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Build Some Of My Builds

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Alex ;3, Apr 12, 2016.

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Do You Like Them?

  1. Yes!

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  2. Nahh

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  3. They Could Use Some Work

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  1. Alex ;3

    Alex ;3 Building Scrub

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    Hey! Recently i Applied For The Wynncraft Build Team And i'm Looking For Some Honest Feedback on Some of My Build! I'll be Adding More of My Builds to The Album as i Build More, Enjoy! http://imgur.com/a/xLMSO
     
  2. Frevan

    Frevan Wheres the lamb sauce

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    Holy crap, this is amazing! You should really get accepted to the build team.
     
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  3. Accio

    Accio Im ackro

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    Looks super amazing! Houses need a little more color but i'd be surprised if you didn't get it, keep me posted!
     
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  4. Alex ;3

    Alex ;3 Building Scrub

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    Thanks For The Positive Feedback!
     
  5. Coolfood

    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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    The bees are amazing :D

    So feedback: The first house seems a little simple, but it's a fantastic style.
    I really like the decoration for the valley. However, for the path in the bottom, try not just using coarse dirt/plain dirt (I can't tell) but instead through in other blocks such as podzol or something for the path.
    The ship is pretty cool. :P
     
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  6. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    Great terrain! Try more block variety on the bridge and house, though.
     
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  7. Witcher

    Witcher the crappy class suggestions guy

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    Looks great
     
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  8. Amplitude

    Amplitude Retired Build Team VIP+

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    Nice work :)
     
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  9. Alex ;3

    Alex ;3 Building Scrub

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    Thanks For All The Feedback Everyone! i'll be Adding Some More Pictures of The Bridge V2 But Unfortunately The Plot i Had The First House on Got Deleted so I'll Need to Rebuild it ;-;
     
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  10. Espionage

    Espionage I do pretty neat stuff sometimes...

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    The landscaping was beautiful. The only thing is that the wooden interiors and the first house could use a bit more variation in the block/color. It was a bit flat with only that one texture/color.
     
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  11. blankman

    blankman Wynncraft Boomer VIP+

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    House could be a bit better. Also, use actual water instead of ice and glass.
     
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  12. CodyC99

    CodyC99 Gray Sheep Rule The World

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    The terrain is good but the house needs more details.
     
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  13. Dcat682

    Dcat682 Twitcher

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    Well... at the beginning I thought you were a beginner builder. But once I saw your terrain I actually fell out of my chair in surprise. The terrain looks incredible and very detailed, but your color pallet on your houses are a little plain and bare. The houses as they are only look bad because they have dark on dark. I like the shape your going for but maybe work in some lighter blocks. I would suggest instead of dark oak as your main block using oak planks as a main color and using dark oak as an accent color or for details.
     
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  14. Mish

    Mish Composer VIP

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    These are awesome!
     
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  15. GravitY

    GravitY Quote Editor

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    The houses need work, but the rest of the builds are amazing.
     
  16. espen_tf

    espen_tf Well-Known Adventurer

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    the first house was a meh, but the rest is f***ing awesome
     
  17. lagerbooost

    lagerbooost Ya boi VIP

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    Looks really nice, good work!
     
  18. MyNamesHalo

    MyNamesHalo A sarcastic f*ck

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    House could need improvement on the color but everything else is great!
     
  19. Alex ;3

    Alex ;3 Building Scrub

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    Update: Added Some More Builds I've Been Working on Lately to The Album, They Consist of a New House Style I've Been Trying Out (Much Better Than my First One p-p) And a Watermill Based on The Same Design, Hope You Enjoy!
     
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