Alien: Isolation

K well I'm not gonna post this in Your Work, coz it's not done
HOWEVER
I would like some feedback on the mechanics of the game that I'm creating
(If you haven't guessed, I'm making Alien: Isolation in MC)
I will plan on having 3 gamemodes: 2Player versus (Alien vs Human), 2Player Co-op, and Singleplayer.
The ArmorStand floating in the air is the Alien.
So far, my mechanics are:
- When you sneak, you are invisible
- When you sprint, you are given glowing
- When you walk, you will play the default footsteps and will be easier to hear
- If you get too close to the Alien (2 blocks) you will die regardless of if you are sneaking
- If you stand inside a locker, you will be safe from the 2block radius killing thingy
- When the Alien is close to you, your heartbeat will get louder & when the Alien moves away from you, your heartbeat gets softer.

When you get into the map, do /scoreboard teams join Player

Download link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/2822ltiisvsfxts/Alien__Isolation.zip
KEEP IN MIND THAT THIS IS LITERALLY JUST A TEST
I WANT TO SEE IF PEOPLE THINK THESE MECHANICS ARE FAIR

 

how do you make it work? i just spawn in a flat world and nothing happens

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ok nvm i figured it out

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also the glowing thing doesn't seem to be working, i have been running around, the mechanics seem good so ye

 

Glowing thingy only works if you're in the team Player.
do /scoreboard teams join Player
Then you should be able to sprint and glow.
Right now I'm working on the actual weapons of the Alien and the Human.

 

yeah i did that, it didn't work unless i used that, but glowing wasn't working

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death also works fine, only problem there is right now is with the glowing i think

 

I like the mechanics, but there are a couple of things I would change. As you might have noticed, you are hidden even though you're next to the locker. I'd recommend making the radius 1-2 blocks instead of 3. And also, you can click the "needs redstone" button to make it "always active", meaning that you dont need the redstone blocks on top.