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World Quest: Back In Time

Discussion in 'General Suggestions' started by Fruit987, Jan 26, 2016.

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Is this Good?

  1. Amazing! I would love to see it! +2 support

  2. Pretty good, some lumps to work out. (Explain) +1 support

  3. Meh, Good and bad. +0 support

  4. No, not something I'd like. (Explain)

  5. Terrible! To many Issues! (Explain)

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  1. Fruit987

    Fruit987 Medieval Talker VIP+

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    Back In Time: 1/3

    NOTICE: I could make this a 3-part series, but after this is done and has approval. Please let me know what you think!

    I TAKE CREDIT FOR NO JUMBLED NAMES. RIORDAN MADE ALL THE REAL NAMES, I ONLY OWN MY SMALL PLOT-LINE AND MOBS
    I have a Time-themed quest I thought would be cool to see in-game.
    This is my first creation, so I don't know how it will go. Yeah, I have heavy references in here. But PLEASE pay attention to the quest!

    Quest Name: Back in Time

    Quest Level: 94


    Rewards

    • +850,000 XP

    • +4096 Emeralds

    • +Kroonos' Helmet

    • +Ancient Chainmail
    • Greac Coin (Can be traded at a shop here for Aetlus' Spear, Oceaneeos' Staff, Hypearionns' Bow, or Iuhpates' Dagger)
    Quest Stages

    • (1) Visit Persee here
    • (2)Talk to Annybeth here

    • (3)Bring Annybeth [4 Time Shards] They can be found as mob drops at the (Maybe soon to be built) small cave here. The cave will consist of Nether brick, Obsidian, Coal blocks, and other ‘Dark’ atmosphere blocks. It will descend slowly and turn left gradually.

    • (4)Travel through ’Outer Time’ This will be a larger area than the Time Cave, but build with the same theme. Plenty of the Time-voidlings will be here. There are two paths, at the end of the longer one, will be a grave made of cobblestone. A sign will say: ‘Here lies future you’ The second row of the sign will say: ‘Died trying to solve others’ problems. On the right side of this path, there will be a small entrance into a medium-sized lava pool. Molten Void-lings will spawn here. At the end of the shorter one, will be a sharp turn left. (this path will be on the left side). At the end of this is a pressure plate with a sign on it that says: ‘To progress, you must step on the Time Plate’

    • (5)There will be a command block set up to give the player Nausea 3 for 4 seconds, and at the 3 second mark, another command block will teleport a player into a hallway with 6 jail cells on the side. On the left side, will be buttons with signs from 0-9. The cells will be labeled ‘1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6’. The cells will consist of nether brick walls and nether brick fence bars. In each of these cells, on the floor in coal, are the numbers relating to the code, in order that they appear in the code. I.E., In cell one a 3 will be on the floor.

    • (6)Solve the puzzle. (312609) You will be teleported into a room with parkour. This will be the same ‘dark’ theme and a pit under it. If you fail at the parkour, you will be teleported into a long hallway with the same theme, except no nether brick. The only nether brick in the hallway will be on the path. Time void-lings will spawn here.

    • (7)Complete the Parkour. After this, you will be teleported to a room with a 2 block-wide lava ring around it. It will have a raised circular obsidian platform, with nether brick stair casing surrounding it. On the platform will be Kroonos and 2 of his guards. you will spawn on the edge of the platform, and can’t step past the nether brick.

    • (8)Defeat Kroonos. After this, you will be teleported to Annybeth.

    • (9)Talk to Annybeth

    • (10)Return to Persee




    Dialogue

    • (1)[1/6]Persee:Huh? What am I doing?
    [2/6]Persee: Just preparing for battle with a guy.

    [3/6]Persee: What do you mean ‘What Guy’? Kroonos of course!

    [4/6] Persee: I can’t really beat him though. I’m more of a guy who likes water, not war.

    [5/6] Persee: Maybe you could beat him?

    [6/6] Persee: My friend Annybeth lives in Ahmsord nearby. Visit her, she knows more about this.


    • (2)[1/6]Annybeth: Hm? The angle of x = y?
    [2/6]Annybeth: Oh, yeah. Persee sent you?

    [3/6]Annybeth: Hmph. Couldn’t do it himself. Of course.

    [4/6] Annybeth: You need to defeat Kroonos?

    [5/6] Annybeth: Let me see… Let me see...

    [6/6] Annybeth: Yeah. They say someone is bringing this thing called Corruption from the past.

    [7/8] Annybeth: You need to beat him, I can send you back, but I need [4 Time Shards] They can be found in this dark cave about north of here

    [8/8] Annybeth: Bring me those, I can get you back. Hurry up!


