Just A Regular Narrative Poem

Throughout the years I've really enjoyed poetry, experimenting with many types such as haiku, ballads, free verse, concrete and many more. However, I'm really liking narrative poetry and so here I have one that me and my friend made. We call it, Winter Horror.


Winter Horror

As the raging winter winds furiously cut through my tender skin, I started to feel the fear on the surface, suddenly having a forced grin.
I was paralyzed with my baggy attire flying loosely in this abusive weather.
I was rather confused, and therefore I looked for clues, believe me, I looked long and hard, I played my trump card.
My will, a burning torchlight in this brutal weather but was that an illusion that was driving me to traverse and get it together?
I walked, then stopped to observe this disturbed man smiling grimly, as blood slowly dripped down his face holding a sharp and sturdy mace. He gave me a signal to join him in his rundown cabin, but his dark aura dared me not to think of what would happen.
I ran as fast as lighting trying to get away and hide in the shadows although his dark aura was everywhere. I observed like an owl would, forcing myself to enhance my senses by each second, and then I saw a horrific scene!
The man was killing an innocent woman with her bloodied corpse on the ground.
This time for sure I knew he was insane, and for my efforts to not go in vain I made a dash for a way to escape, anything would suffice, and to my surprise, a vehicle appeared before my eyes rumbling like a fierce lion and I had managed to escape, with a scrape and in terrible shape. What would've happened if I joined the man on that day, would I had met my grim fate?

Yes, a bit on the dark side but we think it came out pretty good, our English teacher gave us 100% for it.