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A Fanfiction About Wynncraft (post 2)

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Skywalkinerate, Apr 25, 2018.

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is it okay?

  1. yes, it looks great

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  2. no, it sucks

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  3. i don't know, i need to read the full chapter first

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  1. Skywalkinerate

    Skywalkinerate For The Wynn

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    Here we are again, a little update on what's to come, hope you guys enjoy! Comment below what do you think.

    The zombies fell one after another but more were coming. When they killed one, two more arrived. Soon they all got surrounded.

    'We are done for... Thank you for freeing me though.' The Knight said, signing in defeat.

    'No! Arrow Strom.' Hearolie shouted, spinning around as the others ducked. His arrows fired numbers that are too many to count and he successfully killed a ring of zombies. He panted, the attack drained a lot of his energy.

    'My heal spell is useless right now.' Reygina said. She continue to blast zombie heads one by one. However she too began to tire, her legs wobbled a bit. She had been attacking without stopping for too long. Wolfred nuzzles her, encouraging her to not give in.

    'Skywalker, looks like we have to make our spell move count.' Krisstal said, kicking a zombie right in its chest.

    'Indeed so, you four brace yourselves!' Skywalker shouted. 'On your mark,Krisstal!' He raised his weapon, so as Krisstal.

    They waited for just the right moment where the ring of zombie is in perfect range.
    Skywalker threw his dagger to the ground, while Krisstal slammed her spear to the ground.

    'Bash!'

    'Whirlwind!'

    The two simultaneously released their move. The remaining zombies got blasted backwards. Some died instantly by the combined spell attack while others hit the stone walls so hard that a sickening crack could be heard, they too were motionless soon after.

    'Awesome job everyone.' He gave a fist bump to Krisstal which she gladly did the same. The two sweated a bit from unleashing their attack.

    'Now I can use my heal spell.' Reygina said. Though still recovering, she raised her wand and blue snowflakes like projectiles appeared and surrounded all of them. They slowly felt their strength and stamina returning a bit quicker. Even the wounds of the soldiers were healed completely.

    However their victory was short lived, as more zombies appeared from the entrance of the underground mines. They moved slowly as they groaned and moaned louder by each passing second, as if wanting to avenge their fallen comrades. They out numbered the soldiers ten to one. Seeing no other choice, the soldiers decided it's time for flight. They darted ahead, knowing dragging this fight any longer will lead them at a disadvantage.

    to be continued...(even though i wrote most of it already)
     
  2. ThomAnn100

    ThomAnn100 I have reached peak intelligence VIP+

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    You know the story is good if Wynn is communist in it!
     
  3. Skywalkinerate

    Skywalkinerate For The Wynn

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    Lmao. Still I want to address your concern, the story itself is based on Wynn, it's the backbone of my story , like how the overall story progress but the details and actions involved will be different , in fact different in a major way in some parts in the future , just that I haven't got to that stage yet.I'm sorry if my story dissapointed you or anything , I'll will keep your comment deeply , thanks for commenting though , helps me improve .thank you
     
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    Thunder Chief Thunder HERO

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    https://forums.wynncraft.com/forums/your-work.75/
     
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  5. Skywalkinerate

    Skywalkinerate For The Wynn

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    Stormarend The classes DO NOT correspond with the elements.

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    Wait does this mean that every time we use a spell in Wynncraft we shout its name even though it's just a physical attack like bash, uppercut or multihit?
     
  7. HoboMaggot

    HoboMaggot . ę̸͚̳̙̳̠͖̳̓̇̄̓͂̂̆ VIP+

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    Yes actually
    Proven by Bob:
     
  8. Spinel

    Spinel Pronounced Spin-nell, not Spine-el VIP+

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    Even though he says it in Wynnic, but I have no idea how you would pronounce anything in wynnic
     
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    euouae euouae VIP Item Team

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    You would pronounce it UOYtgtfgHhIngthuYgtbJiuRFcvkI!!!!*$
     
  10. Skywalkinerate

    Skywalkinerate For The Wynn

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    Thx for helping me reply, your attention to detail is amazing
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    Which is why I have to write it in English
     
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    Stormarend The classes DO NOT correspond with the elements.

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    Theorick and like everyone else don't though.
     
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  12. Skywalkinerate

    Skywalkinerate For The Wynn

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    Yes , well it's a bit inconsistent in this case. So I assume spell casting can be done, with saying the spell out like Bob , or without saying the spell out like Theorick. Thanks for bring up this issue
     
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