Video Wynncraft Ep1 (give Me Advice(

Give me advice on how to improve my commentary! hope you enjoy :)
Youtube.com/ReapersMcFTW

 

I watched a little bit of it, so I dont know if this improves later in the video, but maybe try either speaking louder or see if your screen recorder can make your mic sensitivity go higher

 

Cut out the background stuff? Also needs more glitter and MLG soundboard.

 

Remove the www.bandican.com symbol text above using Keygen!

 

I got a new mic and I am getting used to it. Thank you for telling me about this :)

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I tried to make it not as loud but I was not able to. I just didnt want some parts where I wasn't talking to be super boring. Thanks :)

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Could you send me a link to this?

 

Just search "KeyGen Bandicam" on youtube, I cannot give you a specific link that seems to work.

 

There is none in english.

 

There I am, Wheatley, there I am!

 

Get OBS, its free and not illegal to verrify. See here to get the best quality while using OBS: https://obsproject.com/forum/resources/how-to-make-high-quality-local-recordings.16/ . And make the music a lot quieter, try to find royalty free music that doesn't have vocals to distract from you. Aside from that, keep up the good work!

 

Well, good luck then :P

 

Constructive criticism:

1. Speak a little louder :P
2. Use better music (I suggest; https://salted.bandcamp.com/album/wynn-ost) (Just remember to credit him in the description)
3. Get better art no offence (Contact me if you want some cool art)
4. Use OBS or something without watermarks everywhere.
5. Other then that nice video! :D

 

I made the art when I was bored :P

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p.s thank you