[quest] Perished Warriors Of Wynn Part 1 (lvl 60) (+30 Supporters!)

Hello everyone!
I am making this thread to share my quest idea, and see if I can get any supporters :D Hope you like it!
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The quest will start in a house in the Dark Forest at x: -1372 z: -5388 and will be greeted by Ivvanus

Green Text = Ivvanus Dialogue
Pink Text = Cathesra Dialogue
Orange Text = Quest Intructions


Ivvanus First Encounter:
[1/9] Ivvanus: *pant* Days...weeks...years
[2/9] Ivvanus: Wha... Who...? Why. Yes! Hello, I am Ivvanus! I may have a task for you,
adventurer!
[3/9] Ivvanus: I am a retired Wynn warrior. I would travel all over the provinces with my friends. We were the bravest and the strongest out of everyone...
[4/9] Ivvanus: Until one day. 6 years ago... we were exploring a very strange area, named Lexdale. We have dealt with all types of monsters, bosses, you name it. But I knew something was off that day. *sniff*
[5/9] Ivvanus: I cant remember much. All I can remember from the fateful day is getting dragged away, as I see my friends dieing before my eyes, and then poof. Blackness.
[6/9] Ivvanus: It does not make sense. How the strongest warriors, taken out in a matter of minutes, and cant even recall the day...
[7/9] Ivvanus: I need to figure out the mystery... Uncover the truth of what happened on that day, and how the greatest warriors were taken down so easily. You, adventurer, can help me.
[8/9] Ivannus: I will reward you greatly. Please, I need to know the truth of my best friends.
[9/9] Ivvanus: Great! I have heard rumors of them being seen in a cave at Gelibord. Good luck adventurer! I will write the cords in your book... and, there you are!

You will then have to go to the cave said. In the cave will be monsters to fight, going deep down. Towards the end of the cave will be a parkour challenge, followed by a puzzle. After completing the puzzle, there will be a boss room. The boss will have 35k health. Killing it will drop an item named "Iron Helmet" with a description, "A rusty old helmet...". You will then leave the cave and return to Ivvanus.

Ivvanus Second Encounter:
[1/5] Ivvanus: Welcome back! What have you found?
[2/5] Ivvanus: A helmet...? Hm... interesting.
[3/5] Ivvanus: Yet still so confusing.
[4/5] Ivvanus: Adventurer, there is a second cave you might be able to get clues from. It is near, ill write the coords into your quest book for you again
[5/5] Ivvanus: ...there you are! Good luck!


You will then proceed to the second cave. This cave will be quite similar to the first. The cave will have monsters to fight. About 20 blocks down the cave, there will be a broken ancient ruind type scructure, which will be a parkour challenge. After this, the cave will go deep down, with harder mobs then the first cave to fight. No puzzle this time, it will lead straight to a boss with 65k health. Killing this boss will drop another item named "Iron Leggings" with a description of "Rusty old leggings...". You will then have to return back to Ivvanus.

Ivvanus Third Encounter:
[1/9] Ivvanus: Welcome back adventurer! Have you found anything new?
[2/9] Ivvanus: Hmm, pants this time? *sniffle*
[3/9] Ivvanus: Wait a second...my god...
[4/9] Ivvanus: This is my dear friends armor! Frousince leggings and Enderim's helmet! It still smells like them...
[5/9] Ivvanus: Like cold... like bravery...like death.
[6/9] Ivvanus: I feel as I can still see them here with me... everyday, I believe they will come back, but they never do. *sob*
[7/9] Ivvanus: As if I can still see Enderim's face when I look into his helmet...but its nothing but death and despair of an old legend and warrior.
[8/9] Ivvanus: Take these armor pieces to a friend of mine, Cathesra! She is a scientist and may be able to find more information. Her lab should be straight west from here.
[9/9] Ivvanus: Now go, and be careful!

This time, no cords will be given. Going west you will find a lab encaved into a mountain. Entering the lab will include very strong enemies to fight. It will be a big structure. Going further in the lab will be a parkour challenge. After will be more mobs to fight, followed by another puzzle. After completing the puzzle you will enter Cathesra's lab.

