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Build Fortress/castle Wall

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by green254, Oct 28, 2015.

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Hows it look?

  1. I like it!

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  2. Its okay, BUT... (tell me what i could do to improve)

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  3. This is terrible, try doing this... (tell me what i can do to improve)

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  1. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    wanted to mess around with a gate/wall design. so here it is...

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    view from the right side

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    View from the front of the build

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    And a view from the left side
     
  2. Ascended Kitten

    Ascended Kitten The Greatest HERO

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    I like it!
    Secret new Gavel city confirmed ;-:
     
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  3. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    nah. it doesnt have nearly enought qaurtz :P.
     
  4. Flubby

    Flubby left and accidentally became leftist VIP+

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    Alright, level 4 senpai's building lessons.

    So the detailing on the wall is good, but it doesn't highlight the green clay. Make it obvious the clay is behind the wall. A good wall feels like it is moving on its own. Depth does that.

    Next, the road needs some more randomness overall added to it. The showing is nice, but it lacks "I HAVE BEEN WALKED UPON"ness (new adjective created). Spice it up with some Dirt.

    Now question time. How long have you taken building seriously if at all? Do you feel you are ready to move onto bigger builds? What made me say what I said about this build? Can you add some trees or lakes to make it sexy?
     
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  5. Vanward

    Vanward All Around Creepy Guy; Cringy Comedian

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    Oh...new Detlas confirmed?
     
  6. Sir Devastation

    Sir Devastation Famous Adventurer HERO

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    It looks awesome(for a small section of it :p)! A suggestion I could make, is that maybe you could make thise towers not just giant rectangle things, maybe make them have a weird "thing" at the top (don't know what to call it, think of almuj xD)
     
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  7. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    so like this? 2015-11-02_23.49.59.png
     
  8. Sir Devastation

    Sir Devastation Famous Adventurer HERO

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    It looks better, but you could make the things holding them up more detailed and/or give the top things more texture(maybe like brown and grey? Idk)
     
  9. yotamdin

    yotamdin Is actually a cute anime girl in real life VIP

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    This is awsome! I think you should try apply for build team! I mean, that's way better then I can!
     
  10. sorae

    sorae drifting VIP

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    Looks nice! However, it is lacking in depth due to a lot of slab-spam.
     
  11. (Meric)

    (Meric) No longer edgy

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    Um Green, what is your profile pic. It is very um *cough* Strange*cough*
     
  12. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    it is paula deen with a raw chicken body of course! (it was for halloween just havent gotten around to changing it)
     
  13. (Meric)

    (Meric) No longer edgy

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    So for hallowyn, out of all things. You chose a Paula Deen chicken thing?
     
  14. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    indeed!
     
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