Archer/Hunter Rate my Sharpshooter build

(can't post a link yet since i don't post often enough so here's an ss, if you wanna see anything more then ask)
(7 Focus is on btw) Tried to get some decent sustain and ehp in but also not losing too much dps, my ability tree is probably not very optimal but it seems pretty fun. I'm not sure if its a smart idea but I thought about dropping my sustain completely and just end up relying on pots by swapping Soulflare with Starglass and maybe somehow incorporating Sizzling Shawl into it without getting into negative hp regen

 

i put the build in and it showed me different results so what you put in, can you send your tree and your tomes?
Edit: forgot to mention that you shouldn't show your build with buffs

 

here, for Tomes i kinda put in whatever, i really don't know what they all do yet because i haven't really done raids that much yet, either way i at least know that some gave skill points which i believe were required for me to have, also i put the focus on 7/7 to see the crepuscular ray damage output since that's like one of my favourite abilities by far, but ill keep that in mind

 

your build for reference
https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/build...006C10006C10006C10006C1004fIzz++++--BFPp9noM0
WynnBuilder build:
> Cancer֎
> Soulflare
> Efteling
> Capricorn
> Diamond Hydro Ring
> Diamond Hydro Ring
> Diamond Hydro Bracelet
> Diamond Hydro Necklace
> Spring [w6w6w6]
usually escape is better for fighting than grapple, but its up to preference (grapple unlocks more angels)
also, there is more than enough mana sustain, so you can prob take out those dhydro accs
this should be enough for ray-ray-ray-angels cycle
https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/build...0Ji0Qv0F-O271V1D1g00001004fIzz++++--FzaDd4Xj0
WynnBuilder build:
> Cancer֎
> Starglass
> Efteling
> Capricorn
> Moon Pool Circlet
> Diamond Hydro Ring
> Anya's Penumbra
> Contrast
> Spring [w6w6w6]