Build A Sneak Peak Of Sorts

feed back pls, thought it isnt quite done, ill upload the finished build when it's done

 

It looks a little messy/overcrowded with blocks. Try using less spruce plank blocks and give it a bit of a tidy up :)

 

its from a rly weird angle as the other half isnt actually done xD

though that was kinda the point, i quite like it when it's a bit messier

 

Fair enough. Each to their own I suppose. I understand some prefer it like that.

 

ye i like my builds with to be more blended and complex, i hate stark contrast

 

So as an example, you'd hate something like this? (Pay no attention to the terrain, it's gross--just the building)
(genuinely curious, please don't hate me xD)

If so, I couldn't really provide any other critique then--as your preferences are too vastly different
Keep up the enthusiasm though :)

 

it looks a bit simple to me, but i was exaggerating when i said i hate it,

 

Oh I see. That is certainly fair enough for someone who prefers the packed detailing.
Anyway, keep it up! :)

 

thanks, ill try to make them a bit less complex when i make some future builds

 

I do agree with pearl on this. Although you do like it messy, try to easy it up on the eyes by using a different wood instead of spruce everywhere. It looks like a promising build though, keep up the work.

 

Oh yes Jamie likes what Jamie sees