    • (3)[1/6]Annybeth:Great!
    [2/6]Annybeth: Now I can send you back….

    [3/6]Annybeth:Seven Half-Bloods shall… No, wrong one.

    [4/6] Annybeth: Okay, here we go.

    [5/6] Annybeth: Πίσω στο χρόνο θα πάτε! (Píso sto chróno tha páte! if the symbols won't work)

    Everything starts to swirl around you

    [6/6] Annybeth: Bye! Try not to die!


    • (7)[1/5]???:SO, YOU HAVE COME.
    [2/5]???:DON’T TRY TO ESCAPE, FOR YOU CAN’T ESCAPE THE MIGHTY KROONOS!

    [3/5]Kroonos:I WILL KILL YOU, YOU MEDDLING FOOL

    [4/5]Kroonos:I WILL CONTINUE SPREADING THE CORRUPTION

    [5/5]Kroonos:PREPARE TO DIE!


    • (8)/5]Kroonos:AARGH! H-HOW!?
    [2/5]Kroonos:HOW HAVE YOU KILLED THE MIGHTY KROONOS!

    [3/5]Kroonos:YOU SHALL PAY FOR YOUR INSOLENCE!

    [4/5]Kroonos:E-AGH! WHY!

    [5/5]Kroonos:I-I WILL STILL END YOUUU!


    • (9)[1/6]Annybeth:Oh! You’re back!
    [2/6]Annybeth: It’s been 4 years!

    Your mouth drops


    [3/6]Annybeth: I’m kidding, I’m kidding!

    [4/6] Annybeth: You defeated him!

    [5/6] Annybeth: Thank you! may the world remember you!

    [6/6] Annybeth: You’ve done a great deed, greater than beating the Corrupter of Worlds, maybe even better than beating Death!

    [7/8] Annybeth: I suggest returning to Persee.

    [8/8] Annybeth: Well, be on your way!


    • (10)1/6]Persee:What? You got him!?
    [2/6]Persee: Gee, thanks! I thought you would die!

    [3/6]Persee: Well, there’s not much I can do, but have these!

    The quest completion will show with the rewards





    Item One

    • Kroonos’ Helmet

    • +30 ✤✦❉✹❋ Defense

    • +10% XP bonus

    • -6% Movement speed

    • +920 health

    • -5% Soul point regen
    • +50/2sc poison
    • +5 Intelligence
    • +3 Defense
    Item Two

    • Greac Coin
    • Quest Item
    • Exchange It at the Local Ahmsord Quest Merchant
    Item Three


    • Aetlus' Spear.
    • +20 ✤ Defense
    • -4 ❋ Defense
    • -15% Movement speed
    • +1,000 health
    • -5 Agility
    Item Four

    • Oceaneeos' Staff
    • +25 ❋ Defense
    • -5 ✦ Defense
    • +3% Movement speed
    • +1,002 health
    • +7 Intelligence
    • -2 Dexterity
    Item Five


    • Hypearionn's Bow
    • +22 ✹ Defense
    • +10 ✦ Defense
    • +2% Movement speed
    • +1,250 health
    • +10 Defense
    • -8 Intelligence
    • +3 Strength
    Item Six


    • Iuhpate's Dagger
    • +40 ✦ Defense
    • +10 ❋ Defense
    • +10% Movement speed
    • +1,025 health
    • +7 Dexterity
    • +3 Intelligence
    • -3 Defense
    • -2 Agility
    • -5 Strength
    |Mob 1| Spawns in Time Cave.
    Time Voidling
    Mob: Ender Portal/Obsidian? (In case Ender Portal won’t work)
    Level: 93-95
    HP: 85,000
    Regen: 300
    Damage: 800-1000
    Spell: Ender Blast (Launches a cone of Nether portal and enderman particles, dealing 1-4 damage, and inflicting wither over time for 4 seconds. 75 damage per second
    Type: Ranged: Shoots Eye of Ender
    Elemental Damage: ✦❋
    Elemental Defense: ❋
    Elemental Weakness: ❉✤
    Drops: 1 Time shard. 25% chance


    |Mob 2| Spawns in Time Cave
    Molten Time Voidling
    Mob: Nether Portal/Obsidian? (In case Nether Portal won’t work)
    Level: 94-96
    HP: 90,000
    Regen: 350
    Damage: 900-1100
    Spell: Fire Beam (Launches a cone of Nether portal, smoke, and fire particles dealing 2-6 damage, and lighting the player on fire over time for 6 seconds. 100 damage per second
    Type: Ranged: Shoots Eye of Ender
    Elemental Damage: ✹❋
    Elemental Defense: ❋
    Elemental Weakness: ❉✤
    Drops: 1 Time shard. 32% chance

