Archer/Hunter looking for feedback on this build

Helloo! I'm not a crafter and I'm not good at creating builds, but I have decided to try and make one anyway with a crafted bow and helmet

https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/build...01cC1001iO1000FU10066C130c050D0J030--h-YNdd40

WynnBuilder build:
> Intensity
> Vaward [f6f6e6]
> Diamond Fusion Necklace
> Gale's Freedom [t6t6e6]
> SpiritDancer [a6a6]
> Silver Static Bracelet
> Moon Pool Circlet
> CR-19F9g8wAs8vAY9g91 [w6w6e6]
> CR-19a9u9vApAeAL9b90 [t6t6f6]

I've added the tomes that I'm currently using there. The only bad thing about this build that I can see are HP regen and lack of sustain (maybe Mana regen as well if 40/5s is not enough), but I'm already overly reliant on hp (and mana) pots, so idk.

I'm hoping to get some feedback to improve this shitty build of mine :D

 

not really feedback but...
here's a decent archer build with crafted bow
https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/build...09I10009I10009I1004fI0z0z0+0+0+0+0--lDButg3f0
WynnBuilder build:
> Morph-Stardust
> Libra
> Equalizer
> Capricorn
> Draoi Fair
> Summa
> Prowess
> Tenuto
> CR-16Y9N7878A57B9P91 [w6w6w6]

and with crafted legs
https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/build...09I10009I10009I1004fI0z0z0+0+0+0+0--lDButg3f0
WynnBuilder build:
> Morph-Stardust
> Libra
> CR-196679F6I9g9g9i91
> Capricorn
> Draoi Fair
> Summa
> Prowess
> Tenuto
> CR-16Y9N7878A57B9P91 [w6w6w6]

 

They're very interesting! Trapper isn't really my thing, but I could give them a try.