World Quest Suggestion. Thieves Of The Nightfall

Hello people of the lovely Wynncraft forums! I see others making suggestions and ideas for quests.. and I thought... "Why don't I make one as well?" And now I am. Just read the dang thing before commenting... Also... I'm still highlighting the text... (I forgot to do that) So yaaa...

Edit: Part II of this quest is currently in the making!

Quest Name: Thieves of the Nightfall Part I
Level Min. 79
Requirement: Completion of the quest, "Murder Mystery"
Difficulty: Hard
Talk to William outside the Cinfras Bank.

[1/6] William: Hey! Ya you! I don't usually see other humans around.. I would like you to help me with something.

[2/6] William: For the past few days, I wake up to see many of my precious items stolen.... This day the thieves took it too far!

[3/6] William: They kidnapped my wife and my three kids! I have no idea where they could be...
I been begging the police to catch these fools, but of course! The police are useless!

[4/6] William: I heard you caught a murderer! I believe the police may listen to you for helping them catch a murderer! Why don't you talk to Investigator Magi?

[5/6] William: Magi should be by the blacksmith (Near Item Buyers) sharpening his weapon!

[6/6] William: Also hurry up! There are lives to be saved!
[New Quest Started: Thieves of the Nightfall Part I]
[Quest Book Updated]
Talk to Investigator Magi near the item buyers.

[1/10] Investigator Magi: Hello? How may I h--
[2/10] Investigator Magi: Oh! You were that guy who helped the police catch a murderer!
[3/8] Investigator Magi: What do you need?
[4/8] Investigator Magi: Oh.. More thieves in town? Dang it! I thought they were gone!
[5/10] Investigator Magi: And Williams family is in trouble?!??! Crap! Guard Jimmy! Get searching!
[6/10] Investigator Magi: Nothing messes with my brother! Oh wai-
[7/10] Investigator Magi: Yes... he is my brother... He may look old... but believe me... he can pack punches!
[8/10] Investigator Magi: Anyway... These thieves... They may look like classic old thieves.. but these thieves stole fire weapons! You name it! They have!
[9/10] Investigator Magi: If your gonna fight these thieves... your gonna have to have armor to the max with many potions!
[10/10] Investigator Magi: Go to Professor Oroth and tell him I sent you! He should be in the airport!

[Quest Book Updated]
Head to Professor Oroth in the Cinfras airport.

[1/4] Professor Oroth: How may I help you?
[2/4] Professor Oroth: Oh? You are the guy that Magi told me about.
[3/4] Professor Oroth: I'm sorry... but I'm running out of magic materials! There is a collector who has many of these materials! He doesn't do stuff for free though... *mumbles* Greedy bastard.... His name is Nick by the way!
[4/4] Professor Oroth: He should be in Selchar! Go talk to him and see what he wants

[Quest Book Updated]
Talk to Collector Nick in Selchar.

[1/5] Collector Nick: Who are you?
[2/5] Collector Nick: Oh? Oroth sent you to get materials for him?
[3/5] Collector Nick: Well your not getting the magic items without giving me something. This stuff isn't cheap you know?
[4/5] Collector Nick: I need this item.. to complete my collection! Give me a [Plasma Emerald]
[5/5] Collector Nick: You can get them by defeating Arkos in his underwater cave near those freaky stones shooting out purple and yellow energy out of them. They should be near Cinfras.

[Quest Book Updated]
Go in Arkos's cave and defeat him and [Plasma Emerald] to Collector Nick

Arkos's Stats

Health: 36,000
Damage: Water and Earth
Defence: Water, Earth, and Air
Weakness: Lightning and Fire
This boss isn't really meant to be hard. The hard part is coming to where you battle the thieves.

Looks: Water Head
Light Blue Chestplate
Cyan Pants
Blue Shoes (WHAT ARE THOSE!!!!)

[1/5] Collector Nick: Wow! You actually killed it? Great!
[2/5] Collector Nick: Time to put it in my collection!
He goes running into his basement and you wait for about an hour.
As soon as you start to leave he comes right out.
[3/5] Collector Nick: Thank you for helping complete my collection
[4/5] Collector Nick: As I promise, here's your magic items.

He give you 64 [Magic Dust]
[5/5] Collector Nick: Oh! Since you and Oroth are making armor. Here's the strongest metal
around. It goes great with magic!

He gives you 24 [Ultimate Metal]

[Quest Book Updated]
Bring the items back to Professor Oroth.

[1/5] Professor Oroth: Oh your back! Took ya long enough!
Let's craft!
[2/5] Professor Oroth: Ok! Armor is finished!
[3/5] Professor Oroth: Here ya go!
[4/5] Professor Oroth: While you were gone, I made some potions!

