Apply For Build Team /take 2

this my build take 2 i made it alot better

 

theres gonna be a 3rd take probs by tomarow
cause ima make it AMAZING

 

You should watch Grian's Build tips- If you look at the Wynn world, you'll see that they have crazy builds. A certainly good build that you should base yours off of, for example, would be Green254's Fantasy Cave.

 

ima make it better trust me i been working on it i just came to check comments

 

Watch these

 

comment if u want me to show u want i have done so far

 

No offense, but this build is really plain. Take a look at the buildings in Wynncraft and compare them to the ones you made. You're also going to need a lot more pictures than that. Most people show ~10 builds, with only a few pictures of each build. You'll need a lot more practice and effort than that to create builds that are build-team worthy. Try watching tutorials and looking at builds others have made in Minecraft, and build based off of those but not 'copying' it. Here are some builds I have made, you can try to get some inspiration off of those.
http://imgur.com/a/ZLvqy