(roleplay) Blinding Light

this is mostly an experiment, i've only done one rp other than this but it failed.

Spoiler: Backstory

It was dark.
The world was dark.

Filled with monsters, corruption, decay...

Until someone was born.
This person's name was unknown.
Fruma was his homeland.
Wynn was his destination.
As a new recruit.

This person did many great things. Stopped the Corrupter of Worlds, Death, even Qira herself, Mistress of the Hive.

But, all stories come to an end.
His last breath whispered the terrifying words of "I was wrong."

10 years later, Gavel began to notice something.
The portal to the realm of light.
Something was wrong.
All of the sudden, a blinding light came from it.

And then everything was black.

Spoiler: Rules

1. don't swear. at all.
2. Don't double-post or spam.
3. Do NOT make a troll character. (internet troll, if your character's race is troll it's fine)
4. To prove you have read the rules, put the words "DJ Squid" somewhere in your app. Doesn't have to be a particular area.

Here's the application format:

Spoiler: app

Character Name:
Character Age (doesn't have to be irl age):
Character Race (human, elf, villager, etc.):
Character Class (ignore if not a human):
A few sentences about your character:
Anything else?:

Spoiler: Characters

Spoiler: Rawb/Drake

Character Name: Drake
Character Age (doesn't have to be irl age): 55
Character Race (human, elf, villager, etc.): Dwarf
Character Class (ignore if not a human):
A few sentences about your character: He is unusually tall for a dwarf (About human sized). He has a nice beard. He is really pragmatic. He is also willing to help out any who needs help. Starts in Rodoroc, male.
Anything else?: DJ Squid here with nicefind.avi

Spoiler: blankman/Bla'nk

Character Name: bla'nk
Character Age: 27
Character Race: Human
Character Class: Mage
A few sentences about your character: Male, starts in Llevigar.
Anything else?: I like DJ Squid's /kill song (IRL)

Feedback is appreciated as i'm kinda bad at making rps.

 

Character Name: bla'nk
Character Age: 27
Character Race: Human
Character Class: Mage
A few sentences about your character: Male, starts in Llevigar.
Anything else?: I like DJ Squid's /kill song (IRL)

 

accepted.

An explosion.

Everyone was screaming. Soldiers were running.

Do you join the soldiers?

 

Character Name: Drake
Character Age (doesn't have to be irl age): 55
Character Race (human, elf, villager, etc.): Dwarf
Character Class (ignore if not a human):
A few sentences about your character: He is unusually tall for a dwarf (About human sized). He has a nice beard. He is really pragmatic. He is also willing to help out any who needs help. Starts in Rodoroc, male.
Anything else?: DJ Squid here with nicefind.avi

 

Accepted.

You hear a faint explosion, as all the dwarves stop in their tracks. People are trying to figure out what it was.
Do you investigate?

 

I investigate.

 

After investigating around Rodoroc, you can't find the source of the explosion.

Do you...
- Keep searching Rodoroc
- Grab a weapon and go outside of Rodoroc

 

I keep searching Rodoroc.

 

After still searching Rodoroc, you find nothing.

Suddenly, a louder explosion occurs.

Will you...

- Grab a weapon and leave
- Wait

 

I quickly grab a weapon and leave.

 

You go into the Rodoroc armory. You have the choice to buy a weapon.

Will you...

- Buy a Bow
- Buy a Spear
- Buy a Wand
- Buy a Dagger

 

I buy a spear.

 

You exit Rodoroc.

Suddenly, a HUGE explosion occurs, and you are knocked off your feet. Do you...

- Find the source of the sound
- Search Ozoth's Spire, as the sound may be coming from there.

 

I attempt to find the source of the sound.

 

After at least 2 days of searching, and loud explosions, you find yourself at the entrance to Light's Secret. The explosion is coming from in there.

There are many people of all races, Elf, Human, Dwarf, Villager, crowded around you. They are all talking and muttering to each other.

Do you...

- DARE TO GO IN?
- Stay behind the crowd

 

I dare to go in.

 

Yes. 3spoopy5me

 

The soldiers arrive at Light's Secret. Someone just went in.

Do you...
Follow them
Stay behind

You go in.

The explosions are, most definitely, coming from Light Portal. The Portal is flashing.

Do you...
Turn back
Stand and watch
Go in [DANGER]

 

I stay. This a great way to do a roleplay.

 

You stay outside.

We need to wait for @Rawb's answer now.