World Bazaar Business: A New Quest (4 Supporters)

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Quest: Bazaar Business
Min. Lvl: 31
Difficulty: Medium
Quest Status: Not Started
Talk to Merclin at the Bazaar in Almuj at (X 939, Y 67, Z -1961 )

Pre-Quest:
[1/1] Merclin: Care to buy a Trinket?
[2/2] Merclin: No? Fine then. If you care to change your mind, come back at level 31.

Pre-Quest:
[1/1] Nildin: Want a Trinket? I have an array of them you can choose from....

Stage 1:
[1/5] Merclin: Hello, care to give a bit of help?
[2/5] Merclin: Well, lately I haven't been getting a lot of business.
[3/5] Merclin: Ever since that new guy started working across the stall, I haven't been getting lots of business!
[4/5] Merclin: Hey! I just got an idea! Maybe you can go and find [3 Cursed Dolls] for me!
[5/5] Merclin: I heard there is are abandoned houses near Nemract that has some Cursed Dolls have taken home in. Maybe you can find them there?

[Quest Book Updated] Get [3 Cursed Dolls] for Merclin at (X 423, Z -1941).

In-Between Stages:
[1/1] Merclin: Have you found the Cursed Dolls yet?

[Quest Book Updated] Talk to Merclin and give him [3 Cursed Dolls].

Stage 2:
[1/4] Merclin: You got the Cursed Dolls! Wow! Thanks!
[2/4] Merclin: Maybe you willing to fetch me something else?
[3/4] Merclin: I have heard that Tree Bracelets bear amazing power.
[4/4] Merclin: Are you willing to obtain [2 Tree Bracelets]?

[Quest Book Updated] Get [2 Tree Bracelets] for Merclin.

In-Between Stages:
[1/1] Merclin: I heard that Tree Bracelets are sold only by a merchant.

[Quest Book Updated] Talk to Merclin and give him [2 Tree Bracelets].

Stage 3:
[1/4] Merclin: Perfect! These will sell like wildfire!
[2/4] Merclin: Wildfire... that reminds me....
[3/4] Merclin: Burnt Stone! Can you get that for me?
[4/4] Merclin: Yes. Please get me [6 Burnt Stone]. All help is wanted.

[Quest Book Updated] Get [6 Burnt Stone] for Merclin.

In-Between Stages:
[1/1] Merclin: A rumor is said that you can only find Burnt Stone from a place that leads into the depths.

[Quest Book Updated] Give Merclin [6 Burnt Stone].

Stage 4:
[1/6] Merclin: Wow! You actually found the Burnt Stone!
[2/6] Merclin: This will fit in perfectly with what I'm making!
[3/6] Merclin: But I need another item....
[4/6] Merclin: Have you ever heard of the Black Armour?
[5/6] Merclin: I need a piece of those.
[6/6] Merclin: Please fetch me a piece of the Black Armour. Specifically the Black Cap.

[Quest Book Updated] Get Merclin [1 Black Cap].

In-Between Stages:
[1/1] Merclin: Have you ever heard of the Black Armour Merchant?

[Quest Book Updated] Give Merclin the [Black Cap].

Stage 5:
[1/3] Merclin: Amazing! With all of these items, I'll put the other stall out of business!
[2/3] Merclin: Just one more thing. Take this [Piece of a Voodoo Doll] I have made from your items and show the other stall.
[3/3] Merclin: That will show him that maybe he will have to leave the Almuj bazaar.

Piece of a Voodoo Doll

Normal Item
Untradeable Item

[Quest Book Updated] Talk to Nildin across stalls and give him a [Voodoo Doll].

Stage 6:
[1/5] Nildin: What?!? He's selling voodoo dolls?!?
[2/5] Nildin: It even has a touch of a Tree Bracelet!
[3/5] Nildin: Maybe I can just bribe him with some emeralds and he'll stay.
[4/5] Nildin: Here. Give him these emeralds and the voodoo doll back.
[5/5] Nildin: He'll definitely now let me stay in the bazaar....

