Music Noteblocks: Untitled

This piece is not yet finished, and doesn't have a title. Just gonna put it out until I can get more inspiration. Plus, I have two more original pieces I might work on this weekend, so just take this for now.

Really just a short little melody that I just started tacking shit onto a few months ago. I came back to it just now and decided to upload. Pretty boring right now, in my opinion.

 

o boy

 

Geez man, this is freaking awesome!

 

I like it! I hope you go on to make more songs (or if you don't want to, don't then lol).

However, something felt off (so cliché, much wow, believe it!)...
Personally, I felt like the melody and counter-melody (if I can call it that lol) didn't go together - contradicting each other, kinda. The percussion was nice, but it too felt off. Also the bass line (if I can call it that) wasn't loud enough in my opinion.
However I don't know how to fix these things, so it's ok if you don't take this post seriously. Because I really have no idea... lol


kbai xD

 

ooh 3/4 time
I like this

 

Whens your Mixtape coming out?

 

If you think this is good, I don't even know how you'll respond to the next one...

 

Anyone have any suggestions for the name?
not a disguised bump

 

Wow this is great! Maybe you could call it "Your Journey Begins"

 

Daylight Journey

 

A Walk in Darkness

 

A Walk in Dankness would be better tho

 

I got a song name. Its called: Unblock Me From Steam Dammit :P

 

Can't be boss:isn't upbeat, fast, its more like a waltz

Its atmosohearic to me

Darkend waltz