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Build Volcano City + Worldpainter

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by librickysimon, Jul 7, 2017.

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  1. librickysimon

    librickysimon Well-Known Adventurer

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    Hellow fellow Wynncraftians,

    recently I made a WorldPainter island and decided to make a city in the largest mountain.

    Clear daytime pictures with shaders:
    http://imgur.com/a/TqQ14
    Cool nighttime moody brightness with shaders:
    http://imgur.com/a/YvhGR

    P.S. I specifically didn't terraform the thing too much, as I wanted to see how good WorldPainter is.\

    Gimme feedback pls

    Sincerely,
    librickysimon
     
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  2. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    I really can't tell what it is from the pictures.
     
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  3. Seth_

    Seth_ I will compose your demise HERO

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    Great work! Just one problem. I don't like the pillars underneath the house supporting them. It doesn't fit too well. Besides that amazing work!
     
  4. Toasted Asian

    Toasted Asian Toasty VIP+

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    Even more proof that everything looks better with shaders.

    Here are several problems I see
    - The terrain is a ravine-ish type thing, the sides of the ravine are extreamly flat making it look unnatural, perhaps rough it up and make it look more rocky

    -Birch wood doesn't fit in to a volcanic ir ravine environment

    -No supports on the platforms, add supports so it wont look like its gonna fall

    -The bridges don't really match the terrain, the bridges look more overworldly rather than an "earthy" style. Use less wood and more stone, for wood I reccomend spruce or dark oak for man-made paths, and 6-sided acadia logs for pillars and frames

    -Bridges are way too narrow

    -Add more detail to structural builds, and also more paths and structured

    -Add more natural detail, such as fissures, spikes, lava leaks and smoke or steam

    -A lot of other things that go past my grammar and vocabulary skills
     
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  5. librickysimon

    librickysimon Well-Known Adventurer

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    @Obey Me I understand the themic problem and I will try to improve for next time. I added supports under the platforms (the middle house one doesn't have one though).

    As to the terraforming, I tried not to add too much to see how WorldPainter would perform. If I paid more attention to the terraforming etc., then it would look much better.
     
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