Stage 7:
[1/3] Merclin: He bribed me with emeralds so he could stay?
[2/3] Merclin: Good enough. At least he knows he's doomed.
[3/3] Merclin: Here. For all your troubles, keep the emeralds and take the necklace I made with the extra ingredients from the Voodoo Dolls.
[Quest Completed: Bazaar Business]
[+7,250 Experience Points]
[320+ Emeralds]
[Voodoo Doll Necklace]


Voodoo Doll Essence (Accessory, Necklace)
Level Min: 31
Quest Required: Bazaar Business
+40/2s Life Steal
+2/3s Mana Steal
-100 Health
-10% Walk Speed
-5 Defense
-15% Air Defense
Rare Item
Untradeable Item



Quest Mobs:

Voodoo Doll
Level: 32
Health: 301
Resistance: Air
Regeneration: Every 15 seconds
Damage: 25
Walk Speed: Normal
Drops: Cursed Doll-30%



Quest Notes:
-There is an accessory merchant in the Hidden Village and he sells Tree Bracelets
-Burnt Stone is an item drop from sliding gravel at Mt. Wynn (this is not an item drop yet, it would be for the quest).
-Burnt Stone will only be a 40% chance of a drop from Sliding Gravel.
-The Cursed Doll Mob is a baby zombie with no armor (for looks).
-"Burnt Stone" is actually just a block of unpolished granite.
-When you are handed a 'Piece of a Voodoo Doll' item to show Nildin, it is just a fermented spider eye.
-I tried to avoid adding mobs and items. I also made Mt. Wynn useful for more than one quest. Mt. Wynn is really cool, so it should be used more.
-Nildin is at X 947, Y 67, Z -1961
-The Black Cap can be found be being sold by The Black Armour Merchant in the Sewers of Almuj


Personally, I don't think the name of the quest is good and the stats for the item and Cursed Doll is the best. Any suggestions?

 

This is kind of short,but the storyline is quite okay.I think this has a chance to be a quest! ^_^

 

Thanks!

 

Apart from the fact that the blue text gouged my eyes out, it's not bad.

The dialogue could use a bit of tuning, and Mt. Wynn seems like a strange place for an Almuj Quest Item.

 

So almuj>nemract>Nivla woods> Mt wynn
Pretty much a travel quest which is boring and bad rewards, its lvl 31 and only gets 200 emeralds and 4k xp? Yeah no.

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Maybe name it like
"Bazaar Business"

 

I am not good with emeralds and xp I will fix that right now

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I like that... it's better than my name for the quest.

 

I think this is a pretty decent mission. Though there is a bit of back-and-forth quest running, which many players dislike, though, other than that, the quest only needs minor tweaks. +1 support.

 

I can add another place to go, if the quest is too short. But what I didn't want this quest to be is to just get some random mob drop (zombie flesh, bone meal, mashed insect, etc.) so it isn't to just go and find random mobs. Maybe I can add more to the story, like to go and talk to the armor merchant under Almuj, which would be a bit hard to find. Add or no?

 

Well, Almuj certainly has it bad, doesn't it. First economic troubles then a drought?

In all honesty, we really don't need any more quests for under level 40. It's virtually grind-free until then.

 

This seems like a good quest. Almuj if my favorite city

 

Eh, pretty decent, definitely has a chance of making in. It certainly fits, that's for sure.

 

but what if I do want to buy a trinket? ;w;

 

I usually rank quests that I review into Probably would make it, I want it to make it. No chance. Wouldn't care. Now this is a I want it to make it. This is better quality than most quest ideas and has a lot of detail. Although sadly, you might have to wait awhile as the team should be/are working on higher level quests. Another name for this could be Bizarre Bazaar as you wouldn't find voodoo dolls at a bazaar, would you? 10/10

 

Thanks! That is really nice of you!

 

New Stage:
Find the Black Cap for the voodoo doll