Art Over 9000 [gavel Spoilers- Shattered Minds]

After I finished Shattered Minds, I've got inspiration. (I know it's weird).


I was inspired by the weirdest boss fight in the game- Yahya's final form.

I wanted to make this masterpiece on a paper, and that's the resault:



R8 my fist making skills plz :3

 

It looks really cool

 

R.I.P originality.
Nice work.

 

You fists are better then mine!
Still no FKN flying cows

 

genuine criticism to help you improve:
The hand in the back is too small.
You should gum the first parts better out.
(I'm not sure 'gum' is an English word, if it isn't I mean that stuff you use to erase pencil marks.)
I feel like it'd be better if you'd use plain white paper.
Nose seems too low to me.

Genuine complements to make me feel less bad about criticizing a piece of art that looks better than I ever drew:
Love the #BlameYahya.
Great 3d-work.
oh well, it's just [censored] awesome, why would I be saying any more?

 

The thumb is a little off. Otherwise, good!

 

Thanks for the feedback, but I wish I could...


I think I should start using a pencil that's easier to erase :P