Build A Town I'm Working On

After showing the terrain from a past thread I redid some of the terrain and started building the town. Please leave suggestions!

 

Very nice build! I think calling it a town is a bit of a stretch as its like 3-4 tents,
but anyway past that actual critiscism

In the circled area, firstly some grass is underwater, idk if you wanted that just grass wont grow underwater
Second the bigger circle, the terrain sorta unnaturally expands wayyy high up in just that area, while being smoothed and level in others

 

I think it's really cool actually but you have given yourself very limited space to work on and as @(Meric) said you can't call that a town.

 

Is village better?

 

I especially like the variety of blocks used in the rock formations on the islands. Its just too bad though that those builds on the surrounding plots have to be in the background - they're quite distracting..

 

I really like how the mineshaft thing is 2 stories.

 

I noticed that lol. What is that stripy thing in the background supposed to be do you think?

 

Good shit. Please update when that bumblebee building gets finished, I'd love to see the whole thing.

 

Great work! I'd say that your ships are a bit too back-heavy right now, and maybe raise the middle/ front sections up a bit

 

That bumblebees thing isn't mine. It was a building plot in the background from another player. But I do have another build in the works and will be posting the terrain once it's finished.

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Can definitely agree with that now that you point it out.

 

your boats will sink and they look really flimsy

other than that it's cool

 

I like it quite alot, in my eyes, the only minor flaws are the shapes of the boats, because they seen to be a little too submerged in the water. Other than that, I completely love it!

 

This build is really nice. If u where to put it somewhere on the Wynncraft map, where would u put it?

 

I honestly think this looks straight out from the Wynncraft world. The flaws are few, and it's ok. Not everything is perfect!

 

Probably near Selchar