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Home - A Short Story By: Elivader11

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  1. CountBurn

    CountBurn Hackysack?

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    I'm Home. It's been thirty-two years since the last time I saw this place. The small cottage in the middle of a dense forest. I hear my daughter, Trinity, screaming daddy as the men in the lab coats drag here away. I can only watch as she kicks and screams reaching for me. She slowly fades away into a bright light.

    I roll of the bed of my single person hut. I hear the plopping of slimes and the screeching of hen-hens. I quickly grab my vac-pac and sprint outside. There are tars everywhere! My hen-hens are gone and so are the tabbys. I suck up a tar and throw it into the incinerator. I switch to the water setting, but nothing comes out. I sprint into my grotto, where I keep my water, and suck up as much as I can, and spray it ruthlessly over the invading tars.

    I hear the thumping of a helicopter and the screaming of young children. I'm back in Nam. I pull out my M2-Garand, but I hear a sharp ping. I'm out. I grab the nearest flame-thrower and burn them all, all the nammies in the world couldn't stop me now as I let out a loud scream. I drop the flamer and i'm back at the ranch.

    I drop the vac-pac and look at what I had done. "I killed them all" I whisper to myself. The memories of the slimetnam war overrun my mind. I can see it so clearly, the slimes mounted on metal stands with belts of carrots being fed into their mouths and their plorts flying through our walls and busting out tanks. I can hear the villagers screaming as the slimet-cong eat their hen-hens. Just the thoughts of it make me cringe in utter disgust.

    I know what I must do now. I fling off my mattress, underneath there is a M116, A M11911, and a frag plort. I put on my nam uniform and holster my guns. I walk outside to a blinding light and the nice quiet noises of the ranch. I raise my rifle and open fire on the slimes. They freak out and start bouncing everywhere, trying to get out of their pens. I throw a frag plort into the hen house and see an explosion of feathers and pink slime

    I snap out of it and see that i'm standing on the ranch, guns blazing, sweat dripping off me and pink slime covering me and everything else. I hear a little cheep and see a chickadoo hiding in the ruins of an incinerator. I pick it up and punt it over the cliff side.

    The ship I first arrived in is still intact. I get in and try to take off, "aw hecc no fuel". I grab chunks of slime and ash and shove them into the fuel tank. I grab some extra to make nades when I arrive.

    The ship makes a deep roar as the pink jets turn on lifting it to the sky. I get back to earth about a year later. I landed right next to my old cottage. A family of puddle slimes live there now. I kill them all. Now its time to head for the lab.

    I get to the lab and realize it is built for slime testing. I open fire and scream as the men in the lab coats drop to the floor. The slime wing is right down the hall. I storm in yelling for Trinity. I kill everyone in the lab but still no Trinity. As I start to give up a quantum slime bounces up to me. I put my M11911 to its head. I see a name tag on it "Subject 6664201738-Trinity Randi."

    They turned my daughter into a slime! I hug her and pull the three pins on my belt. I can hear the nades ticking, I start to cry and I hear a loud bang and see a flash of light.

    I'm Home.



    @shamos200
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    https://wynncraft.com/stats/player/Elivader11
    im also expanding the part where he murders the entire puddle slime family, so stay tuned for that because its going to be great p.s. there is also a second and third part but eli hasnt gotten them to me yet
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    and if anyone wanted to know my progress on slimerancher the move its finished now and I have sold 5 copies (yay) but if I were to put it on these forums it would probably get taken down for useless content becuase its 152 pages long and no one would ever actually read it on the forums
     
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    CountBurn Hackysack?

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    it seems no one likes short storys
     
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    extremely short story
    would have enjoyed if longer
    plot very fucking confusing
     
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    CountBurn Hackysack?

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    guys daughter gets kidnapped and he is super messed up and keeps massacring his slime and having slimetnam flashbacks then finally goes to save his daughter by killing tons of scientists and realized they turned his daughter into a slime then he kill himself and his daughter. I'm home.
    there is a part 2 and 3 he just hasnt gotten them to me yet
     
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    plots like this should have atleast two pages to be able to fully explain it

    also short stories are multiple pages, this is like an intro

    the hell is slimetnam
     
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    CountBurn Hackysack?

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    idk I didnt write it
    and its 4 pages long in written form but I guess thats still not long enough for you to understand it
     
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    how did this get to 4 pages in length lmao
    i need some of those notecards
     
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