    |Mob 3| Specially spawned
    Kroonos’ Guard
    Mob: Coal Block
    Level: 97
    HP: 95,000
    Regen: 200
    Damage: 900-900
    Spell: Leech (Takes 300 Health away from player and gives it to Kroonos)
    Elemental Damage: ✦
    Elemental Defense: ❋
    Elemental Weakness: ❉✤✹
    Sight Range: 15 Blocks

    |Mob 4| Specially spawned
    Kroonos
    Mob: Zombie Pig-man Wearing a #3b007f Helmet and #150023 Legs and boots. With a chain-mail chest-plate. Wields an iron hoe
    Level: 98
    HP: 100,000
    Regen: 400
    Damage: 20-26
    Spell: Slam of Force. (Smoke and light-gray particles spawn in front of player and knock the player back to the edge of the arena. Inflicts Slowness II for 10 seconds. Deals 2,000 damage)
    Elemental Damage: ✦
    Elemental Defense: ✤✦❉✹❋
    Elemental Weakness: Natural Damage. (-3 Resistance)
    Sight Range: 15 Blocks. (From center of arena outwards)

    Giants Themed on the way, and a little of my own.

    EDIT 1: Extremely revamped quest
    EDIT 2: Boosted Armor stats
    EDIT 3: Added a Trade Item
    EDIT 4: Added Items with a Merchant
     
    Last edited: Jan 29, 2016
  2. The One-eyed Guy

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  3. Fruit987

    Fruit987 Medieval Talker VIP+

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    You read this! Not as good as your quests, though. But yeah, I'm a Riordan fan. Also Kroonos=Kronos
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    Anyway, if you're typing them, I'd love to see what you think about the quest!
     
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    didn't mean to do that
     
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    Fruit987 Medieval Talker VIP+

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    Yeah, I get it
     
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  7. Little Ghost

    Little Ghost Your resident vessel CHAMPION

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    Seems like an interesting quest,though perhaps the dialogue should be switched around a little - I'm not sure,but I would probs beat it easy since I'm over the required lvl by a lot...
     
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    Kronos not Iroonos. Kronos already exists. "You have come." not "You have came." Seriously, Persee and Annybeth? Please.
     
    Last edited: Jan 27, 2016
  9. Fruit987

    Fruit987 Medieval Talker VIP+

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    Kroonos, not Iroonos. I switched the names around, and deal with it, I'm a fan. It couldn't kill to be a little nice
     
  10. Arreme

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    I think that there are already a lot of quests like this one. Furthermore, low level players can't encounter a mithologic god. Is just ridiculous.
     
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    Fruit987 Medieval Talker VIP+

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    Hmph. What quests? And you can encounter a god any level, just wait til Grian is on
     
  12. Arreme

    Arreme Veteran, Learning Game Design VIP+

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    Quite a lot of quest have a similiar mechanic: "get an items/s, do something else, fight something/enter somewhere. I'm not saying that is bad, only that is not an originall idea.
    What I said about encountering a god, just think about it:
    Ragni Quests: Cook asistant
    Find a Ring killing rats...
    Go to the sewers and kill more rats...
    They are just normal, you don't have to kill massive things and bosses.
     
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    Well played, sir.. Well played.
     
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    Fruit987 Medieval Talker VIP+

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    Oh, and it's mythological
     
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    Zelefant wizard fortress will return one day HERO

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    I believe Riordan's books are copyrighted (yes ive read them), sorry.
     
  16. Fruit987

    Fruit987 Medieval Talker VIP+

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    So.... I'm breaking the law.... Better Edit
     
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    Zelefant wizard fortress will return one day HERO

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    One thing is you could at least change the level of the quest... The low level quests are supposed to be simple. It's to not make the new players rage.
    Fighting a god would be like, what, a level 90 quest?

    maybe a level 101 quest?

    loominarty kunfurmed
     
  18. Fruit987

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    ...........THE RACE TO LVL 101 HAS BEGUN! Joking aside, where should this take place then? I'm think around the Sky Islands at Ahmsord
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    But then it would have to be bringing in decay, instead of bringing in corruption
     
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    It seems like even for level 16, 250 HP is a little low...like said before, this belongs somewhere in the 70-80 range...hmm yes sounds about right. Also when Kroonos says 'You have come' you misspelled it to 'You have came'. And I don't think you can get copyrighted since this pretty much falls under satire from the name parodies. Couldn't be any worse than 'Lord of the Clock' and 'Bulbo'
     
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    Not sure if misspelled on purpose like Shrek -> Sherk, but....
    Decent quest as a whole
     
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