Oroth's Potion
Health: 3050
Level Min: 79

Stats
Helm:
Mythical Dreams
Health: 1950
Level Min: 79
+10% Air Defence
-15% Water Defence
+5 Agility
+10% Walk Speed
15% XP Bonus

[Quest Book Updated]
Return to Investigator Magi

[1/5]Investigator Magi: Alright! Your ready now! The thieves are at the basement of House 19. Beware! It has many tra--
[2/5] Officer Jimmy: Help I need help now! I'm pinned down! I got based the basement and the door now I'm stuck! These thieves wont stop shooting!:
[3/5] Investigator Magi: Human! Hurry get to Officer Jimmy!
[4/5] Investigator Magi: Now now!
[5/5] Investigator Magi: Hurry!!!!

[Quest Book Updated]
Go into House 19's basement.

Get past the door.
There's a sign in the wall that says. "The.. thieves are coming... I'll tell you whoever is reading this to how to get past this puzzle... climb the vines till you find the other sign. Understand the sentence in every way possible."

The sign says: "They been torturing this dog... He's so scared he attacks everything in sight..... There's a device on him that opens the door.. Throw it in the hopper..

[Quest Book Updated]
Fight your way past to Officer Jimmy.

[Quest Book Updated]
Speak to Officer Jimmy.

[1/4] Officer Jimmy: Thank god your here! Now... help me fight them off!
[2/4] Officer Jimmy: There is a device, one of the thieves have it, I think you put that in the hopper to open it!
[3/4] Officer Jimmy: Crap! They got more thieves shooting!
[4/4] Officer Jimmy: Let's do this!

[Quest Book Updated]
Kill the thieves and use the device to open the door.

[1/3] Officer Jimmy: You go in and spy on their meeting...
[2/3] Officer Jimmy: I'll make sure no more come here!
[3/3] Officer Jimmy: Good luck.

[Quest Book Updated]
Spy on the meeting.

[1/14] Thief Leader: Alright thieves! We've gotten many jewels...But that's not the good part..
[2/14] Thief Leader: Today.. We stolen the KAMARIAN RELIC! With it we can be more then just mortals...
[3/14] Thief Leader: The world will be ours! Hhaahhahahahh!
[4/14] Thief Leader: And today we gathered the people who were about to tell to the guards about us!
[5/14] Thief Leader: Bring in William!
[6/14] Thief Leader: William... I know you talked to a human about this... Where is he now? Tell me...
[7/14] William: You ain't getting crap out of me!
[8/14] Thief Leader: Gehh... Slaves! Get me my Excunitior!
[9/14] Thief Leader: Tell me... Where is the human?!?!?
[10/14] Wife: Please noooo! Please stop! Please!
[11/14] Daughter: Daddy?
[12/14] William: *He knows your out there* Human! Shoot this guy already!
[13/14] Officer Jimmy: *gives you a bow and nods*
[14/14] Thief Leader: Prepare to die now William....

[Quest Book Updated]
Shoot the Leader!
(You can't miss... no matter where you shoot... but it'd be better if you actually shot at him and not shot at the wall and make it look like aimbot XD)
[1/7] Thief Leader: Gahhh! Ahh! My leg! Thieves! Shoot that human down!
[2/7] William: Human! Shoot the cuffs off!
[3/7] William: Thanks! *beats up thieves brutally*
[4/7] William: He's escaping! Go after him! I'll handle these thieves!
[5/7] Officer Jimmy: I'm staying with William! Mind if you hand me back my bow?
[6/7] Officer Jimmy: Thanks! Good luck!
[7/7] Son: Woah! That human is so cool!

[Quest Book Updated]
Chase after the Thief Leader.

[1/6] Thief Leader: You may of cornered me.. but you forgot I have this!
He pulls out a piece of coal.
[2/6] Thief Leader: I mean... This! *pulls out the relic and infuses it with his weapon*
[3/6] Thief Leader: Hhahhaha! *he teleports you to his lair*
[4/6] Thief Leader: You will not be able to see the shine of the daylight! Haha!
[5/6] Corrupted Thief Leader: MAUHAHAHAH! THE WORLD WILL BE MINE!
[6/6] Corrupted Thief Leader: YOU WILL NOT SURVIVE! MUAHHAHA!

Defeat Corrupted Thief Leader and exit the room and find your way back to the others.

