Lore/Story Wynncraft: Connivance

Before you read I would like to say this. I was never considered a writer nor plan to be one in the future. I don't even read a lot of novels for fun. I am more into video games (hence why this story is about Wynncraft) than books.

However I have always thought of making timelines and stories for fictional characters and settings (from video games or not). I wrote this story not because I thought I could be good at it (far from it), but because I would at least like to organize these thoughts and share it.

I put the first chapter of this story and following chapters on Wattpad since it is the most accessible and I can organize everything easily.

Don't worry, it's not a love story like many stories on Wattpad.

Here is an excerpt from the first chapter (it's the 2nd paragraph):

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It's 4:30 in the morning. The night is dark and cold. Neither the Sun nor my family members have risen. I hear the gates open to let in tired soldiers and adventurers. I can feel the cold breeze through my window. It's too early for any normal person to be awake, except me. Today, I am going to join the Ragni Army. Today is my first day of training. I quickly do my regular morning routine. I eat some bread and butter, wash up, dress up, and leave. However while dressing up, I looked at myself in the mirror. An eighteen year old, skinny boy who would rather plant seeds in the farm than slaughter the grooks. I am not a pacifist, but I have always seen myself as someone who couldn't fight. I look at my skinny arms. Filled with bone rather than muscle. I then stare at my face, bearing non-existent cheeks. My thighs bare no fat and I can easily see bones peeking out of what should be my chest. Will I, Red Grian, ever survive being a soldier? I guess we will just have wait and see.

Story on Wattpad:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/64200295-story-x

Feedback is always appreciated!

 

Bumpy Boomp

 

Bump for you!

 

Gr8, m8. I r8 8/8.

 

I really dislike reading, but this was alright and interesting in its own way, good job m8!

 

Thanks guys :D

Chapter 2 is now out!

I kinda had a bit of trouble here because I didn't know how to convey action nicely without explaining too much. Anyway I hope you guys like it!

Excerpt of Chapter 2:

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~2 months later~

It's 5:00 in the evening. I could hear the birds outside chirping. I could feel the breeze coming in from outside the window. I was at complete serenity. Well, at least until I heard one of my roommates scream because Luis and his friends stuck ice in his pants while he was asleep. It's interesting how some people never learn discipline. I decided to open my eyes just in case Luis had the idea of putting ice in my pants.

Today is the day for our first mission out of the city walls.