World Adding A Couple New Quests

Hey guys, Matt here.
I'm here now to say that leveling up in the 57-59 range is extremely hard. There are no quests except "The Passage". Right now, I'm a level 58, and there are barely any places where I get good xp. Some people say that glitching into the ToL is good xp, but I don't want to glitch. In the jungle, there are only 3 or 4 caves where level 50+ zombies spawn, and they aren't very good xp-wise. I know that you gms and builders are all busy with gavel, but afterwards, can you please add a few more quests in the level 50-70 range. Here is the basic idea on one of my quest thoughts.

Legend of Generals
Medium Quest
XP Payout: 60,000
Emerald Payout: 12288 Emeralds
Quest Items: Helmet of Protection (Minimum level 58, 60 defence)
Minumum Level: 58

Stage one: Talk to Brid in Troms
*Hello there young traveler!*
*My name is Brid.*
*A few days ago, I got a letter saying that my former training general has been captured!*
*Go see [Irid]. He will know more about it.*

Stage two: Talk to Irid
*Hello there!*
*Ah, Brid sent you.*
*Yes yes, General Routte has been captured by evil forces!*
*Rumor has it that he is located in a cave just north of here!*
*If you go there, you may perish.*
*You must bring me {1 Green II powder, 1 Blue Powder II, and 1 Red Powder 1} so that I may build a helmet so you can go in.*

Stage three: Go back to Irid with the materials
*Good, good.*
*Okay, here is the helmet*
*Good luck in there. I have heard that the evils there are god-like.*

Stage 4: Go to the cave and talk to General Routte
*Hush traveler, are you friendly?*
*Okay, I need a weapon*
*I cannot go out, because if I do, they said that they would wage war against the Province of Wynn.*
*Bring me {1 Oak wood Bow} and a [Sharpness I powder].*
*I should be able to hold them off long enough*

Stage 5: Bring back the weapons
*Thank you, traveler*
*Here, I found these laying in the treasure section.*
*I hope these come in handy for you.*
END QUEST/QUEST REWARDS

Tell me what you think of the quest in the comments.
If any gms look at this quest, please tell me what you think about it.

Thanks,

Matt

 

Gavel is *almost* here and will feed you with 50+ new quests in the 40+ range. Just hang in there!
The quest is alright, has a cool concept, but if the person playing was female?

 

Alright, right off the bat, the quest is bland.

There's hardly any action aside from just talking to NPCs and sending items to others.
Brid and Irid are practically useless for the remainder of the quest, give them a purpose in the story.
The helmet idea is way too similar to ToL, maybe you should change it to a disguise.
That payout is ridiculously high, for a non-major quest. Tone it down.

In the end, I give this quest a 4/10. I know I'm sounding kinda harsh for an ex-GM, but this quest needs much more work. If you were to apply for GM with this quest, I'm not sure you'd make it to trial.

 

Even though you said you won't do it, I would say not to do it anyway, even if you're so tempted. With personal experience, I wouldn't do it.
Also, those people who suggested it, if they've done it, you should really report them, it's illegal to glitch into ToL.

 

Be careful! The enemies there are god-like!
*Can be held off by Oak Wood Bow with Sharpness I*

 

lol oddish I agree. Also gavel is for the 40+ area. just leave wynn and go to gavel

 

Fixed the part about the "Boy" bias.

 

i think the payout of the emeralds is a bit OP XD

 

First of all there many caves that give good xp and there are enough quests you are just lazy.
also this is just a big fetch quest

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you are right a quest at this level should not give 3Le

 

Well, there might be no good quest, but there are good spots. Apparently you have no real experience with real "farm until you Fall asleep" games.
With the quest, I agree @axii