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Looking for feedback on some minecraft builds

Discussion in 'Minecraft' started by Avallon, Jan 27, 2023.

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What do you think about those builds

  1. Not bad

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  2. Eh

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  3. Yes bad

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  1. Avallon

    Avallon Me

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    Title pretty self explanatory. I made a bunch of builds and I would like to know how how can I improve :) I even made some of them with the Wynncraft resourcepack. Negative (but constructive) feedback appreciated! I you would like to see some more screenshots feel free to ask.
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  2. shacers

    shacers no longer replying VIP+

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    all i have is positive feedback. everything looks nice, not too simple not too detailed all very good!

    however i would like to encourage you to build different, of course unless this look is your style i encourage you to chase the wilder looks with different themes
     
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  3. RunCrumpetRun

    RunCrumpetRun Skilled Adventurer

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  4. Avallon

    Avallon Me

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    Thanks! Is there something specific that you think could be improved?
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    Thanks a lot man!
     
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  5. Krooza

    Krooza Professional dumbass HERO

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    Dude you're so lucky to have this talent
     
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  6. Avallon

    Avallon Me

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    I’m extremely glad to hear that :)
     
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  7. Zag

    Zag Hunter | Warrior | Dark Wizard CHAMPION

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    I really dig the third and fifth pictures that third one the path looks good, i like the use of the buttons and for the fifth one gives me a rune vibe like or like a dead zone vibe if that makes any sense. Always i like ur builds in general nice job :)
     
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  8. Avallon

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    Thanks :D
     
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  9. StealWynncraft

    StealWynncraft Well-Known Adventurer CHAMPION

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    It all looks really nice and i hope to see more work but for feedback:

    For the leave decoration on your House you might wanna mix it up a little with diffrent leaves to give it more depth and color(like you did at the last picture)

    For the Tower u made i'm not sure what kind of Roof style u were going for but maybe elevate it a little and make it wider
     
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  10. Avallon

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    Thank you very much for feedback! Every single piece of it is valuable to me.
     
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  11. Teresa Byrd

    Teresa Byrd Newbie Adventurer

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    Everything looks really awesome! The shapes and architecture are very cool. I'll probably try to do something similar in my own world. ✨
     
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  12. Sy1veon

    Sy1veon Skilled Adventurer

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    Nice! These look great!
     
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  13. Krooza

    Krooza Professional dumbass HERO

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    Why is this thread still so active lol
     
  14. Avallon

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    wdym it's been only 7 months xd.
    those builds manager to get me builder rank already but ig feedback is still cool, although tbh honest i wouldn't mind if someone pointed out actual defects in my builds
     
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  15. Deusphage

    Deusphage gruesome grue Modeler CHAMPION Builder

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  16. Avallon

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    Oh god
     
  17. AgentEmerald0028

    AgentEmerald0028 From Italy with love

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    First of all I gotta say your building skills are wonderful mate, very well done. Although I believe that there are as well some little details you could improve, but really not much, it's just small things, the shape and style and palette of your buildings are perfectly on point.

    In the first build I think that the copper / stripped logs in the roof should be ever so slightly wider. By that I mean that leaving it as it is that wooden overhang looks like a thin board where the other blocks are standing on instead of being an extension of the main roof, so this problem I believe can be solved by increasing the diameter of the copper / stripped logs.

    In the second building I have nothing to point out.

    In the third build the top floor of the wooden building looks weird as its "modules" are all four blocks wide while the last is five blocks wide. Yes, asymmetry can look really good sometimes, but to certain extent only. In this case I'd advise to leave the middle modules four blocks wide and to make the lateral modules both five blocks wide, so that you keep that nice overhang.

    In the fourth build the leaves on the birch trees are kinda unnatural; I'd remove them completely or if you want to leave the feel that the leaves are decaying spread them out more evenly over the trunk.

    The fifth build has a bit of a depth problem; I'd add some trapdoors on the facade as well as making the leaves under the roof more dangly or make them wrap around over the roof too.

    Other than that, as I said, your work is wonderful; despite considering myself a pretty decent builder I doubt I could ever make some things in my builds look as good as yours. I'm particularly impressed by the style of your roofs and your texturing, in my opinion they are even 11/10. I hope I have helped!
     
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  18. Avallon

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    Thank you so much! Your feedback is very much appreciated. I will consider it.
     
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  19. DrGREEN

    DrGREEN wynncraft.wiki.gg is where its AT CHAMPION

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    This thread finally has meaning!!
     
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