World Gavel Excavation

Gavel Excavation Site E

Min lvl: 78

Talk to Gavel King at xyz

Gavel King: We figured someone would find out the secret. But we knew they would not last!

*get teleported to a hallway leading to the vault.

Gavel King: I offer you the riches of the vault, if you can get in!
Gavek King: The only way you can get the treasure is by killing the Emerald Horder
Mobs in hallway:

Bank guard: 10000HP, 900-1000 dam
Corrupted Treasure: 9000 HP, 800-1000 dam, (item: brick)

*you discover a message that says only the Banker knows what the code is.

There are buttons at the end of the hallway...

1/3 Banker: Why do you want to know the code?
2/3 Banker: Oh, but who are you?
3/3 Banker: Give me 4 EB as proof that you really want to know.

1/2 Banker: Have you gotten it?
2/2 Banker: The code is 1,3,3,4

*You punch in the code and it leads to the vault.

Mobs in vault:

Bank Pest: 10000HP, 700 dam., silverfish

Boss: Emerald Horder


200000HP, 800-1100 dam, 10000 regen
Spells: charge, uppercut

*emerald Horder drops 8LE

[Quest Complete]

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Note: I forgot a space, so the emerald Horder boss is IN the vault

 

Having two of the same poll questions with no negative response is, well, cowardly...

 

I don't think you know how balancing mobs works.....

 

Lets make second nothing into "Requires more detail and balancing"

 

So...Your quest is like...With barely no details and the dialogues are just...So cheap! When I see this it's just : "Oh, I need you! Fine now, go there and kill this. BYE!"

Anyway, how is this related with the Excavation quests? 'Cause I see nothing that is Wynn-Excavation like...And at the End you just kill the Emeralder Horder and the quest is just finished like that? You need to talk to the NPC back to finish the quest. And also, the mobs REALLY need to be balanced...'Cause y'see, they are a "bit" too OP.

Well, I hope you'll take this and all the other Feedbacks to improve your actual and future suggestions of quests! And don't loose faith at making quest and blabla, it happens when you're just starting it!

 

PLEASE add this quest, I've been almost broke since I bought my Adamantite.

Oh, btw, what's 'Gavel Excavation'?

 

Where's Gavel Excavation site A through D?

 

Where's effort?

 

Stop whining, it's just an idea you can add on with. Haters.

 

Well, if it's an idea we can "Add on with" it needs a lot of details. Like a LOT. But meh, we're not haters, we gave you some feedback some of them were more offensing than the others but yeah. If you think this is hate well...You're wrong.

 

Shut up
This is a general idea.

 

K, if you want to be stubborn. Your problem. Bye!~

 

You must now make A-D.

Missing * at the end.

Gavel and Gavek, the two kings. Multiple things wrong with this.

What mob is the bank guard? Is Corrupted Treasure a brick or a Nether brick? Spells, elements, anything? Also, CT HP isn't over 9000.

Missing * at the end.

Giving EB this late into the game? Better make it LE.

Not enough 1337.

Not creative enough. If the EH drops 8LE every death, is it normal or untradable? If it's normal, it can be farmed.

 

If this is a general idea, dont use profanity 5 minutes after someone said we wanted to give feedback. Without feedback, no one would learn from another, and everyone here will be harsh, way more harsh, so be glad that we never swore at you first. We gave feed back to the general idea, now accept it, your idea is not our idea. It's not our job to do yours.

 

I'm gonna be frank, I shouldn't need to make this post, and I don't need to.

This quest is like when I try to make cupcakes. I took all the ingredients and walked away. After having binged a few shows, I came back. I threw every ingredient into it's perspective bowl and attempted to cast "Reparo" on it, without a wand. Shortly after having found my directions, I gave up and just put it in one big bowl and heated it. I put the heated mix into the cupcake pan and baked it.

Now since you all love my cooking monologues, I will explain what happened in slightly normal speech, because I am unable to normal.

You took an over-used genre of quests and mashed it up with arguably the best quest line of Wynncraft (please note the arguably). This seems like a match made in heaven. WynnExcavation lacks all ordinary elements of quests! It's the ugly redhead stepsister who has a thing for you of Wynn. Take those characteristics and rename it, making it everything we want. That seems good in theory.

Sadly, over saturation is bad D:
Like Titanic sad. When water gets too salty, only people who don't consume sodium can tolerate it. When Wynn has too many of one type of quest, only people who grind all day can tolerate it.

Since it's typically a good idea to do some things nice when making a sizable criticism of an idea that is not mine, I will give some ideas on how to improve.

Note: I gave up trying to make quests a while ago. I never did these, which explains why they all sucked.

Here is the GM quest-creation guideline Google document. It's typically useful, unless you quest is all kinds of original.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Riy4CUpLLwHB4iS7qfnDR0sEAwyE8wEjaAk9NUFGRMw/mobilebasic
Now for a good idea on what is expected in a good content team member in an idea.
https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/how-to-apply-for-the-official-wynncraft-content-team.89144/

 

I'm so sorry. Please don't hurt me fam.

 

But wait, the poll says 'what could be added?' and the only 2 answers were nothing, meaning us, as the community, simply cannot add anything on to your suggestion. loopholes man