Build A Dark Kingdom

So i builded this big kingdom this time.

 

Nice! Looks corrupted. I'd give it 8/10

 

It is Corrupted

 

Yeah, and you did a good job on making it look like this!

 

it took like 4 hours

 

Looks corrupted enough to give it a like.

 

Great, but here's a tip for next time:
After attaching the files, click "full image" or "thumbnail" for each one, it will be a lot easier to see them. Or upload all the files and then click "display all" as "full image" or "thumbnail".

 

thx for knowlege

 

Hey there, nice build!
Here's some criticism.
The walls in the castle are very bland, put more detail into them.
Bedrock is also a very ugly looking block, I'd recommend using it sparingly and find another block to put there in its place.
Some parts of the build are pretty good, such as the interior of the houses, but the outside, could again, use some more detail.
Basically my only gripe with this build is the lack of detail. Good intentions, bad execution.

Now I'm not expecting you to magically make it amazing overnight, that's impossible. But you could use these tips for help on later builds

 

To add to this,
He needs to add more creativity and design with the lighting of the structure, that's what makes the build stand out more.
I agree that bedrock is a very ugly block, but it does go slightly well if mixed with other dark blocks.
A dark castle/kingdom was a very hard task. I hope he doesn't get hated in the future of this thread.
If you want better walls, go to Grian's youtube channel, and find his video about walls, there you can learn off of him and create some awesome better walls to your build.
I'd also recommend that he should be adding random sploches of netherrack lighted on fire, to give it a more miserable and scary looking effect.
Also, Ollithespiker, you should not use 1 block too much in your build, it makes it more bland.
~Rust

 

I think that i did pretty good making it look dark Android corrupted And also there isnt much dark Block in the game.

 

But remember, just because the theme is dark, doesn't mean you have to go dark all the way.

 

Go cheek my newest build Corrupted mansion.
And say if im improved.

 

Ok, I will.

 

48/100 FlubScore™ "Lacks overall detail"
•Needs finer shaping
•Houses need more detail
•Proper Terra would be nice
•Trees? Dead ones?
•Light maybe? Lava?

Note: FlubScore™ rates Wynncraft currently at a solid 80/100. Most builds I see don't get above 20.