Music Factory Fling

I was bored, so I made this.
Obviously, the original song was made by the Wynncraft music team.

 

Nice, but these can do better:
-The beat is usualy used for swing style music. So if you're trying to make it a "swing" feel, go ahead and make it swing.

-The piano notes (or scale idfk that much music theory) don't pair up well with the beat, so it just sounds chaotic.

-Articulation is key, make some notes staccato marcato.

-In not sure if you're trying to make a swing cover or a jazz cover, but if you arnt, the style doesn't really fit in with the whole doomsday evil steampunk factory theam. The style you're using sounds more happy and upbeat. HOWEVER!! If you are making a cover, go ahead with the style you're using