Dungeons Extension To T.o.a.? (amestris Spire)

So... keep in mind that this suggestion would be for those who are high leveled (Past level 75 and onward) to give a newer challenge for those who have already gotten the major challenges done, like qira hive and tower of ascension, etc.

Setting of this dungeon of sorts would still tie into the whole story, (still working on lore for this so bear with me if its horrible) and would be in the ocean between Wynn and Gavel provinces. This would be an attempt to give Ankou, the npc for the tower, a more in depth story, or at least something comedic that has almost nothing to do with it. XD

Quest start:

Minimum level: 80-100 (because grinding as ive heard is tedious at that level.)

Ankou: (after the whole end dialogue) Wait... there is one more thing, if you want to really prove yourself.. hehehe.
This tower was not the first of its kind.... there was another ages ago, before the province of Wynn came to be. That ancient tower... or spire housed the worst monstrosities that had ever been since the beginning of time. The best of Gavel's ancient heroes went in, but never came out. Take this.... its a fragment of that old spire before it was lost. This is your ultimate test, should you choose to pursue it..... I think it may have to charge with souls of the most powerful monsters you can find.

(item received: Amestris Fragment)
Item Lore: It just looks like a purple emerald of sorts, nothing really special about it.

(Quest update: head to all MAIN dungeons, and kill all of the bosses within to charge the gem.)

*After completion of that section*

Ankou: so you have charged up the gem.... let me see if i still remember how to find Amestris..... found it. Go now, and take those who have cleared my challenge with you.
(Quest book updated)

*Location i have yet to figure out*

(Upon arrival at coordinates)

Unknown voice: Who are you...... Nobody has found this spire in centuries.

Unknown voice: Oh, so you cleared Ankou's little challenge now did you?

Unknown voice: Allow me to introduce myself....hehehe.... I am his elder brother... Amestris. Or at least i used to be.
Amestris: I made this spire before Gavel's major rise to power, as a test to see who was the strongest warrior of that proud villager race. Unfortunately I made the spire too well, and lost myself in the process. I was detached from my body, and was helpless to watch it turn into pure darkness. I now wait for someone to come by and free me

Amestris: Well there's no stopping you from going on your little mission...don't say i didn't warn you.

Amestris: Nobody has cleared the spire...ever. I am cursed to guard this spire in spirit.

Amestris: Now.. leave me be and march towards the spire entrance just ahead.
(Quest book updated)

*The spire itself is made up of fewer stages... but difficulty would ramp up immensely

*The spire itself is a boss battle gauntlet from the previous... but updated so its harder to complete solo*

NOTE: The floors are not shard based as tower is. Kill the boss, get the clear token and proceed.

BOSS BATTLE TIME (Sort of)

Floor 1: Grotto

Boss: Velex (Lv 81 version of the mini ocean dungeon boss)

Floor 2: Light

Boss: Quartz Guardian (Boss version of Steampunk sentry)

Floor 3: Twilight

Bosses: Cursed Spirit (slightly buffed version of Bound Spirit)
Alkevo's vengeance (Lv 115 version, slightly buffed)

Floor 4: Bleeding into corruption
Two bosses: Corrupt Spell Doctor (lv 80 witch doctor, with appropriate increased health.)
Corrupted Guardian (lv85 Guardian rebuff)

Floor 5: Descent into madness

One boss for this floor: Reaper X (Boss version of Grim reaper from floor 6)

Floor 6: Heart of Darkness

One boss: Malevolence (still have no idea what stats would be for this XD, probably death+ 10 levels)

*upon clearing*
Amestris: *shocked* hmmm well didnt expect that. *angry* go back and tell my brother thanks for abandoning me in my time of need....and that my spire is better than his tower!

*Go back and talk to ankou*

Ankou: Well now you know my little secret... I never really liked Amestris anyway. He always bragged he was better.

XP reward only



Note: Not mentioning any XP things since that is unimportant to the suggestion.

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Dont pay any attention to the setting part. got a little carried away so it may not connect FIX: ending is now not so much like hive.. slightly.

 

o;... Looks good! I really think it is a good quest.

 

Déjà vu? This seems too similar to Qira the Hive.

 

OH, I have a great idea, we can make a final boss of Level 150, make it a girl, and name her Qira! love you

 

Also, make the floors only require 5 shards instead of 10

 

Great idea! I should be a GM also!

 

Hmmm... That seems... Similar

That seems REAAAALLY similar...

Uhhh...

I feel like this is just a reskinned Qira....

 

again First suggestion... dont need to fire hate. Just figured that the npc for tower of ascension was a little too placed... so thats reason for it.

SORRY if this seems a lot like another quest.

Notice that I did not specify a lot of details so that would make it seem like hive.

Let me know how i can improve this instead of hating on it please.

Willing to work with anything given on this.

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Ill work on a rewrite that doesnt seem so much like hive.... limited since well ocean is the only empty space.

 

Er, he's not really hating on it.
But he's right as well. It does seem like a reskinned Qira Hive.

 

love you <3

 

Ok.. thanks for clarifying. Not too big on a details person. Notice the fact there are no fragment requirements as well.
Again, first suggestion i have ever made... so its expected that a lot of critisism came on this.

Apologies to Amplitude for not bothering to double check the similarities first.

iivory thank you for the non-critical response to it. Rather have my mistakes be clarified than not knowing how to fix them.

And thank you Amplitude for the input.. i need a bit of criticism for this kind of thing.. sorry i responded so defensively earlier

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I think i did need a bit of criticism... thanks for putting me back into line. I'll try to write better things in the future. Sorry for responding defensively earlier.

 

<3

 

Theres a first for everythin.

 

oh my

 

I forgive you bb ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

 

Suprisingly, that is REALLY hard to do. Not being sarcastic at all, but it takes me around 2 or 3 DAYS to come up with a suggestion, think about the details and post it. Even then, I usually get critisism. Then again, I specialize in class suggestions. Then again again, it would probably take even longer to make a quest suggestion

 

Yeah i guess. Im fixing up the story so its more along the lines of an actual quest that is just giving something for high levels to do.. which was the main purpose..
XD thanks.

And thanks everyone for the comments and things i should fix.

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XD ok.. first part may be a little bit like the hive... but fixed it to give a more comedic quest feel.
I was bored and decided to write this while listening to Imagine dragons oddly XD.

 

Huh. You'd think that would make you make a quest about dragons....
Oh wait, there is one, isn't there? f***

 

XD. and now you've just given me a very bad idea... one that i will write in the future... XD

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Love your comments by the way

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and why did i just quote myself... im just going to stop talking now. XD