Mage/Dark Wizard Help Improve My Theoretical Builds

Here they are. I want the concept to stay the same, items can completely be replaced. The only mythic I have is a Galleon, and max of 2 hive runs.
Mana steal earth spell
Spell spam water
Mana regen earth spell

 

The first two have horrible health and defenses. The third one has too much mana and is essentially a copy of the first build with better elemental defenses, but with worse damage and more mana.

 

I want to bring up something for build #2.

You say it's AIR, but the damage is neutral and water. Also, there are better options than Winter's Essence, especially at endgame, depending on what you're looking for.

 

Whoops. I changed it to WATER. What would you suggest the leggings to be if I just want more meteor damage?

 

If you're just aiming for meteors to do as much damage as possible, then use Winter's Essence. However, I usually dislike having only 8k health and three of your elemental defenses in the negatives in a build.

Here's( https://wynndata.tk/s/ufiUyH ) a hypothetical build I made. It's for Archer, but the principles are the same.

EDIT: I also slapped this build together in five minutes, so there are definitely improvements.

 

Thanks! it's always interesting to see what other people can think up, and what other builds there are. it's impressive how you can make a build in such a short time. For me personally, I don't really mind having <10k health and -ve defenses because mage heal is OP, and even when you do glass cannon as a mage you don't do half the dps as archer or assassin. Saying that, it is good to see possible alternatives to the build. Thanks.