Corrupted Thief Leader Stats

Health: 90,000
Damage: Fire and Earth
Defence: Earth, Lightning
Weakness: Air, Water

Fire Throw: He throws many fireballs at you that does big damage. (Easy to dodge)

Earth Quake: He shakes the ground and gives you a slowness II for 10 seconds and he swings you into the air. (Impossible to dodge)

Special: Shoots down bolders of rocks down from the sky that does massive damage.
(Impossible to dodge)

[1/1] Corrupted Thief Leader: Hahha.. You think you defeated me? I have many forms!
*teleports you to a different area*

Corrupted Thief Leader Stats (2nd Form)
Health: 153,050
Damage: Water and Lightning
Moves:
Summon: He summons in 8 corrupted minions.

Corrupted Minion Stats
Health: 1700
Damage: Air
Defence: Air, Water
Weakness: Fire, Lightning

Lightning Storm: He shoots down 10 lightning bolts that strike around him. (Don't be near him when you hear a lightning strike in the distance)

Acid Rain: He rains acid from the ceiling that gives you poison II for 5 seconds. (Only way to dodge is to be under a crate that will appear when the acid rain starts)

Special: He rapidly spawns in many minions that do more damage. (20 minions)

Upgraded Minion Stats
Health: 5300
Damage: Earth, Water
Defence: Earth, Lightning
Weakness: Air, Fire

[1/2] Corrupted Thief Leader: How are you beating me?!?!? Grr! Time to combine all the rest of my forms into my most powerful one to beat you! *he teleports you to the fiery pits*

[2/2] Corrupted Thief Leader: Dieeee!

Corrupted Thief Leader Stat's (Final Form)
Health: 558,000
Damage: Fire, Earth, Lightning
Defence: All Elements
Weakness: Neutral Damage

Moves:
Fiery Rain: Shoots down tons of fireballs that do medium damage. (Unable to dodge)
Earth Grab: He throws you into the air and makes you fall, doing medium damage. (Hard to dodge)
Charge: He charges at you and do tons of damage (Basically an insta-kill) (Very easy to dodge)
PS If you die.. you spawn in the first form boss room (There's a teleporter that teleports you to the next form, but it only teleports you if you defeated that form)

Special: (Activated at 1/4 health) He heals himself and he goes back to 3/4 health.
(Also you have to give the items the bosses dropped to this NPC in the room that gives you access to teleport to the next form)

You magically appeared in the tunnel you went in.
[Quest Book Updated]
Return to the others.

[1/14] William: There you are! Did you get him? *you show him his head*
[2/14] William: Good! And if your wondering... we are fine!
[3/14] Investigator Magi: Hello Human! You have taken out the biggest enemy of Cinfras... We will reward you greatly of course!
[4/14] Son: Human.. Can I get your autograph!
[5/14] William: *he looks at you and nods*
[6/14] Son: Thank you!
[7/14] William: Anyway... thank you for saving me.. my family.. and the city of Cinfras.
[8/14] Officer Jay: I found the body of the leader!
[9/14] Officer Jimmy: Here... This is all that remained of his weapon.
[10/14] Officer Jimmy: It isn't as powerful as it was before.. but it's still good! Take it!
[11/14] Officer Jimmy: You deserve it.
[12/14] Investigator Magi: Keep the armor you got. It'll do good for you in the future.. I hope..
[13/14] Investigator Magi: I'll need you for another thing soon... but right now..
[14/14] Investigator Magi: Let's just celebrate the fall of these thieves.

[Quest Completed: Thieves of the Nightfall Part I]
[+600,000 XP]
[+4096 Emeralds]
[+Mythical Dreams]

 

Heyyy! Not a bad quest! Much better than some of the others I've seen. You should continue.
But just a few things:
1. The Mythical Dreams stats seem to be cut off.
2. You should color the text according to how it is in-game; It makes it look even better!
3. More mob stats? Regen, damage? What is the mob?
4. The quest seems unfinished...?

 

Add an unbiased poll (an option for no)

This quest lacks an ending of sorts. I also don't feel that unless this quest has some sort of amazing twist, it will just be another Kill X, Speak to Y, Get Z, Kill W quest. The story all feels incredibly empty.

 

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sorry... accidently uploaded it before finish..

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I just srrsly tried to add more to it.. I added in like another boss and stuff... then it disappeared... Noooo!

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For some reason.. It's not uploading the edits... So I'm gonna have to take the thread down and redo all of the dialogue and stuff... -.-

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oh wait... nvm I see the edit now

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sorry.. accidently uploaded the thread before finish so I didn't finish the poll and quest.

 

I updated it a bit more... Like it now? Almost done.. Man I been typing for about 2 hours.

 

Yep, just needs a bit more advanced mob stats.

 

I finished it.. How you like it now?

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I tried to make the mobs not so hard. I guess I made them too underpowered. Well I'm gonna take a break! Worth it.

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Sorry.. total noob question... How exactly do I color the text? XD

 

nvm I figured it out.... man I'm gonna have a lot of highlighting to do