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Lore/Story Nesaak: Frozen Over

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by SushiSlice, Oct 12, 2017.

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What do you think of my second bit of lore?

  1. It's good

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  2. It's alright

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  1. SushiSlice

    SushiSlice A Sushi Slice

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    Happy Hallowynn again, one and all! I really enjoy writing in-depth lore for Wynncraft, so here's some neat Nesaak lore.

    (Last Week's Ancient Nemract Lore): https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/the-fall-of-nemract.205430/

    It was a normal day in the forest of Nesaak. Birds chirruped in their nests atop the high trees. Deer grazed peacefully on fresh spring grass. Ducks swam along the Nesaak River, diving for fish and feeding their young chicks. Along the river laid the peaceful town of Nesaak, a group of settlers who made their living off of fishing and hunting.
    It was in the morning when it began. Two young children, wading in a nearby lake, saw a cyan flash as a beam struck the earth. Moments later, the affected ground burst int0 a mass of snow and ice, trees withering instantly as they touched the icy ground. Citizens raised weapons in panic. More beams streaked across the crisp morning air, striking the ground with great force. Animals were instantly frozen, enveloped in dozens of layers of ice. Grass instantly wilted as it froze into ice.
    The ice began spreading fast. Organisms of all kinds - from deer, to duck, to human, were all frozen over, never to be thawed for eternity. In the course of two hours, Nesaak had been transformed from a cheery, blooming landscape into a cold, dark, icy hell. There was sadness on his face as Theorick turned everything across the plains into nothing but an icy statue. It was his perfect picture of the landscape, but the plains of Nesaak would never be the same.
    Nesaak, years after, became an icy, barren wasteland, where only the toughest animals survived. Snowy wolves prowled the terrain, waiting to stumble across their next meal. Ice golems formed from an excess of magic in the air attacked travelers with no mercy. Wendigos, brutal cannibal monsters, dominated the landscape, eating travelers alive. Blood stained the snowy terrain red. Nesaak, once the cheery fishing town, diminished into a small village, run by the bravest of adventurers who braved the hellish cold each day.
    Finally, years later, Theorick, cryomancer, brother of Twain, finally died, his corpse being consumed and possessed by hatred souls, who had succumbed to his icy imprisonment years ago. Creating a dungeon known to adventurers as the Ice Barrows, Theorick's rotting corpse lies, waiting for a adventurer to slay it and free it of its eternal imprisonment.
     
  2. Dohdo

    Dohdo I'm back. Cancer in it's purest form.

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    It was good..... until you go to the beams, where it started to become unrealistic and boring
     
  3. Sonick

    Sonick Post Anarcho-Eco-Fascist Anti-Centrist

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    But nesaak is such a cozy place. It's definetly frozen but not a "frozen wasteland where only the strongest survive".

    Also, you spent a bit more time than needed when detailing what happened to Nesaak while it was being freezed by Theorick.

    8/10.
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    Tis a game about B L O C K S, it's not supposed to be realistic.
     
    Last edited: Oct 13, 2017
  4. Ditto

    Ditto Well-Known Adventurer

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    I love the way you write! 10/10 in my opinion
     
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