Build Builds (mostly) From Zivvia!

So, after I applied for WC Builder several months ago, I
realized all the builds that I was showing in it were HORRIBLE.
So after that, I've been building a lot of way better stuff that I might put in my next application,
and I thought I'd show them to some fellow Wynners. Also, it isn't just builds, I added lore
and stuff, and invented my own province; Zivvia (I know the name
is not at all creative, just deal with it) and I suppose you'll learn
some Zivvian knowledge and history from this. Anyways, here
they are:
Click Here!

Spoiler: Name Origins

Zivvia: My name, Ziv44
Ziv the Forty-Fourth: My name, Ziv44
Saint Aries: Scientific name for sheep; Olvis Aries
Olvist: Scientific name for sheep; Olvis Aries
Chafs: German word for sheep scrambled
Peesh Oveja: Sheep scrambled, spanish word for sheep
Dalebor: Erebor + Dale (LOTR/The Hobbit Cities)
Elad: Dale backwards
Cedars: Sacred scrambled
Blingos: Goblins scrambled

So that's it. I would really like some feedback, It's great to hear how much people like it, but please
leave some constructive criticism to help me get better. Thanks!​

 

I like The lookout tower

 

its all pretty a ok!

 

Thanks! I've seen your builds and you're really good. any suggestions on how to make my builds better?

 

For one of your houses it was oak log and wood spruce, You should use materials that contrast! it just looks better. Example:


As you can see! The one of the right is looks nicer.. simply because It has more colors, Rather then the one on the right, Which is all the same.

 

The builds are very small (besides the ship) and dont contain lots of features. If you want to apply again, try for like 3 mega builds instead of 12 mini builds.

 

Pretty cool! You should use world edit and paste them into one world!



Update: The Zivvian Update - Changelog

Lol

 

Ah, yes. Well that particular one wasn't really one of my best, just a sort of random one that I did when I was bored. Thanks though, I'll be sure to keep that in mind.

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Yeah, I have some bigger ones that I'm currently working on.

 

I quite like the big tree. It looks cool I think and if you had a forest of smaller trees with that large in the centre it could be a very nice build

 

I am actually working on a part of "The Deepwoods" and a harvesting camp, I'm just sort of procrastinating bc the trees are so tedious to build. But I'll be sure to put it here when i finish

 

So the one on the right has more colors, yet the one on the right has all the same colors?

 

It has a different shade more like. The one on the right has oak wood, rather than spruce.

 

I knew about the wood contrasts, but read this closely.

 

The Ship and the Jungle Canyons Tower are pretty neat!

 

I like the interior of the church, it's very... Church-ish.

 

I was drunk :(