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Build Desert Castle

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by B02builder, Aug 5, 2016.

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  1. B02builder

    B02builder Well-Known Adventurer

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    image.jpeg image.jpeg image.jpeg I made this little castle this mourning and have no idea what I should do in terms of interior and where to put it. Suggestions on those two things and feedback would be much appreciated.
    P.S. How do you make good flag notch
     
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  2. Thane

    Thane 360 build scoped

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    I like it a lot! It could use a few more colors to contrast from the Sand, due to the fact that that's pretty much the only color your eye sees, and add shape to it! Walls get a tad bit repetitive and please, PLEASE use the BUILD Prefix so others can find it easier
     
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    B02builder Well-Known Adventurer

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    Thanks for the feedback! I was posting from a mobile because no wifi and forgot the prefix.
     
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    Chino Famous Adventurer VIP+

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    Oh man that is a great castle
     
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    SK Abstract Adept Architect

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    Details are a bit repetitive, perhaps because it's on a desert, create some asymmetry by adding dead bushes (Scaled), or Bedrock Spikes, Sand Spikes etc. Even with a few levels of Terrain you have there, the volume isn't enough to contrast with the ever so flat and square castle, so to counter these problems add more natural additions. You can even ruin a wall of the castle by punching out random holes, or adding some "Fire," etc. These are just ideas, for your improvement. Great idea though, though I must say Castles are a bit overdone x)
     
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  6. B02builder

    B02builder Well-Known Adventurer

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    Thanks for the suggestions! What would you think of the build if I moved it to the center of an oasis with a market built up around it?
     
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    It's a good build. I don't know if adding more color is the best way to go. The sand color makes the castle fits in the desert environment. More color contrast is probably better. Maybe use a few kind of light color to make a pattern on the wall. The important thing is the contrast, it's boring to look at a build if it's only consist of one color.

    The detail is good, can't say bad. But maybe it can be better if there are some more alternative patterns.

    Overall, it's still a nice build. XD
     
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  8. Coolfood

    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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    Very cool atmosphere. I like where the build could go
     
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    SK Abstract Adept Architect

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    Honestly, with it's current abilities and current block's, I don't think it would fit in an oasis at all. I mean, it's built to be on barren land, not oasis. However, Market stalls are always a good idea, even if it's in the middle of the desert. Perhaps add some wells (Empty), or some nearby street lamps, houses aswell.
     
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