The First Paragraphs of a Book I'm Writing

This book I'm writing is called "The Lost Kingdom", and is in part based on a Minecraft video from long ago.I

It was a time of twain despair and sadness after the death of King Wynstan Cyning. The King War was known to be won, since the lands of Gordor were scorched into nothingness, and King Palewan had surrendered, but he himself had become into the very demon that plagued the lands of Elsaar for three ages long.
The family of the king were grieving. His son, Nothelm, but mostly his wife Wyn and his sister Helen. Everyone tried to recover the King’s body, but witnesses of his death affirmed that when he was shot, he fell and then his body started floating. -It is as if God had taken his body for him to receive no pain- the witnesses said, but the Royal family did not believe them, as they thought they had taken the body and sold it to pirates for an extended price. Then the witnesses told the entire story.

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As the days of the King War grew darker, a group of men to the halls of Palewan were called. One of these men that were called was a man named Stilkner. He was a prisoner of war, and when he was called to the assistance of the King, he thought he was going to be sentenced to death, but on the contrary, Palewan asked him a favor.

-I’ve heard that you are a great archer, and men slayer.-Said Palewan

-I might be, my Lord, but why have you called me?- asked Stilkner trembling in fear.

-I need a favor from you. You shall kill the King of the Snows, no matter the cost of it.- Said Palewan in a strong voice.

-My Lord, but that’s a blasphem-- said Stilkner, but he was interrupted by the King.

-Go, now-

And off went Stilkner, riding his thin horse, and he went to the middle of the battle. He walked through the trenches, and he was encountered by the general, Mr. Behranin.

-Stilkner!- said the general -Where do you think you’re going, huh?-

-I have orders from the king, sir.- said Stilkner, while he stood alright in the presence of his general. -To kill the Snows King, no matter the cost-

-That man’s gone mad!- said the General -That Wynstan’s unkillable.-

-I’m aware, sir.- Said Stilkner -I’ve been told that he’s been blessed with immortality or something like that, sir.-

-Children’s stories, pff - said the General -But anyways, good luck, private. May God be with us-

-May God be with us, sir.- Said Stilkner, and he continued his way through the trenches of the Gordorian battlefield.

He tried to get through the scorched lands of that strange battlefield. Fire raged on the sand, and the dead bodies of friends and foes. It was a horrifying scene. Explosions were heard from here to there, and everything was bad. The King War had done many wrongs to the beautiful lands of Elsaar.