Music Land Near Sea (my First Song!)

HALLLOOOOO! So I just joined the community today, and I had this song I never finished I want to show you. It abrubly stops because I never continued the project, but it's supposed to picture an assassin trying to reach land... he's got no hope, no chill.
To all the assassins, stay strong

https://soundcloud.com/johnny-isguan/land-near-sea

This is my first thread and song, so please leave feedback, youlo?

 

How u guys do this,it's really good but too short but you got talent

 

Thanks, Ill be doing longer ones in the future.

 

How do you make them?

 

I use Magix Music Maker 2015 Premium, with an extra 6000 loops, and I record some tracks on my piano and stuff

 

Your good at songs dude!

 

This is really good man! Continue the good work!

 

never heard of magix music, huh.

 

I really just use it to record my own instruments, but it's also a hardcore drag and drop loop sorta thing. I can make a good song with loops closing my eyes

 

I think its genius! But some sounds need to be more... "Supported".

 

The violin sound is a little repetitive but you can't notice it