Lore/Story Loss Of Control (re Uploaded) (school Work)

Hey Wynncraftians, I know I hadn't get that much attention on the last story I uploaded. So I decided to renew this story that I've done in E.L.A.

Enjoy! :) - Further

So basically I had to do my midterms fro my E.L.A. and I thought I might share this to all of you. Thanks! - Further :)


┬┴┬┴Loss Of Control├┬┴┬┴

Chapter 1


It’s cold outside, snow being shot out like one of our newest inventions, the gun but two-thousand times the power. The house was as cold as outside. Nothing was warm in our torn, used shack. The whole place was dusty and this is going to be my history, Shi living in an old shack everyone said. I tried to go to sleep but the bed was a giant wooden brick and hay straws and the cold always kept me awake. Since it was hopeless. I tried to get some food but all we have is a half gallon of milk, three carrots, and one loaf a stale bread right now. We can afford anything except for these food items. No furniture, no paintings, it was a boring house with nothing but scraps that we can find. Our house is nowhere near civilization. We are a damaged plant in a desert. I want to leave.

CRACK! What was that, another crack in the back in the house? No, this sounded a lot like a person. The weather is not that strong to take down our paper house. Since my parents are gone, I put on a jacket and went outside. The first thing I feel is a sharp sting of ice and snow. I couldn’t see anything but just a blur of white. Suddenly, I see a black shadow in the middle of the corner. It’s eyes narrowing down to me. I tried to look away, it was too horrific for me. Don’t turn around. Just don’t turn around. I looked around and it grabbed me. Horrific Eyes looking at me. A black mask shown with three yellow dots and one red sun on it’s forehead. “Look at me again and I will release you soul into the wild. It is my job to destroy people with powers like Ming Lu.” Ming Lu, the one who could turn to animals. But was killed by Power Removal Society. Then he turned to black vapor. Where did he go? The cold had weakened me and I can’t get up. I am hopeless.









Chapter 2


I found myself a bench to lay on. Stone shards and broken walls lay around it, everything was in ruins except for a stone that is carved so evenly and symmetrical. Suddenly, it lit up an ethereal light of green and...black. It releases a gas I could not resist, makes...me..so...sleepy..


My head, so dark. Darkness is what I can see now. Where am I? Suddenly Candles from both my sides to the end or wherever it leads to lights up so fast that it took two seconds to reach to the end. A velvet red pillow with gold lint sat in the middle of the end. Suddenly Above that was a ghost, glowing blue and cyan mist growing around it. No hair, No body, Just a head , and that’s all there is. Then eyes appeared from it’s head as it glowed purple. “My friend, you have not much to do and not much to live but since I granted you the power of Life And Death, you must use it wisely or mistakes will corrupt around you. You will create enemies and evil will take on you. Do not make the mistakes, I believe that you can do better late on.” The head disappeared. Life and Death. Should I take it as a gift? I don’t know but I disappeared into thin air. Who knows what's going to happen later on.


I wake up, this was probably the first time I get to sleep peacefully. But the cold hits hard again. I got off the bench. My adrenaline had returned and I feel much more stronger than before. At the end was the figure standing in the middle. “Sinned! You must be slain and you saw me again. I must slay you to protect the people!” It lunged with something shining in his hand. A dagger, the iron blade bloodthirsty and the grip is old leather. The thing’s cloak and cape drifted and swiftly made a good swing that it made a gash on my upper right arm. Blood slowly moving down, staining my clothes. It’s cloak draped across the snow.“Given Up Now?” That voice. I heard it somewhere. He took off the mask and hoodie. No way. His hair all brown and hanging downward. San, a great friend of mine. He left our school one day. No one knew why. Our village was looking for him and now he returned. “San! Don’t do this. Why? Please!” I tried to restore his memory but it seems like it had no effect on him, too irresistible to change. “Shi, I know you want me back but it’s my job to kill not to help. The reason I left our village is to find who killed my family and it was the Wicked, playing with their power. About three years ago, my family was killed on a highway to deliver some bamboo to the market. Then seven of them raided us and I was the only survivor. The last thing my parents wanted me to do was to avenge them. My duty to save my family.” It adds up.”San, your parents want you to live a happy life, not live like this to kill anybody.” “How would you know?!? You weren’t there! And I’m happy to be like this. And yet, you’ve become one!” He screamed and lunged at me again. He wants to play hard. So I’ll fight back. I shot out ivy everywhere to catch to him. He did a somersault and sprints fast after me. I couldn’t get a clear angle. Yet he charges and threw the dagger at me. This time. It boils and molten metal falls to the ground. What was that?!? He lights up two daggers and starts charging at me once again. The I shoot a tree in front of him. He doesn’t get a glimpse at what I put up and when I did, it was too late. His skull knocked him out so hard that he passed out or he died. Blood stained the bark and his cloak. A sense of guilt hits me hard. He was my friend but turned himself to an enemy. Suddenly something glows out of my chest and rises out of me. Then the blizzard stops as the sky turns to a blood red. A replica of me, standing in front of me except it’s red and melting. “What are you doing. Kill him. Finish him! Put an end to all of this chaos!” No, I won’t do it. San is my friend. I can’t do this. “No, Friends stay the same. I won’t kill him!” I yelled. “FINE THEN! You are too weak, I’ll finish him myself!” It swung a sharp sword that he created at San. “NO!” I kicked the replica on the side as it knocked out. Red mist rose up and it. Shot something at me as I dodged it. It looked like red spikes coming out of it’s hand. It pushed me. The strength was worse than I imagined, my back hits on a sharp, rocky spike. I feel the blood rushing from my back and the pain stings back. The thing is too close. I covered my face. This is the end for me and San I guess. Then it stops. Frozen and the particles drift away into thin air.a knife hits the ground. San. “I guess we’re back?” San asked as I stood up. “I guess, although we are friends. I guess. Right?” San looked at me concerned. “Let’s get you fixed up buddy.” He smiles and we walk together to the endless snow that stretches so far.


End..or To be continued...