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World Quest: Green Water (lvl 34) + 7 Supporters

Discussion in 'General Suggestions' started by Arreme, Jan 28, 2016.

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  1. Arreme

    Arreme Veteran, Learning Game Design VIP+

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    Hello Wynncraftians!
    Today I bring you a brand new quest Idea that I had, hope you like it!​


    GREEN WATER
    - Level Min: 34
    - Location: https://map.wynncraft.com/#/1435/64/-2100/-1/0/0

    The Dialogue
    - Low Level Message:
    [1/1] Wrat: Hello adventurer! I'm sorry but I think you aren't strong enought to actually do something here.
    - Stage 1 Message:
    [1/4] Wrat: Hello adventurer! Could you please help me and my family to solve this urgent problem?
    [2/4] Wrat: You see... This oasis right here has provided water to us for long years.
    [3/4] Wrat: But now, something is wrong with the water. Look! See that green thing over there? That thing does not have a good aspect, does it?
    [4/4] Wrat: So, to sum up, could you investigate what's going on here? We really need this water to live.
    - Repeat Message:
    [1/1] Wrat: Have you found the problem yet?
    [Quest Started: Green Water]
    Find the problem of the water arround the oasis.
    Stage 2: Once you find the cave:
    [Quest Book upated]
    Investigate the cave.
    - Description of the Mobs:
    Mud Crawler (LvL 37)
    Head: Green, slimy head
    Armour: Leather Green armour.
    HP: 150
    Hp regen: 20 each 10 seconds
    DMG: 25-30
    Elemental DMG: Water
    DMG resistant: Water, Fire
    Weakness: Earth.
    Stage 3: Once you find the problem:
    [Quest Book updated]
    Scape the cave.

    "Enemies here are too strong for you, get out of there without dying!"
    -Description of the Mobs:
    You don't have to kill them:
    - Green Infested Zombie
    - LvL: 70
    - Head: Dark green eyes, Light green and slimy textured head.
    - Armour: Iron
    - HP: 3000
    - HP Regen: 1000 each 10 sec
    - Dmg: 150-165
    - Elemental DMG: Water
    - Dmg resistant: Water, Fire
    - Weakness: Earth
    Stage 4: Once you scape:
    [Quest Book updated]
    Talk to Wrat about what did you see there.

    - Stage Message:
    [1/3] Wrat: Oh, you are back, what did you find?
    [2/3] Wrat: What the... Are they really that strong!?
    [3/3] Wrat: Oh god, what we can do now... Mh.. Maybe... Go to Bremminglar and find there someone that can help us, quick!
    - Repeat Message:
    [1/1] Wrat: Go! Bremminglar is at the West from here.
    [Quest Book updated]
    Go to Bremminglar and fin there someone that can help you.
    Stage 5: Once you talk to Hackar, the Veteran Water Mage of the Tribe:
    - Low Stage Message:

    [1/1] Hackar: Almuj's Oasis are being infected by terrible creatures.
    - Stage Message:
    [1/5] Hackar: What do you want, adventurer?
    [2/5] Hackar: Mhm, yea, I know about that.
    [3/5] Hackar: I have been studying those creatures for ages, the only thing I can say is that they are not corrupted. They have another thing, but at the moment I don't know it.
    [4/5] Hackar: However, I know how to "freeze" them. This effect will stop every bad behavior from them, like contaminating the water.
    [5/5] Hackar: Just find the river to the East and go to it's start, there you will be able to find the [Shiny Tears], what Wrat needs for his problem.
    - Fallback Message:
    [1/1] Hackar: Did the Shiny Tears work properly?
    [Quest Book updated]
    Find where the river stars and bring [10 Shiny Tears] to Wrat.
    Stage 6: Once you get them and you are finally talking to Wrat.
    Stage Message:

    [1/3] Wrat: Hello again! Did you find him?
    [1/3] Wrat: What are those shiny things in your hand?
    [1/3] Wrat: Oh! I see! Thanks so much adventurer, you have saved my family.
    Greet Message:
    [1/3] Wrat: Now the water is even better than before! Thanks so much!
    [Quest Completed: Green Water]
    Rewards: 21000 Xp - 711 Emeralds

    :saltedhappy:
    That's all!
    Hope you liked my quest idea and
    don't forget to leave some feedback below!
     
    Last edited: Jan 29, 2016
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  2. The One-eyed Guy

    The One-eyed Guy that guy VIP+

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    I like it! A really well-made quest, and quite short to boot. Many quest suggestions (including mine, admittedly) try to go for a long epic thing. It's nice to see a shorter one for a change. However, you missed mob regen, the amount of health a mob gains every 10 seconds. And also, you should make the level 70 mobs, even if they're so powerful already, have closer to 4 or 5 thousand health- That's the base statistic range. 900 health seems a bit low- A level 30 could kill one without too much difficulty.
    And one other thing- The emerald structure it's near is a secret. A bit too easy to find if a quest npc is next to it.
    mods pls nu ban
     
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  3. cars3n

    cars3n Famous Adventurer CHAMPION

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    This is good! Nothing to storyline-intensive, and not too long! And you definitely got the Wynncraft way of dialogue down.
    +1 from me!
    (Also P.S. How did you do that link to the map!)
     
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  4. Arreme

    Arreme Veteran, Learning Game Design VIP+

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    Thanks so much for the feedback. Thats my first quest so I don't know how everything works exactly ( I had to look to the GM document a few times). I have changed this 2 things that you mentioned. Also, I didn't know that the emerelald structure was a secret, but, in my opinion, that zone of the province of wynn is abandoned, that's why I have put there the quest NPC.

    Thanks again! You can do the link in the map by zooming at max at a specific zone and then copying the link! Really easy! (I think you don't have to zoom at max, but is better for the precision)
     
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  5. Arreme

    Arreme Veteran, Learning Game Design VIP+

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    *Bump* Maybe a bit more of feedback, please? It took me some time u know :D *Bump*
     
  6. DaCorruption

    DaCorruption Serves Dern. HERO

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    +1 Awesome
     
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  7. Arreme

    Arreme Veteran, Learning Game Design VIP+

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    Thanks for your support man :DD
     
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