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Build Gyarian Mansion [ Improv Build]

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Wynslow, Sep 16, 2015.

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  1. 1/8 - lol what is this

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  3. 3/8 - This is bad...

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  4. 4/8 - On the fence.

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  5. 5/8 - Good

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  6. 6/8 - Great!

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  7. 7/8 - Awesome!

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  8. 8/8 - i r8

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  1. Wynslow

    Wynslow Famous Adventurer VIP+

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    Hello, everyone! It's been a long time since I've posted a build (or done one, rather) for the forums, so I thought you guys would like to see this! I... don't really know of a style for this, so I'll just be referring to it as Gyarian (get it because greyscale hehe... no I'm horrible at puns).

    (This took around 6-7 hours to complete. Not full hours, as in working on it non-stop, but 6-7 hours on and off.)

    The House
    2015-09-16_17.32.05.png

    Side View
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    Yet another Side View
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    From the top
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    Roof view (the use of spikes may have been a bit excessive)
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    Back View (If you're saying it's not that good, then I would agree with you.)
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    A better look at the double-roof side.
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    The entrance!
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    Feedback and comments are always appreciated! :)
     
    Last edited: Sep 16, 2015
  2. Fangiii

    Fangiii Twinsies with Kurumiii | Fan of Gяιмм VIP+

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    It's just amazing. It can't get even better.
    But, the floor is a bit plain, maybe add some bushes?
    Other than that, I think the building is awesome looking!
     
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  3. Wynslow

    Wynslow Famous Adventurer VIP+

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    The interior!

    Credits to @Eralois for helping me with a bit of it :)



    You open the door...
    2015-09-16_17.33.25.png

    ...and look around you. On your right is a little storage and seating area. In the middle is a kitchen.
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    On your left is a staircase. Leads upstairs.
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    The kitchen. Carpet has been laid out in a tree shape.
    2015-09-16_17.34.30.png


    This room seems to have been neglected. Cobwebs cover the corner of the room, and... there's TNT there. Not safe...
    2015-09-16_17.34.37.png



    But wait! There's a door here. Where does it go?
    2015-09-16_17.34.43.png



    You climb a ladder to access the room. It is small, and seems to be either an armory or storage area.
    2015-09-16_17.35.07.png

    Back down at the main level, you see that the staircase has an intricate railing pattern. There are some bookshelves here, and another door that leads to another tower.
    2015-09-16_17.35.29.png

    (Upstairs aren't finished yet, I'll do them later :I)
     
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  4. Fangiii

    Fangiii Twinsies with Kurumiii | Fan of Gяιмм VIP+

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    Interior is not bad.
    You can probably add custom heads to make it look better.
    Here is a site that will help you get some heads:
    Click Me!
     
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  5. The One-eyed Guy

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    Nice interior.
     
  6. cameston

    cameston Retired ct member HERO

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    Looks nice ;)
    Just a suggestion, have you tried extending the roof out a bit?
     
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  7. rockso7

    rockso7 arcanist enjoyer

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    This is amazing, but for the interiors, it would be nice if you could use something other than cobblestone, etc mossy cobble or something which makes it feel old.
     
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  8. Wynslow

    Wynslow Famous Adventurer VIP+

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    I... personally don't like my roof overhangs to be more than 1 or 2 away from the walls. I tried with 2, doesn't look as good imo. Thanks for the suggestion, though!
     
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  9. Pretzule

    Pretzule eats pretzels HERO

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    It's pretty nice, although the blocks for the roof are a little weird in my opinion.
     
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  10. Yuno F Gasai

    Yuno F Gasai Forum God, FW

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    use stone slabs in addition to the stone slab blocks, it will make it look more curved and real
     
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  11. Wynslow

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    Thanks! I was trying out a new roof style, and wanted to use something lighter than stone bricks, so I experimented with this kind of roof block.
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    I tried it on the roof, I don't really like it because of inconsistencies with the tile and wool. If I add slabs, the tile will look too thick, whereas if I just use the half tile blocks for the curve, it is too small. That might have been confusing, so I'll put it this way: I don't like how it is 1 1/2 blocks or 1/2 a block in height for the tile when it slopes. Thanks for the suggestion, though!
     
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  12. WeaponMerchant

    WeaponMerchant Got £€?

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    Front looks amazing! However, the other sides needs a little more detail :3
    (PS: a lot better than what I can manage)
     
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  13. Minitinipower

    Minitinipower just a guy

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    I really like it but, I think the roof sides are a bit blank.
     
  14. Ephios

    Ephios Travelled Adventurer

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    I like the ground and the interior, it looks well put together
     
  15. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    really good build, love the shape of it. only thing i can think of is that the two colors for the roof dont really match with eachother
     
  16. TrashcanMan

    TrashcanMan Hello I am here

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    The colour scheme of the roof is a little weird, but the rest is wonderful.
    Also your FOV is killing me.
     
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