
[The Fourth Alice] You showed such hope...
[The Fourth Alice] But hope is nothing compared to fear.
[The Fourth Alice] Ether way, you made it to the second last challenge so you will still get a reward!

Quest ending four: 45000XP | The Cyan Charm: Walkspeed [5% | 25%] Lifesteal [45/4 | 195/4]
16 eb

If you complete the parkour you enter a graveyard on the other side.

A single Quest NPC stands in the Centre of the graveyard, its name is Alice of human Sacrifice. You can't pass behind it, there's a force that flings you back to the graveyard, until you talk to alice of human sacrifice! there's a small house behind her!

[The Alice of human Sacrifice] So you made it at last?
[The Alice of human Sacrifice] You have overcame so many distractions...
[The Alice of human Sacrifice] Wrecklesness, Gulablility, greed, fear...
[The Alice of human Sacrifice] You did them all..?
[The Alice of human Sacrifice] and your still alive? here in wonderland?
[The Alice of human Sacrifice] But that's not possible?
[The Alice of human Sacrifice] Hmm... well... I guess...
[The Alice of human Sacrifice] ...
[The Alice of human Sacrifice] so... you want a reward for this?
[COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][[/COLOR]The Alice of human Sacrifice[COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)]] Go check my house, there's a chest in my attic, go collect your reward[/COLOR]
[COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][COLOR=#006600][COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][[/COLOR][/COLOR][COLOR=#00b300]The Alice of human Sacrifice[/COLOR][COLOR=#006600][COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)]] BUT DO NOT GO IN MY BASEMENT![/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR]
[COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][COLOR=#006600][COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][COLOR=#006600][COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][[/COLOR][/COLOR][COLOR=#00b300]The Alice of human Sacrifice[/COLOR][COLOR=#006600][COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)]] Ok?[/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR]
[COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][COLOR=#006600][COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][COLOR=#006600][COLOR=rgb(0, 102, 0)][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR]
If you go into the attic:
2 LE | 30000XP | The ring of obediance: Lifesteal [10/4 | 45/4] Xp bonus: [5%|25%]

If you go in the basement you fight the alice of human sacrifice:
HP: 50000, Damage per hit: 100HP, Spell: Shoot a stream of fireballs, runs as fast as a regular player.
After you kill her:
[The True Alice] Thank you...
[The True Alice] As a reward for your bravery...
[The True Alice] You are the true alice of this forest...
2 LE | 30000XP | The ring of The true Alice: Lifesteal [10/4 | 45/4] Xp bonus: [5%|25%] Walkspeed [5% | 25%] Loot bonus [5% | 25%]

 

I havent read it yet, but right away I noticed that you should call here somthing other than Alice. Alice is the NPC used in Creeper Infiltration that makes the creeper mask. I do not believe that two NPCs can have the same name.
Edit: also, this is practically ToA but for level 100+

 

I guess the names could be changed but its kinda based of the consumption idea of alice in wonderland, the name Rndwoe is a anigram of wonder, unless i spelt it wrong xD

 

The blue necklace... Nerf the xp bonus... 45% is sooooo op (20% max)

 

Choose your adventure? I like it.

However I dislike that if you make one wrong move (for say accidently jumping in the pond) people are going to get mad

 

The ID's on rewards are too high,make the xp/loot bonus max like 15 or 20,walkspeed max around 15

 

Change the NPC from Rwndoe to Rowend.

 

I altered the rewards to be more ballanced and im gunna change he name to Rowend cuz thats a good name and its still a anigram :D

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notice how its written at 4 in the morning, im gunna change the rewards