World Quest Idea: Almuj Outskirts (lvl 28)

Almuj Outskirts:

Plot: The Almjug Outskirts are inhabited with Ocelots, who have recently been acting odd - Find out what's wrong!


Quest Start:
https://map.wynncraft.com/#/698/64/-1907/max/0/0

Starting Text:

Jason the Wildlife Expert:
Ah Hello!

I was just researching on these wild ocelots!

Something's weird about them!

Could you kill a couple until you find one [Mysterious Metal]?

[Quest Started]

Jason:
You found it!

Hm... This isn't just metal... It's a machine!

It seems to be controlling them!

I can track the place where it is coming from, but I'm no explorer.

Could you go there and see what is going on?


[Go to a cave at https://map.wynncraft.com/#/598/64/-1691/max/0/0]

[Inside will be a dark cave, venture down]

???: Who dares enter the lair of the Ocelot King?!?

Ocelot King: Ocelots - Attack!

[Fight through the ocelots to a hallway]

[Enter a large battle room]


Ocelot King: Muhahahah! You can never defeat me!

[But the omg you kill the friggen dude]

Ocelot King: Noo! How is this possible?!

[He drops 1 Ocelot Controller]

[Return to Jason]

Jason the Wildlife expert:

A controller? Woah.. This is odd.

I'm glad you found this before he did anything bad!

I can't thank you enough for your help!

Here, take this as my sign of graditude - The ocelots are looking a lot better!


[Quest OVER]

Rewards:

1 Ocelot Skin - traded in at https://map.wynncraft.com/#/903/64/-2024/max/0/0
for 1 [Ocelot Helmet]

Leather - Dyed yellow - Lvl 28 Minimum - You guys can pick the stats.

10 Emerald Blocks

Some amount of XP I don't know how to calculate.


Enjoy! Hope you use this quest!
Jamie

 

[1/4] Glitch: You need some proper text dialogue.
[2/4] Glitch: Next time, think about how you design your quest suggestion.
[3/4] Glitch: Put more effort and creativity too.
[4/4] Glitch: Oh, and remember to make it easier to read.
[Criticism Received]

 

Well, first, what Glitch said above.
Now the mainlist.
2. I don't really think he should talk as if he knows that there's metal, maybe just make him say Just kill some of them, and if you find anything weird, you give it to me, okay?
3. He's just standing there in the middle of a savanna filled with feral ocelots?
4. The concept of an Ocelot King is a bit weird.
5. I may have said this before, but Ocelot King stats. I'd suggest, (naturally) my format.
Bosses for that level would have around 3k health, and 80 damage.
Name
#### Health
## Damage
## Regen (The amount of HP a mob regains every 10 seconds)
Looks (What mob? What's it wearing? Since it's an ocelot I believe it would be wielding Tier I Claws.)
Spell?
AI? Melee, Ranged, Charging, Frisking, Retreating?
Elemental Statistics? If any.
6. Experience? Have no fear, for I am here! Such a quest would be worth around 10,000 XP.

[1/1] One-eye: Main text color is slightly off.
[Quest Started: Text Nazi]

 

Thanks you guys! I will be sure to improve it and repost a final draft!

 

You can his edit your main suggestion. Making a new one clogs up the section and is a bit annoying for people to keep track of, as you will refugee criticism on this one for areas you may have fixed.

 

Yeah, just edit this main post with what Glitch and One-Eye said above. However, this quest is actually a nice idea. However, the Ocelot King is a bit absurd.

Meow...