2nd NPC Cathesra:
[1/10] Cathesra: Yes...yes! This experiment should work! *heavy breathing*
[2/10] Cathesra: Huh, why who has dared to enter my lab!
[3/10] Cathesra: No one simply walks in here without a conclusion of death! Define yourself!
[4/10] Cathesra: Hm, Ivvanus? Why didn't you say so! What can I do for you?
[5/10] Cathesra: I wont be able to do much, as I am busy. But, the least I can do is examine the armor for you. Hand it over.
[6/10] Cathesra: Hm...
[7/10] Cathesra: Wow, very interesting.
8/10] Cathesra: Very strange, my machine cant pick up many details from these armor pieces...
[9/10] Cathesra: My machine says it encountered 3 samples of fresh blood, but cant identify the victims of the blood.
[10/10] Cathesra: This is all i can do for you, adventurer. I am very busy, now off with you!



Cathesra will give you 2 items, "Examined Iron helmet" and "Examined Iron Leggings". You will then return both pieces of armor to Ivvanus.


Ivvanus (Last Encounter):
[1/8] Ivvanus: Welcome back. Could she do anything for you? She can be very rude...
[2/8] Ivvanus: This all she could do? Unfortunate. Well, what was the info you were able to get?
[3/8] Ivvanus: What...
[4/8] Ivannus: 3 fresh blood samples?! That must mean there still alive! There still out there in the world!
[5/8] Ivvanus: I knew they were stronger then I thought! Gosh, how have they survived after all these years? But, you said 3 blood samples?
[6/8] Ivvanus: We know 2 things.
[7/8] Ivvanus: My friends are still out there in the world...
[8/8] Ivvanus: 2 is that... they aren't alone...
[9/9] Ivvanus: Thank you for your help adventurer. Please, take these rewards. Also, take my old boots. I wont be needing them anymore.

Rewards: 1 LE, 150,000 XP, Unidentified boots rare
Boots:
Ivannus' Boots

+1100 Health

Level Minimum 60
Quest Required: Perished Warriors Of Wynn

+2 Strength
+68/2s Life Steal
+1 Agility
+10 Earth Defense
-4 Intelligence
+56 health regen
-5 Fire Defense
-6% Fire Defense

(Thank you That One-eyed Guy for the boots layout :3)

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The quest will then end here. Please leave feedback on this quest! Thank you for reading !

 

It has a pretty good concept, and has a lot of promise. If you could please color the text, and run over it for grammatical/spelling errors, that would be great.

 

Done!

 

Wow, thanks! This looks really good!

 

looks and sounds cool that would be a good idea

 

Hey, I like this! There's gonna be a second part, I hope?
And you should also put the item statistics. Try this layout:
Ivannus' Boots

[Insert Health Here]

[insert level minimum]
Quest Required: Perished Warriors

[List positive or negative identifications here]

[insert slot amount here]
Rare Item

 

I will make a second part if this gets accepted :P

 

Sorry to say but there's a very low chance of it- It would have to have around 200 supporters. :/
The only quest suggestion that I know of that was accepted was Lord of the Clock.

 

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The lifesteal and health regen values on your boots are reaaaly bad.

 

Good, But i'm thinking theres something missing... Maybe not "Rare"...
Helmet, Legs and Boots...
Anyone else hear a voice in their ear saying the armour should be Set?

 

Its a quest with parts, lets say part 1 is at lvl 60, the next part is lvl 75 or something. The older armor piece of probably be bad for your level at that point.

 

Dialogue has been changed a bit.

 

Will you post a part 2?

 

If this gets accepted, I don't want to make a part 2 if it wont even get accepted :P

 

Well, you cant leave us hanging, even if it does or doesnt get accepted, if yer willin to put Part 1 in the title, ye gotta make Part 2! Its naming rules

 

Not bad. There could be a part two where you go and find the people.

 

Very true :P

 

I have went through and fixed up some grammatical errors, as well as fixed some of the writing.

 

I don't really get the point of this post

 

First off, I like the quest's idea. However, there are some cons that should be addressed:

• A couple spelling errors. "Dieing" is spelled "Dying".
• You need mob stats, like regen, defense, etc.
• A part 2 would be nice. I get that you don't want to make it unless this gets accepted, but can't you just make it for fun?

Anyway, you did good work. +1 support.